Rain and Pirate!fic
Dec. 5th, 2004 03:33 pmWhat a delightfully rainy day we've been having. True to form, I've been slacking again, sitting about writing Pirate!fic: the next chapter of Harry IV, a Secret Santa story, and the following, for the current
pirates500 challenge: Individuality
He’d never been ordinary, never really fit in. His mother had been of ancient lineage, but a profligate’s by-blow was neither gentry nor commoner, though he’d seemed something of both to most as he grew from boy to young man. Still, eventually, he chose the low road, and soon found he must play the part or risk failure at the very least; at worst, an early death. It was that important, and it was that simple.
The facial hair had grown in slowly, the moustache nicely luxuriant, the curling beard along his jawline less so. It was years before the braids and beads at his chin were possible, but he loved the look when he'd finally achieved them: truly piratical.
By then, of course, his hair was already a work of art, though ever a work-in-progress. Long, then longer, and dark as night, with plaits and mats, beads, bangles, and bones, all held back with his red scarf, once bright, eventually fading from sun, sea, and sweat. The tricorn that topped all was a unique creation, waterproofed leather, presented to him by his darling Molly that first time he’d come to visit her in her new shop, the shop he’d paid for, six months of swag turned to gold to give her that freedom. He’d never regretted it, not for a minute. And he’d never part with his hat.
The big bucket boots were not really ideal for life on a ship, but what did that matter when they so obviously shouted “Buccaneer!”
The rest of his clothing echoed the sentiment, the finest togs he could claim from their prizes. He liked garments that swayed and moved: white lawn or linen shirts with absurdly billowing sleeves, often open to the cooling breeze and, coincidentally, to reveal a bit of smoothly muscled, bronzed chest; the most elaborately embroidered waistcoats he could lay hands on; frock coats in rich colors, and big enough to mask the wide assortment of weaponry he carried, tools of his trade. His trews, however, were often just a little snug, though still permitting of quick ascent of ratlines, and the acrobatics of energetic swordplay.
And over time, his very skin shouted of adventure, both good and ill. Tattoos, swirling, and picturesque, and a varying selection of gold rings piercing his ears (and other, less visible spots), gave testament to nights of drunken bravado (and sheer stupidity in some instances); scars of all kinds told their tales of violence: fierce fighting, and punishment, and the power of a body to heal and endure. Every one of the marks bought with pain, an assurance that he still lived. And that was what mattered, didn’t it?
That, and the image he’d created. Kohl ‘round the eyes, an odd affectation, and almost a summary of his persona: comical, dandified, lackadaisical, and elegant; devil-may-care; a fribble. Put ‘em off their guard, made ‘em careless.
And set him like stone in their memories, which had, of course, been his intention all along.
~.~
Best Intentions
He’d never been ordinary, never really fit in. His mother had been of ancient lineage, but a profligate’s by-blow was neither gentry nor commoner, though he’d seemed something of both to most as he grew from boy to young man. Still, eventually, he chose the low road, and soon found he must play the part or risk failure at the very least; at worst, an early death. It was that important, and it was that simple.
The facial hair had grown in slowly, the moustache nicely luxuriant, the curling beard along his jawline less so. It was years before the braids and beads at his chin were possible, but he loved the look when he'd finally achieved them: truly piratical.
By then, of course, his hair was already a work of art, though ever a work-in-progress. Long, then longer, and dark as night, with plaits and mats, beads, bangles, and bones, all held back with his red scarf, once bright, eventually fading from sun, sea, and sweat. The tricorn that topped all was a unique creation, waterproofed leather, presented to him by his darling Molly that first time he’d come to visit her in her new shop, the shop he’d paid for, six months of swag turned to gold to give her that freedom. He’d never regretted it, not for a minute. And he’d never part with his hat.
The big bucket boots were not really ideal for life on a ship, but what did that matter when they so obviously shouted “Buccaneer!”
