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The second part of the Epilogue, 450 words, with profuse thanks to [livejournal.com profile] herewith for the helpful beta read.

The main story...

1. Tortuga
2. Happiness
3. Festive
4. Last Minute
5. Calm
6. Truth
7. Bargain
8. Spook
9. Down
10. Wounds
11. Moon
12. Monsters
13. Beauty
14. Name
15. History
16. Service
17. Advice
18. Captain
19. Awe
20. Cross
21. Mistake
22. Heroism
23. Gold
24. Echo
25. Greed
26. Advance
27. Challenge
28. Adventure
29. Sentence
30. Treasure
31. North
32. Coat
33. Good and Evil
34. Sickness & Health
35. Lost
36. Court
37. What if?
38. Island
39. That can't be
40. Prophesy
41. Ten Years Later
42. French
43. Deed
44. Tea
45. Scarlett & Giselle
46. Link
47. Comedy
48. Mothers
49. Fathers
50. Rib
51. Music
52. Magic
53. Pirate King
54. Freedom
55. Sea Shanties
56. Isla de Muerta
57. Tragedy
58. Sickness
59. Port
60. Rebirth




The first part of the Epilogue was here and the next is under the cut.

Epilogue 2


~ An Execrable Business, continued...


Twins! Madame Pelletier was completely aux anges, the exigencies of the past three months entirely forgotten!

Well, not entirely.

Her daughter was recovering well from what must have been a most difficult lying in – twins, no less, and her mother unable to attend the birth. It was too, too bad. But now the girl was most anxious to hear her parents’ tale of terror and woe on the high seas. Attacked by pirates! Everything stolen! The so beautiful Giselle abducted and forced to serve as a ship’s cat on a filthy pirate vessel! It did not bear thinking of. Madame would not mention the vile threats to her own person, though indeed she had suffered from nervous palpitations for an entire fortnight following the incident.

“Your father was so brave in defending me, my dear! And this in spite of his illness, for he was suffering dreadfully from the ague, which is indigenous to Hispaniola. He would have routed them all if he had not succumbed to the malady at that moment.”

“But Mama! Papa looks to be in the pink of health!”

Madame smiled. “It is very true. Captain Récamier it was that saw Papa’s plight and brought him the cure from the chest of remedies that he had kept secreted from the pirates in his cabin. Jesuit’s Bark it is called. One makes it into a tea, which is taken several times a day. It is most efficacious, your father began to feel better almost at once.”

“Oh, bless the captain! That almost makes up for your terrible losses, for when one has health one has everything!”

“Very true, my love,” Madame agreed. “I am almost ashamed to say that I miss some of my things. So much lost to those horrid men!”

Yet two days later, when a package was delivered to Madame, her transports were almost as great as those produced by her twin grandsons when it was found to contain the jewels that had been stolen from her on the ship, a beautiful collection, but more notable for sentimental than monetary value.

“There is no note, nothing to indicate who sent them. I cannot believe any of those dreadful men would have found it in him to restore them to me, though of course our direction was on each of the trunks they stole. But what other explanation can there be?”

“It is a great mystery, Mama, and I doubt it will ever be solved. You must say a prayer of thanks tonight, that the good God will bless the one who had a change of heart. But now come and look! Nurse says it is only wind, but I believe little Georges is smiling!




On to Epilogue 3 and the conclusion of the story...

Date: 2009-03-12 03:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jillianfish.livejournal.com
Ha. How sweet. Not that that dreadful woman deserved them.

Date: 2009-03-12 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
Well, I hope she doesn't get her kittygato back-harumph! That was such a nice gesture by sweet Nell. She's a good girl still. You know, I enjoy this story so much and it surprizes me still! Yes thank you and my big smile is just that!

Date: 2009-03-13 12:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] florencia7.livejournal.com
So wonderful that we got to see the epilogue from this POV as well! I will miss every single character that you created in this story :]

Date: 2009-03-13 01:12 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate Plot Bunny)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Well, no. But how many people deserve what they have. Or deserve to have their things stolen. A very subjective call.

Date: 2009-03-13 01:13 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate Plot Bunny)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
She wouldn't have sent the kitty back, the woman threw her!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this little bit. One more to go! All read to post in the morning. Thank you for commenting!

Date: 2009-03-13 01:15 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate Plot Bunny)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed this little bit of Madame P. *g* One more to go, I'll post it in the morning. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. :))

Date: 2009-03-17 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kseenaa.livejournal.com
Well... I wonder who it was. Glad to hear about what happend to those, though. :-)

Date: 2009-03-18 07:37 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Default)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
It was Nell. Though she wouldn't send Giselle back, of course. ;)

Date: 2009-03-23 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary684.livejournal.com
Aww, nice of Nell. Jack should take a lesson -- instead I'm afraid he's about to face that 'change in the wind'.

Date: 2009-03-23 02:07 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Cat - Perfectly Calm)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Nell never was a pirate, and only a thief from what she saw as necessity. But she kept Giselle. ;)

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