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Well, Las Vegas was fun, although we won't stay at the New Frontier again. Not that it was a bad hotel. We had a mini-suite on the 9th floor of their new Atrium Tower, and it was quite a bargain at $65 a night. Actually I'm not sure how new the tower is, but it is unfinished. I believe the idea was to have vines and other plants hanging from each level, giving it a lush, jungly look. The narrow planter boxes and the piping for the watering system are in place. But they are empty, and the plants on the first level, where the waterfall is, are artificial. The effect looking up from the first level is reminiscent of the view of the interior of a multistory prison from some movie I saw recently. Grim.

We did have a great view of the thunderstorm last night, and of the pretty swimming pool during the day. The pool doesn't compare with the one at the Mirage, however. In fact, the reason we stayed at the New Frontier was because it's the only hotel on the strip that has Bingo, to which the Grandma is quite partial. Also they have $5 blackjack tables, which are non-existant at night at the newer hotels. However, next time I'll just drop her off to play there and we'll stay at the Mirage or Treasure Island. Or maybe the Aladdin, which is across from the Bellagio and thus has a view of the beautiful fountains.

We ate dinner last night and lunch today at the Bellagio. That is one gorgeous hotel. And the food and service are great at the cafe off the atrium--they are so friendly and helpful! Wanted to see 'O' there, or, alternately, Zumanity at New York, New York, but the 'O' cast is on vacation, and Zumanity is dark Wednesday and Thursday, so we missed out.

While Grandma Bingoed, I went shopping at the huge, beautiful mall across the street. Got some real bargains--lots of sales going. Rested my weary feet at the Food Court before heading back to the room and had enough cash to get a bowl of Avolemono soup (so soothing and delicious!) and a piece of homemade baklava--some of the best I've ever had. Why don't we have a 'Greek Isles' fast food place in Simi? Huh? Huh?



Wrote a response to the [livejournal.com profile] pirates500 "Lost" challenge while we were there.




Lost and Found




She’d been lost, for a while, after Will died. During their marriage, his success and happiness had been hers, too. Jack, attending their wedding in a disguise she still laughed to think about, had given them a small chest of Spanish gold. It had been enough to buy out Mr. Brown, who’d retired home to England, and to make improvements to the business. Her father and James (and Jack too, she suspected) had carefully fostered rumor of Will’s skill as a master craftsman, skills made all the more relevant in light of their great adventure. Within a few years, orders were coming from as far away as Boston, and even London. Elizabeth knew it had given Will enormous satisfaction to be able to provide her with many of the small luxuries she had taken for granted as a girl, growing up in her father’s house. There had been no children, but Dr. Hill had assured them that it was only a matter of time.

But time had run out. An inflammation of the lungs. Who could have guessed? He was so young, and strong. But he’d already had a cold, and that rainy night, when he’d returned from a week’s voyage to a neighboring island, shivering with ague, had been the beginning of the end.

Jack had found her quite literally at the cliff’s edge. Sometimes she wondered: would she have done it? Her father had feared she might, and had sent word to him. They had not met for several years, though she knew of his doings: to everyone’s surprise he had applied for a Letter of Marque and the Black Pearl had become an ally of the crown during its war with Spain. He corresponded, occasionally, and what he left out of these missives James had supplied: how the Black Pearl’s crew had been instrumental in saving the lives of a hundred civilians during the battle of Providence Island; how Jack had orchestrated a cunning and successful attack on a heavily-armed Treasure ship; how Jack and James had sailed into Mexican waters and captured the Viceroy of Spain. Later, she questioned him about these dangerous adventures, but he shrugged, saying if he’d not been well paid he’d certainly not have done it: Pirate! She shook her head, justifiably skeptical of this pretense.

Madness had seized her when he’d found her. Hysteria. Fury. To the empty gatekeeper’s cottage she’d stormed, Jack following in her wake. Shocking them both, she’d virtually forced herself on him, a desperate affirmation of Life. Afterwards he’d scolded her for feeling guilty, and for cowardice. And then, as she’d lain snuffling into his shoulder, he’d asked her: shall I take you away for a while?

James was troubled, but did not object. Her father had half expected it: just bring her back safely. Jack had promised: my word as a scallywag. Laughter and tears, both, as they’d set sail.