The rest of his clothing echoed the sentiment, the finest togs he could claim from their prizes. He liked garments that swayed and moved: white lawn or linen shirts with absurdly billowing sleeves, often open to the cooling breeze and, coincidentally, to reveal a bit of smoothly muscled, bronzed chest; the most elaborately embroidered waistcoats he could lay hands on; frock coats in rich colors, and big enough to mask the wide assortment of weaponry he carried, tools of his trade. His trews, however, were often just a little snug, though still permitting of quick ascent of ratlines, and the acrobatics of energetic swordplay.
And over time, his very skin shouted of adventure, both good and ill. Tattoos, swirling, and picturesque, and a varying selection of gold rings piercing his ears (and other, less visible spots), gave testament to nights of drunken bravado (and sheer stupidity in some instances); scars of all kinds told their tales of violence: fierce fighting, and punishment, and the power of a body to heal and endure. Every one of the marks bought with pain, an assurance that he still lived. And that was what mattered, didn’t it?
That, and the image he’d created. Kohl ‘round the eyes, an odd affectation, and almost a summary of his persona: comical, dandified, lackadaisical, and elegant; devil-may-care; a fribble. Put ‘em off their guard, made ‘em careless.
And set him like stone in their memories, which had, of course, been his intention all along.
~.~
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Date: 2004-12-05 04:04 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-12-05 04:06 pm (UTC)Pretty imagery, great vocabulary; in short: awesome job.
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Date: 2004-12-05 04:25 pm (UTC)So glad you enjoyed the ficlet!
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Date: 2004-12-05 04:29 pm (UTC)I didn't think about that when I wrote it, but I think Jack's whole thing is being several steps ahead of everyone, whenever possible, and his appearance is calculated to convey exactly the impression he wants to give.
Glad you liked it!!
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Date: 2004-12-05 07:18 pm (UTC)Hey how'd you get rain and we didn't? Not fair!
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Date: 2004-12-05 07:40 pm (UTC)Glad you liked the fic. You been reading over at
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Date: 2004-12-05 08:17 pm (UTC)Rain: Maybe we got it last night & I slept thru it. Bummer! But isn't the Green wonderful? I absolutely love it. OK enough chit chat... I have a fic to read...
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Date: 2004-12-05 10:38 pm (UTC)And out of curiosity how likely do you think it is for Jack to be pierced in his --ahem private parts? just wonderin...
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Date: 2004-12-05 10:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-12-05 11:22 pm (UTC)LOL! Well, I left this to the imagination purposely, but I was thinking of the nipple-piercing that is referred to in my story, The Parrot and the Pearl.
Thank you for commenting--I'm glad you enjoyed the ficlet!
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Date: 2004-12-05 11:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-12-06 01:20 am (UTC)*sweeps you a grand bow*
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Date: 2004-12-06 05:30 am (UTC)I'm very happy you enjoyed it so much! Thank you for letting me know. :)
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Date: 2004-12-06 05:36 am (UTC)Pleasant dreams, indeed!
So happy you liked this. Thanks for letting me know. :)
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Date: 2004-12-06 09:11 am (UTC)This is quite wonderful. Delightful! I especially liked the part about his hair. Love Jack's hair. :) Seems to me this has a slightly different feel than most of your writings (what I've read, anyway). Perhaps that's because (as you said) you don't often do anything so heavily descriptive...?
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Date: 2004-12-06 09:17 am (UTC)Yes, I am rather a slacker in that area--I tend to think I should leave most description to the reader's imagination. But I think maybe I should work on that in my writing, as I enjoy others' work in that area.
So happy you enjoyed the ficlet! Thanks for letting me know. :)
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Date: 2004-12-06 09:23 am (UTC)Considering that you're writing about somebody that your audience already knows, I'd hardly call you a slacker! And I see Harry quite clearly - you've thoroughly described her, just not all at once.
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Date: 2004-12-13 08:08 am (UTC)Great holiday pic on your post, btw! Give our greetings to your family, and holiday hugs to you, too. Yay, Alaskan Cruise!