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This is another one of those gapfiller stories for [livejournal.com profile] artaxastra's too-inspiring Outlaws and Inlaws 'verse. I wrote it a while back, right after she posted Force of Nature, and while the [livejournal.com profile] potcfest was still going on. It’s for Prompt #8: Jack/Elizabeth, earrings, which was requested by [livejournal.com profile] torn_eledhwen. It also happens to fit into my [livejournal.com profile] 10_hurt_comfort table, for the prompt “Tears”. Only two more to go on that! And it’s only been a little over a year, lol!

I waited to post this as it was past the [livejournal.com profile] potcfest deadline anyway, and because it directly follows the developments in Force of Nature. [livejournal.com profile] artaxastra assures me it won't conflict with what she has planned for Jack and Elizabeth as she continues the story, however.

Many thanks, as always, to [livejournal.com profile] hereswith for editing and suggestions.



~ Wake of the Storm ~


After a night of combined hurricane fear and Sparrow bliss, punctuated by catnaps, the new day had brought patchy sunshine, a cool breeze, and the revelation of the destruction the storm had wrought.

It wasn’t as bad as it might have been. There was a great deal of flood damage on the lower levels, one of the docks on the windward side had been battered to splinters, and two ships that had apparently been inadequately tied on the leeward side had been torn from their moorings, foundered, and fetched up on the northwest shore, though it was likely they could be salvaged. There were few deaths, but one of them was Granny Wright, their best seamstress, and a friend since the first week Elizabeth had taken up residence at Shipwreck Cove.

It was Elizabeth who discovered her, the frail body twisted and still. The sight of her there, in the ruin of the back room of her shop, was a grievous blow. Only two days before Elizabeth had brought Jamie down to be fitted for a new jacket of some soft, quilted fabric that had recently been acquired, and Granny had exclaimed in delight over Jamie’s increasing size and charm. All gone now. All gone.

That was early in the day, and, with the lack of sleep juxtaposed with the need to be strong and stoic, it set the tone for the remainder of it. Elizabeth was profoundly thankful that she would occasionally catch sight of Jack striding about, helping wherever he could, his ready smile as much an asset as his capable way of dealing with difficulties, small and large. In truth, he was at his best, happy to be back at the Cove, and happy to be lending a helping hand, or encouragement, or his own inimitable touch of humor, whatever was needed.

Elizabeth did well, too, and showed her mettle that day in spite of her inward dismay at some of the destruction. She was King, and she had no false modesty about her worth. She had proven herself to her people in battle, and she would now prove herself to them in time of peace, with Teague's help -- and Jack's.

By the time the afternoon had worn away toward evening, however, she was very tired indeed. She had barely eaten, and had only stopped to nurse Jamie twice, and these, combined with the lack of sleep the night before, had taken their toll. When she came across two boys sitting on a step, the younger of them sobbing over the limp body of the family's cat that had been trapped and drowned, she found tears of sympathy and weariness stinging behind her eyes.

It wouldn't do. She must go eat, and rest for a while. Maybe for the night -- things were settling down, makeshift repairs and temporary aid being well in hand for the most part. She slipped away from the touching scene on the porch and, alone nearly for the first time that day, began the long, winding climb.

Alone, but not for long. She had just rounded a corner into a narrow corridor when she heard someone catching up behind her. She turned, and smiled with relief. Jack!

He grinned crookedly, caught her arm and pulled her into the shadows of an alcove, and kissed her.

In spite of their accord of the night before, it was unexpected and a delight, and the feel of him, the warmth and scent and strength of him, nearly undid her. Tears threatened again, and she broke the kiss but hugged him close and hid her face against his neck, breathing slow and deep. It wouldn't do!

He hugged her in return, his hands stroking her back in that comforting way she liked. "All right, darlin'? Been a long day."

"Yes," she agreed. She lifted her head and made an effort to smile. "Very long. You must be tired, too."

"Aye, but a bowl of stew and a bit of a lie-in with my lovely liege'll set me up. But look here! I'd forgotten about this."

He released her and she watched him rummage in one of his pockets. He pulled out a small packet and gave it to her.

"What is it?" asked Elizabeth, beginning to unwrap the paper.

"Got them from a chit named Estrella, in Port Royal."

"Estrella?" Elizabeth looked up. "You saw her?"

