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400 words for this next bit of Jack!plans, referencing the 'Service' theme, with thanks, again, to [livejournal.com profile] hereswith for beta reading!

1. Tortuga
2. Happiness
3. Festive
4. Last Minute
5. Calm
6. Truth
7. Bargain
8. Spook
9. Down
10. Wounds
11. Moon
12. Monsters
13. Beauty
14. Name
15. History
16. Service



~ An Execrable Business, continued...


The look on Nell’s face at these words was priceless. “You’d do that for me?” she squeaked. Jack observed that she was strongly tempted to throw her arms about him, and though she resisted for modesty’s sake, it was a good sign, boding well for things to come.

There were some trifling details to work out, of course.

Some of the crew wouldn’t like him bringing a lass aboard, or even a “cabin boy” if her disguise was preserved for the present, though Jack didn’t really think that would fadge for long. And Barbossa would harp about Jack being “soft”, as per usual.

But there were others who’d be pleased, even ecstatic.

Bootstrap, in particular. He’d been making noises about leaving of late, leaving the Pearl and signing on with another ship to take him “home” to see Mary and little Will – who wasn’t so little now, come to think of it, wasn’t he Anamaria’s age, or thereabouts? Well, Jack couldn’t have it. He needed Bill, needed his sword arm, his sailing skill, his (mostly) level head. His loyalty. His friendship. Of course, Bill would no doubt view with disapprobation a prospective liaison between Nell and Jack. But that could be got around.

And there were plenty of others who’d been waxing nostalgic for Merrie Olde England, quite forgetting the notoriously horrid weather (though they’d arrive in summer if they left now, thank God fasting) and more important, the various, and often very dire reasons they’d abandoned that “blessed plot” in the first place.

And what better time could there be? They’d been out pirating an unconscionably long time this last voyage and the Pearl had been stuffed to the scuppers with swag when they’d arrived in Tortuga. Much of it was sold off, now, and they’d had a distribution of shares just the previous morning. The lads were presently scattered all over the town, busy as spendthrift bees– he had been himself, before he’d run across Nell last night – and in a few days they wouldn’t have a groat left if they went on like that. Why, they’d thank him for it, in the end!

And Nell, too, would no doubt be suitably grateful to her benefactor.

Charity shall cover the multitude of sins,” quoted Jack, “and the good Lord knows I’ve multitudes and to spare. You’ll be doing me a favor, darlin’. You have my word on it.”




TBC…

Date: 2009-01-25 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stealmybike.livejournal.com
Another great addition to this tale! So many good things to be said about this one really.

Well, Jack couldn’t have it. He needed Bill, needed his sword arm, his sailing skill, his (mostly) level head. His loyalty. His friendship.

This is a great little look into Jack and Bill's early relationship. I don't think I've read too many fics that includes Jack's feelings about loosing him. So this was very refreshing.

You’ll be doing me a favor, darlin’.

Of course! I just hope he believe that himself. Jack seems to know how to plan everything so that everyone else is doing him a favor ;)

Eager to see what happens next, as always :)

Date: 2009-01-25 04:56 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Jack seems to know how to plan everything so that everyone else is doing him a favor ;)

True enough, and of course he's very adaptable to circumstances, which helps. Always thinking, is Jack, which works most of the time. *g*

So happy you enjoyed this installment! Thank you for commenting!!

Date: 2009-01-25 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kseenaa.livejournal.com
A small note about Bill and Jack's friendship! :-D And Barbossa! And... and... Wee! So well written! :-D

Date: 2009-01-25 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aravah.livejournal.com
LOL! I love the way Jack's mind works.

Still enjoying every word, and eager for more. :)

Date: 2009-01-25 06:35 pm (UTC)
ext_18053: (jacksword)
From: [identity profile] djarum99.livejournal.com
Oooh - Bootstrap to deal with, the dangers of visiting England, and of course Jack's tendency to overestimate his considerable appeal, at times (though he usually compensates with guile). I love the mention of his friendship with Bill and what that means to him, and his designs on Nell :-)

Wonderful as always ♥

Date: 2009-01-25 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
"for modesty’s sake, it was a good sign, boding well for things to come."
Wicked Jack--What's in it for him indeed! Here's hoping Nell figures out the right questions to ask. Jack can tell someone to jump in a lake and make them long for the swim, so....

"He needed Bill, ...His loyalty. His friendship. Of course, Bill would no doubt view with disapprobation a prospective liaison between Nell and Jack. But that could be got around." Now there will be a dressing down to burn Jack's ears off! His work is cut out for him to justify to Bill.

"Why, they’d thank him for it, in the end!
And Nell, too, would no doubt be suitably grateful to her benefactor."
I'm stunned at how much of an optimist Jack can be, even for Jack!
Feels like we're just nearing the top of the first big rollercoaster drop, I'm excited. Thanks


Date: 2009-01-26 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary684.livejournal.com
You just gotta love how he plots and plans and sees (mostly) all the obstacles and still, STILL manages to be completely optimistic that he can pull it all off to his liking. Bloody briliant!

Date: 2009-01-26 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artaxastra.livejournal.com
And now a trip to England! Sucker!

I like little Anamaria very much too. Are we going to see little Will?

Date: 2009-01-26 02:08 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2009-01-26 02:09 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! More coming presently. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Date: 2009-01-26 02:13 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Jack's tendency to overestimate his considerable appeal

I wonder if that's possible? Although, it apparently is, considering canon.

Date: 2009-01-26 02:19 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Jack is a glass-half-full kind of guy at all times. ;) Thank you for your detailed comments -- they are most appreciated!!

Date: 2009-01-26 02:21 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! As I said to Miz Pearlseed, he's a glass-half-full kind of guy. I'm so happy you're enjoying this!

Date: 2009-01-26 02:23 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Will Swimming by ambayuun)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Are we going to see little Will?

Could be. It would certainly be easy enough to fit in a glimpse. *g*

Thank you for reading and commenting --I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Date: 2009-01-26 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mindyracal.livejournal.com
Yeah! Two more of my Favorite POTC characters! I love seeing how things panned out before CotBP....

Date: 2009-01-26 02:52 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
More familiar characters will be coming along presently. So happy you're enjoying this!

Date: 2009-01-27 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] florencia7.livejournal.com
Ohhh Jack's plans are more advanced (and optimistic! lol!) than I thought! I loved his musings - all the ideas running through his head were wonderfully written and... perfect! ^^

And I love how you brought Bill into the story! This is no longer a series of drabbles - it's a true JOURNEY - and a very addictive journey at that.

I love every word! :)

Date: 2009-02-25 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] compassrose7577.livejournal.com
He can share a few multitudes my way!

No!! Well, always my luck.

Lots o' good nauticalness. Always gives me a tingle when Jack gets all salty.

Date: 2009-02-26 02:29 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Nautical!Jack is very hot, as are nearly all iterations of CJS. Thank you for commenting!

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