Profuse thanks for the detailed feedback you left at Black Pearl Sails, as well as these additional comments. I corrected that line you pointed out, here, and I'll zoom over to ff.net and correct it there, too. I certainly bow to your expertise in writing present tense -- you do a wonderful job with it in Choices. It was an interesting experiment for me, and I certainly wouldn't mind writing more, as requested. I've written a few J/A stories and drabbles. It's a fun pairing. I'm so very happy you liked this.
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Date: 2005-05-20 06:13 am (UTC)