"Aye, when I was nosing about after the Pearl. Seems she's married a tavern keeper in the town. Most of your old things were confiscated, of course, but she said she managed to save these for you, on the chance she'd see you again."

Elizabeth had got the packet open now, and there were two pale objects inside. She stepped forward, into the lantern light, picked them up and dropped the paper. "They're my mother's earrings," she said, stunned. To see them at this time, in this place...

Thoughts of days past overwhelmed her -- her dear, elegant mother, seated at a dressing table, putting these on, a smile curving the beautiful lips; her father giving them to her on her sixteenth birthday; the painful joy of having her ears pierced so she might wear them at her 'coming out', where James Norrington had made her laugh with his dry wit and his remarks about the callow young men who'd come to dance with the governor's daughter. And she had worn these to Jack's hanging, the day Will had told her for the first time that he loved her, that he had done so since the day they'd met. The day Will had saved Jack. For both of them.

She turned to find Jack looking at her uncertainly, and now she saw that he looked as weary as she felt herself from the ordeal of this day. So much loss. So much grief. "Thank you," she said, but her voice hoarse, and to her consternation and Jack's dismay, her eyes filled with tears and she began to sob.

"Elizabeth!" Jack drew her deep into the shadows and into his arms, and she clung to him, her face pressed against his coat, shaking in the effort to withstand the onslaught, then giving into it when it became clear he was not repulsed by her weakness. His arms tight around her, he was murmuring something into her hair, and though she didn't know what he was saying, it made no difference: she was not alone.

*

"Here, I've a hanky, somewhere."

Snuffling, breath hitching only slightly now, she stood back and let him search his pockets, and presently accepted the only-slightly-used lace-trimmed handkerchief he produced. She dabbed her cheeks until he tsked impatiently, took the hanky and completed the job for her. When he held it to her nose and said, "Blow!" however, she drew the line, taking it back and turning away.

Finished, she straightened, and cleared her throat. "I'll have this washed for you," she said, feeling suddenly awkward. She put the handkerchief in her pocket, and glanced at him, saying ruefully, "A poor creature, am I not?"

He smiled crookedly. "We're all poor creatures some o' the time, love." He stepped close, picked up her hand and pressed his lips to it.

There was nothing for it. She had to hug him again.

He returned the favor, with gratifying alacrity. But he said, "No more weeping, now!"

"No!" She straightened, still in his arms, and breathed deep. "Thank you, Jack."

"You're welcome," he said, and lightly kissed her nose. "Just don't expect me to give you earrings again any time soon."


~.~

Date: 2007-11-19 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cymbeline.livejournal.com
Oh this is beautiful! I love this little universe :D

Date: 2007-11-19 07:04 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I love it, too. I keep getting these ideas, you know? Plot bunnies. What can you do?

I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

Date: 2007-11-19 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] torn-eledhwen.livejournal.com
I do love this. :)

Date: 2007-11-19 07:22 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm so glad! Thanks for the great prompt!

Date: 2007-11-19 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] komandant-krech.livejournal.com
Sweet and sad! Quite a load of memories do those earrings carry... Funny also how little we really know about Liz's mother -- can't remember reading much anything that'd shed light on that subject...

Heh, took me a while to remember who Estrella was -- should obviously re-re-re-watch CotBP again :p

Date: 2007-11-19 08:01 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Estrella is featured in a number of fics, actually, and there has been speculation about Elizabeth's mother, though it's up to us to fill in that story, I guess. Rewatching CotBP shouldn't be too difficult a task, I would think. *G*

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for letting me know.

Date: 2007-11-19 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] komandant-krech.livejournal.com
Ah, then I must've just missed those fics (Estrella & Liz's mother) -- no wonder though, taken how much there is to read!

Yeah, 'Sparrow bliss' alone could be a justification enough for re-watching ;)

Date: 2007-11-20 03:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azulada.livejournal.com
So sweet. I love how you all swoop in and out of the stories. It's a beautiful collaboration!

Date: 2007-11-20 02:52 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! It's a wonderful universe to explore.

Date: 2007-11-20 09:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akarii.livejournal.com
Aw. Nothing like a bit of J/E fluff to make it all right. Thank you, I needed that ...

