ext_18104 ([identity profile] compassrose7577.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dwgm 2007-08-09 01:30 pm (UTC)

Finally, the distractions ended!

Wonderful piece, as always. I love the little hints of the tender, 'good-man' Jack that we all know exists. It's not a pretty business, but he stuck it through--true errant knight that he is.

The little bits: sullied shirt, long drinks, ward looks, lingering kiss on the hand----it's wonderful! But then, it always is. Didn't eat my breakfast until after I read (heaven knows I could live off the fat of the land for a little bit) and it was well worth it.

"I'm not that good a liar." Love it!

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