dwgm: Kimi Birds (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
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I'm writing a Lian and Park backstory fic for [livejournal.com profile] potcfest, and this first introductory bit (which is J/E) goes nicely with the drabble challenge of the week at Black Pearl Sails...



~ Cherry Blossoms ~

Like a layer-cake of paradise, it was: warm, white sand in a secluded cove; a thick, well-used, deliciously comfortable (now slightly stained) red silk quilt; two mostly naked, beautiful, temporarily sated pirates drifting to sleep; clear, sweet sea air with just a hint of cool breeze; the lulling sound of the unseen surf; and the westering sun's benign warmth over all. Paradise.

"Jack?" Elizabeth was obviously less disposed to sleep than he. Ah, the vitality of the very young. Insatiable.

"Hmm?" he replied, not opening his eyes.

"What was it between you and Sao Feng?"

He groaned inwardly, wondering why the devil she'd thought of that at such a time. "Nothing," he murmured, hoping she would leave it.

She didn't. "Why did he hit you? And his handmaidens… why did they laugh when your name was mentioned?"

Jack opened one eye. "Lian and Park?"

"Yes, I think those were the names. Tai Huang told me they were killed in the attack on the bathhouse."

"Killed." Jack's sheen of happiness was rapidly evaporating. Elizabeth sat up, though, and he couldn't help but enjoy the slender beauty of her, the fall of her tousled antique gold hair not quite concealing the perfect, pert breasts. He let his eyes feast, and when she reached for her discarded shirt, was moved to protest, pulling her down beside him. "Belay that, love, you're better without."

"I'll burn. I haven't been in the habit of sunning myself unclothed, as you obviously have."

"Here." He reached behind him for the edge of the quilt and drew it over them both, cuddling up with her cozily. "Now, you settle and I'll tell you the story, all right?"

She smiled, pillowing her head against his shoulder, kissably close, and ran light, disturbing fingers up his side. "All right. I knew there was a story."

He snorted. "Course there's a story. I'm Captain Jack Sparrow, am I not?"

"You are, indeed." She pressed her lips against his, lingeringly, distractingly. "Now tell me."

"Tell you what?" His mind and his free hand had wandered, but she caught the latter and pulled it up to her mouth, placing another kiss on his knuckles.

"After you tell me, pirate. Lian and Park."

"Oh. Right. As you wish, my liege." He nipped at her delicious lower lip. "I'll make it brief, shall I?"



On to Part 2







Many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] hereswith for editing!

Date: 2008-01-28 06:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] komandant-krech.livejournal.com
Hee! This should prove interesting -- what, exactly, was Jack's connection to Lian & Park (obviously I'm thinking the obvious :p), and what, exactly, will he choose to tell _Liz_?

Nice start, love the subtle humor in this too ;)

Date: 2008-01-28 06:06 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thanks! I am usually all about the humor, and the hints we're given certainly point that way. Glad you enjoyed the intro!

Date: 2008-01-28 08:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] torn-eledhwen.livejournal.com
Oooh, I'm looking forward to whatever backstory you give them. :)

Date: 2008-01-28 06:01 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'll try to do my best.

Date: 2008-01-28 09:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p0wdermonkey.livejournal.com
Can't wait for more!
It must be Jack-in-Singapore-week because justawench and I are kicking story and pic ideas for Jack/Sao Feng/Lian/Park backstory. It's such an intriguing hint in canon, isn't it, Sao Feng's rage and the giggling twins? I'm dying to see what you made of it!

Date: 2008-01-28 05:59 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
It is an intriguing hint in canon, but I don't believe I've seen anyone pick up on it. Until now. 0.o

I'm dying to see what you made of it!

And the same back atcha! I'm sure you two will come up with something spectacular!

Date: 2008-01-28 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justawench.livejournal.com
Hee! Is Jack going to have to dance around the truth in order to avoid another quick meeting of palm and visage?

Date: 2008-01-28 11:49 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Only time will tell. ;-)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2008-01-29 06:24 pm (UTC)
captaintish: (Star Trek)
From: [personal profile] captaintish
Oh, cool we finally get the story!! The behind the scenes featurette about the Brethren Court mentions that Jack seduced Sao Feng's handmaidens (and that they're twin sisters), and that that apparently that was the big insult. I didn't know they had names though -- did you make them up, or were they on the DVD too, and I just missed it?

Oh, and um, *clears throat* WDW pics? Hint, hint? :)

Date: 2008-01-29 08:39 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm glad you're enjoying my take on the story. I just watched the featurette and it said Jack stole their hearts, which certainly leaves it open to interpretation. However, yes, there will be a bit of seduction going on in the third part. The second part is up now.

And I haven't forgotten about the WDW pix -- I've just been sick with a chest thing -- fever, horrid cough -- and it makes me lazy. Maybe tonight, though. :)

Date: 2008-01-30 06:50 am (UTC)
captaintish: (A Pirate's Life for Me)
From: [personal profile] captaintish
Jack stole their hearts -- that's right, I knew it was something like that. But seduction....well this is Jack we're talking about. ;)

Hope you're feeling better. That's been going around. I had a very mild version a couple weeks ago. And now there seems to be another round of something going around, cause everyone who was sick a month ago, seems to be getting sick again. *sigh* Anyway, feel better, drink tea, and eat soup!

Date: 2008-01-31 04:15 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I worked a half day today, and will tomorrow, too -- still feeling pretty dragged out. Tea! Yes! Particularly since part three is up and I can light a fire and go watch my new DVD. I kept it PG-13, too!

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