What I liked about this story - aside from the fact that it satisfies my sweet tooth - is the fact that it shows all the different reasons or circumstances for people to cry. Some cry for grief, some because of anger or fury. Some do it under strain. Some, like me, cry when the worst is over and someone is comforting or helping them. Some do it alone, some always in company.

This is such a nice glimpse into Elizabeth's character and a chapter that makes her even more sympathetic in her eyes. I don't much care for her when she's playing tough (although I admire her determination), but in moments like the one you just described, I like her very much. The fact that her reactions to strain are very similar to mine, to discover similarities, doesn't hurt either.

Date: 2007-11-20 03:03 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I like Elizabeth's strength, but she'd be more (or less) than human if she didn't show a chink in her armor, occasionally. I think she's good at keeping up appearances, but with Jack there's a trust and understanding that allows her to let the mask slip.

I'm so glad you liked this. Thank you for letting me know!

Date: 2007-11-20 09:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p0wdermonkey.livejournal.com
That's lovely. You know I have to be persuaded into J/E, but it doesn't take much persuasion when they're both so in character. I love "no false modesty" and the business with the hanky. I bet Jack's secretly relieved that Liz was the first of them to break down and sob.

Date: 2007-11-20 03:11 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I bet Jack's secretly relieved that Liz was the first of them to break down and sob.

Probably -- their situations, individually and collectively, are certainly angst-ridden enough. Elizabeth's a strong character, but we've seen that she's not impervious to grief. Jack is better at hiding it, but he's a lot older and has been through a lot more in his life. Still, there were hints all through AWE, and I think [livejournal.com profile] artaxastra's 'verse is a logical extrapolation of what we saw in the movies.

I can't wait until the DVD's out here. Do you have it yet? Didn't it come out in England already?

So happy to have persuaded you, here. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Date: 2007-11-21 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p0wdermonkey.livejournal.com
I have the DVD now - huzzah! But I've only had time to watch a little bit. And there don't seem to be ANY commentaries :(

I've been studying the dead Kraken scene for the next Nuts Out story...

Date: 2007-11-21 04:37 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Monkey!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Oooh, you lucky thing. But no commentaries? What are they thinking of? Oh, a three-disc set down the line maybe? No doubt.

Can't wait for your next Nuts Out story -- I love that series. In the meantime... look at this! Monkey!!


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Date: 2007-11-22 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p0wdermonkey.livejournal.com
Eeeeee! Monkey! And little monkey! Just the thing for Barbossa this Christmas...

Date: 2007-11-23 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] faeritales.livejournal.com
next Nuts Out story

Yay!!! ::eagerly anticipates::

Date: 2007-11-26 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p0wdermonkey.livejournal.com
Thanks! Hope you like slashy stuff...

Date: 2007-11-26 02:49 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack Santa by Gryphons_lair)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Well, of course I do -- if it's well written. And I've no doubt yours will be -- it always is.

Date: 2007-11-26 03:07 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - At World's End)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Oh, I see now that you were replying to [livejournal.com profile] faeritales. Never mind. You know what I like.

Date: 2007-11-26 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] faeritales.livejournal.com
My comment much agrees with what [livejournal.com profile] geekmama said! I have no problem with slash! I tend more towards het pairings, usually, but the right story can convince me. :-)

Date: 2007-11-20 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ditte3.livejournal.com
Beautiful.

Date: 2007-11-20 05:31 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!!

Date: 2007-11-21 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artaxastra.livejournal.com
Oh lovely! That's just what I thought the aftermath might be.

Oddly enough, I have a scene that doesn't go with anything about Elizabeth retrieving her mother's earrings. ONE BRAIN!

Jack is being darling, isn't he?

Date: 2007-11-21 04:31 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Jack is being darling, isn't he?

I think Jack's in a really good mood at this point, in spite of minor inconveniences like the aftereffects of the hurricane.

ONE BRAIN!

Ooooh, I am bouncing in anticipation! Can't wait to read it!

Glad you liked this. Thank you for letting me know -- and for creating that universe in the first place. I enjoy it so much!

Date: 2007-11-21 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-di75.livejournal.com
"A poor creature, am I not?"

He smiled crookedly. "We're all poor creatures some o' the time, love."


Just lovely -- what refreshing sweetness both you and artaxastra have woven into an often-angsty 'verse!

