ext_206133 ([identity profile] florencia7.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dwgm 2010-01-20 01:47 pm (UTC)

This is STUNNING! Every line. You painted Jack in that scene so truly, deeply, with such terrific intensity, and yet in such an amazingly subtle way.

"Fragile. That's a new one." - I loved this.

And then the reality sinking in, the repetion of "remembers", this entire sentence is MAGIC. Finally, Gibbs as the "keeper of the Illusion".

Amazing AMAZING drabble! I LOVE it.

*saves to memories*

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