Ooh! What a treat. "Dazed and dripping on the dock at Port Royal" Dazed indeed. There are more little nuances that I'd like to point out here as well, but others have already done it for me, so I'll leave it at that.
I really cannot wait to know the aftermath of that kiss!
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Date: 2007-02-28 12:49 am (UTC)I really cannot wait to know the aftermath of that kiss!