... and I love that she has taken to calling Flipper "Jamie" -- my Scottish grandfather is James (Jamie as a boy), my sister Jamie after him :) It's a wonderful name!

Date: 2007-11-21 07:33 pm (UTC)
captaintish: (A Pirate's Life for Me)
From: [personal profile] captaintish
Weren't you the first one to come up with "Jamie" for Young Will Turner? I know I've read it in several people's little universes, and I use it in my own as well, but I have no idea where I saw it first.

After all, I think we've had enough Wills in the family. Got to call him something else. (My own name for him is William James Weatherby Turner, but they call him Jamie.)

Date: 2007-11-21 07:41 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
an often-angsty 'verse!

True, that! If I didn't read and write fanfiction I'd despair of happiness for any of them -- as much as I love watching the films, that's the conclusion I keep arriving at afterwards. But there are moments of happiness even in the darkest situations, and I like to focus on those -- there is enough dark!Jack (and Elizabeth) out there already.

Jamie is a great name -- and Flipper a charming nickname. I keep wondering what Will is going to think of that. *G*

I'm glad you enjoyed this -- thanks for letting me know.

Date: 2007-11-21 07:30 pm (UTC)
captaintish: (Jack & Elizabeth)
From: [personal profile] captaintish
"Just don't expect me to give you earrings again any time soon."

Love that little bit of humor tucked in at the end.

Lovely story. Haven't read Forces of Nature yet. I must admit, I'm a little out of the loop with PotC fic lately. Got any good recs?

You haven't forgotten that Disneyworld picspam, have you? :)

Date: 2007-11-21 09:31 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Forces of Nature is wonderful, and there's a new chapter, Lost at Sea, which is very intriguing, too. I haven't run across too much else that would be rated less than R, but I'll let you know if I do, for sure.

I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thank you so much for letting me know.

Date: 2007-11-24 04:59 am (UTC)
captaintish: (Elizabeth -- Pirate King)
From: [personal profile] captaintish
Yes, I went and read it and Forces of Nature is quite wonderful!

I really am a bit out of the loop with PotC fic. I just haven't been reading it much -- but HEY! the DVD's coming out in about TWO weeks! YAY!

haven't run across too much else that would be rated less than R, but I'll let you know if I do, for sure.

Ah, you know me too well -- or at least my fanfic preferences, anyway! :) THanks!

Date: 2007-11-23 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] faeritales.livejournal.com
her dear, elegant mother, seated at a dressing table, putting these on, a smile curving the beautiful lips; her father giving them to her on her sixteenth birthday; the painful joy of having her ears pierced so she might wear them at her 'coming out', where James Norrington had made her laugh with his dry wit and his remarks about the callow young men who'd come to dance with the governor's daughter. And she had worn these to Jack's hanging, the day Will had told her for the first time that he loved her, that he had done so since the day they'd met. The day Will had saved Jack. For both of them.

What a beautiful image. Such a brief insight into her mother's character, and her own youth, but I can see whole scenes playing out from those few sentences. Or, one sentence, actually. The other sentences I have seen. :-)

I just love this universe so much. So much sorrow, but there's always happiness to be found, and sometimes all you need is someone to hold on to. Beautifully done, as always.

Date: 2007-11-23 04:04 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It is a difficult set of circumstances, but you're right...

sometimes all you need is someone to hold on to

Very well put!

Date: 2010-10-14 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] just-a-dram.livejournal.com
This universe is fabulous. I'm eating it up with a large spoon.

Things that carry memories can evoke such strong emotions.

Date: 2010-10-15 02:33 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - At World's End)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
This universe is fabulous.

It's all [livejournal.com profile] artaxastra's fault, and I do hope you get around to reading her Outlaws and Inlaws series that inspired my little filler fics. It's brilliant (as is all her PotC fic). I was quite at a loss after AWE came out, but she was inspired and it was contagious.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Date: 2010-10-15 02:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] just-a-dram.livejournal.com
I'd love to, however, the series doesn't appear to be tagged on her LJ page and when I followed the link you provided it said the entry wasn't available to me. Thought it might be because I'm not her friend, but I tried that and access was still denied. Hmm...
Edited Date: 2010-10-15 02:40 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-15 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] just-a-dram.livejournal.com
Annnnd I found it at Archive of Our Own. Thanks very much for the rec! I'm sure I'll eat it right up.

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