Managed to come up with 200 words for
hseas_challenge #2: h/c. This is J/E and probably rated 'R', though it's more suggestive than explicit. Many thanks to
hereswith for beta reading!
~ In the Garret of the Rusty Goat ~
“OW! Bloody hell, Lizzie, be careful!”
“I am being careful. Stop being such a child. You’ve been through far worse than this any number of times.”
“Not without vast quantities of rum—aaaaa!”
“You drank nearly all we had. Hush! I’m almost finished. And it would help if you’d stop squirming!”
There was a great deal of muffled cursing and bunching of muscles and white-knuckled gripping of bedclothes during the next minute (or perhaps a trifle longer), but finally it was done.
“There!” Elizabeth said, with satisfaction, laying aside the needle. “Just one more thing.” She took up the bottle, set her hand firmly against the small of his back to hold him, and doused what was left of the rum over the many small wounds on Jack’s now less-than-perfect arse.
He shrieked into the pillow like a girl.
She let him go, and he lifted his head and glared at her over his shoulder. “I don’t bloody care what you prefer, next time I’m going to be on top!”
She chuckled and stretched out beside him on the far-too-narrow cot. “Next time, my love, we’ll check for splinters before we let ourselves get carried away on an unfamiliar floor.”
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~ In the Garret of the Rusty Goat ~
“OW! Bloody hell, Lizzie, be careful!”
“I am being careful. Stop being such a child. You’ve been through far worse than this any number of times.”
“Not without vast quantities of rum—aaaaa!”
“You drank nearly all we had. Hush! I’m almost finished. And it would help if you’d stop squirming!”
There was a great deal of muffled cursing and bunching of muscles and white-knuckled gripping of bedclothes during the next minute (or perhaps a trifle longer), but finally it was done.
“There!” Elizabeth said, with satisfaction, laying aside the needle. “Just one more thing.” She took up the bottle, set her hand firmly against the small of his back to hold him, and doused what was left of the rum over the many small wounds on Jack’s now less-than-perfect arse.
He shrieked into the pillow like a girl.
She let him go, and he lifted his head and glared at her over his shoulder. “I don’t bloody care what you prefer, next time I’m going to be on top!”
She chuckled and stretched out beside him on the far-too-narrow cot. “Next time, my love, we’ll check for splinters before we let ourselves get carried away on an unfamiliar floor.”
~.~
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Date: 2009-02-12 02:05 am (UTC)Poor Jack and his wounded...pride.
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Date: 2009-02-12 02:54 am (UTC)Thank you so much for writing this!
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Date: 2009-02-12 06:45 am (UTC)Loved that *g*
J/E and unfamiliar floors - of course he wound up with splinters. Thanks so much for writing this ♥
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Date: 2009-02-12 12:18 pm (UTC)Oh poor Jack.
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Date: 2009-02-12 12:59 pm (UTC)*snigger*
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Date: 2009-02-12 01:55 pm (UTC)Well, one of them would, but the other way around wouldn't have read so funny. Glad you liked it!
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Date: 2009-02-12 06:09 pm (UTC)yours, Nan.
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Date: 2009-02-12 08:17 pm (UTC)I hope whoever was in charge of that in CotBP heard about it. Almost put me off entirely, until Jack came sailing in. *g*
I'm very glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for letting me know.
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Date: 2009-02-14 03:16 am (UTC)Glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for commenting!
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