So descriptive and poetic. "...as the eyes he remembers (and remembers, and remembers)..." LOVE that part. It's such a great literary way of describing being haunted. I'm sure boring through the illusion of Captain Jack Sparrow would be a little scary to not only the viewer, but to Jack himself! And of course he runs to Gibbs. "Fragile. That's a new one." How do you say so much in so few words? This was so intense. Great job.
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Praise from Willofthewisp
Date: 2010-01-21 01:10 am (UTC)