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dwgm ([personal profile] dwgm) wrote2009-03-07 08:00 am
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Drabble Series: 'An Execrable Business' (57/60 + Epilogue)

500 words, with many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] hereswith for beta reading and suggestions.

Previous bits...

1. Tortuga
2. Happiness
3. Festive
4. Last Minute
5. Calm
6. Truth
7. Bargain
8. Spook
9. Down
10. Wounds
11. Moon
12. Monsters
13. Beauty
14. Name
15. History
16. Service
17. Advice
18. Captain
19. Awe
20. Cross
21. Mistake
22. Heroism
23. Gold
24. Echo
25. Greed
26. Advance
27. Challenge
28. Adventure
29. Sentence
30. Treasure
31. North
32. Coat
33. Good and Evil
34. Sickness & Health
35. Lost
36. Court
37. What if?
38. Island
39. That can't be
40. Prophesy
41. Ten Years Later
42. French
43. Deed
44. Tea
45. Scarlett & Giselle
46. Link
47. Comedy
48. Mothers
49. Fathers
50. Rib
51. Music
52. Magic
53. Pirate King
54. Freedom
55. Sea Shanties
56. Isla de Muerta




And here's today's...

57. Tragedy


~ An Execrable Business, continued...


"Nell! Nell!"

No response.

Jack had found her insensible, limp and white, and he'd snatched her up and laid her on the bed. In mounting fear, he repeated the sharp summons and gently slapped her cheeks. Finally she breathed deep, grimacing. "There's my bonny wench," he muttered encouragingly. Her eyelids fluttered as he began to chafe her hands. Some color returned to her face. "What a bloodthirsty little hellcat you are, shoot the bastards soon as look at 'em, and save questions for later, eh, darlin'? Stap me if I ever saw the like."

The men who'd accompanied him were taking the corpse out, and unfortunately she saw. It wasn't pretty, and she gave a devastated cry.

"Don't bloody look at it," he scolded, pulling her up and cradling her against his shoulder. "You did fine, there was nothing for it, lass, you did what you had to do." He held her close, rocking her as she wept.

Presently Ragetti came into the cabin, carrying a squirming Giselle. "Found her coming up from the hold, I think she was headed back here to Miss Nell, Cap'n."

"Sure she was, thank you, Ragetti," said Jack. "See love, the wee beastie is here for you."

Nell gathered herself a bit and accepted the cat. "Oh, yes, she was so frightened, the poor darling. I'm s-sorry I'm so stupid. I can't seem to stop crying."

"Captain, you're needed on deck," came Bill Turner's voice from the door with some urgency. "Barbossa's caught one of those boys that was on lookout and vows he'll flay the hide off 'im within the hour."

Jack swore, long and foul, mostly in foreign tongues, then said, "Nell, will you do? Giselle will stay, and all's safe now, give you my word."

"Yes, you must go!" Nell told him. "I'll be fine."

It was hours later, the black hour before dawn, when Jack was finally able to come to the cabin to comfort Nell again, and to take a short rest. Barbossa was put off for the moment, judgment of the lookouts having been postponed until the following day. The lock on Jack's cabin had been fixed, the blood and brains mopped up, and Nell lay small and shivering in his bed, Giselle nowhere in sight.

Jack stripped off his clothes and joined Nell under the covers, pulling her close against him, giving her his warmth and strength. She merely clung to him at first, but then their hands began to move over each other in the ways that were now so familiar – familiar, but with a difference. A desperate, reckless need altered their destination.

"No, sweeting," he whispered when he realized. But she would have none.

"Yes! Jack, please!" And she arched and opened beneath him, her hands catching him, drawing him to her.

It was unbearable; battle-weary and grieved, he bloody ached with it. His eyes closed, and his arms tightened around her. "No," he said again, but with less conviction.

"Yes!"

"Nell—"

"Yes!"

"Yes."




TBC...

[identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com 2009-03-07 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Nothing in the world like death to charge one's desire. Nell's quite the girl--and Jack is not made of stone. Passion burns real fine when you've looked at the alternative. I'm thinkin' there's a bit of heartbreak coming in what you've writ, word bittersweet will always mean Jack to me, very touching, Miz Ge-ma. As always, part of me wants the book to never end.
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[identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com 2009-03-07 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Death does tend to color things in a different light. Thank you for commenting so quickly -- I'm glad the scene worked for you.

And Yay! for your mad html skillz! *hugs*