Pirates vs. RL

Enjoyed this very much, esp. this line: "It was, of course, just possible on that occasion that her virginal youth and beauty had been enough to cloud his vision, cause him to forget she’d had it in for him from their first meeting on the dock at Port Royal: startled appreciation of his efforts transmuted to taut fury at the touch of the shackles’ chain." When you write, it's like I can see the pictures in my mind. You always leave me wanting more! :-)