Elizabeth looked out across endless, sparkling water, a richer, deeper blue than the Caribbean. Jack came and leaned on the rail beside her.

“Lookin’ for something, Missy?”

She turned, and smiled. “I’ve found it.”







Date: 2004-08-13 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captain-molly.livejournal.com
OH MY GOD SO GOOD.

...yeah. No coherency...

Date: 2004-08-13 11:33 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Really Bad Eggs)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! It's a story line I've been thinking about for a while. I'm glad it worked for you.

Date: 2004-08-13 11:39 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
S**t, I just discovered there was a line missing (my word processor screwed up, or something). Fixed it now. Glad you liked it anyway, though.

Date: 2004-08-14 06:13 am (UTC)
ext_15529: made by jazsekuhsjunk (jadedmisery - willow and tara)
From: [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com
*sniffle* Oh, that was beautiful.

Date: 2004-08-14 07:57 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Really Bad Eggs)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
*sob*

Thank you. I don't usually do angst, but I have to get rid of Will somehow if I'm going to write J/E.

*blots at crocodile tears*

Date: 2004-08-14 09:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oiseaurobyn.livejournal.com
why do you have to get rid of poor will?

Date: 2004-08-14 09:31 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
So I can write J/E! Of course, I could write J/W/E, but I'm not really into that whole group thing.

Why? Do you like Will? He is rather cute. Not as interesting as Jack, of course, but then few mortals are.

Date: 2004-08-14 11:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hardlyfatal.livejournal.com
There's something impossibly tragic to me about the strong characters we love dying from something as mundane as an illness-- we expect them to go down fighting, or perhaps at a nice ripe old age.

The idea of Will dying at 30, or younger, from influenza is just heartbreaking to me.

Good work, I liked this :) Thanks!

Date: 2004-08-14 11:38 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate by Candlelight)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Yes. Pneumonia is still a common cause of death today, and back then such illnesses were far more serious, what with the lack of antibiotics. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thanks for letting me know!

Date: 2004-08-14 11:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hereswith.livejournal.com
Oh my! Oh dear! You're writing J/E! *happy smile* I loved this, and
it has just the right amount of angst... For some reason, I especially
liked the "as she'd lain snuffling into his shoulder" bit.

Date: 2004-08-14 11:55 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate by Candlelight)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
So very happy you enjoyed it! I, too, like the h/c element. Glad it worked for you.

Date: 2004-08-14 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oiseaurobyn.livejournal.com
ahhh i finally get what j/e means...

and yes, will is rather nice-looking, but i admit, not as entertaining as jack.

hmm...they even said in the movie that j/e would never work ;)

Date: 2004-08-14 06:56 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Well, it wouldn't have at that point...that's why you have to get rid of Will!

Date: 2004-08-16 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cbtreks.livejournal.com
Very nice! Angsty but not overwrought. I feel badly for Elizabeth being widowed at a young age and I kind of hate the idea of killing off Will (done it myself in a drabble, though) - still, I have a hard time picturing her being happy with him through a long marriage. I suspect that, without Jack's daily influence, Will will become rather tame.

Date: 2004-08-16 03:23 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I have a hard time picturing her being happy with him through a long marriage.

Maybe. Especially since they come from very different social strata: she wasn't raised to be a common housewife. But I think young love is blind to the strains of the long haul.

I don't like killing off Will either--their romance is one of the best elements of the PotC story--but I was thinking of writing some J/E stuff and I don't really think it works with Will still in the picture. Then, too, I made Jack a bit more heroic than he is in a lot of fics. I think it's as plausible a story line as any other, though, considering what we know of him from what's in the movie.

Glad you liked the fic! Thanks for commenting.

Bravo!

Date: 2004-10-26 11:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jackfan2.livejournal.com
Oh, how poignently done. How wonderfully sad, yet strikingly needful in emotional strength and longing. Love your Jack and Elizabeth. While I'm not a huge fan of that pairing, some writers have been able to get me to suspend my Jack/Anamaria tendencies to enjoy the whimsey of that pairing.

Brilliant!

Ta!
Julie

Re: Bravo!

Date: 2004-10-26 11:11 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack (blank by  unen2gemismasin))
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you, sweetie! I am so very glad you liked it. It's the backstory for Jealous, that longer one you already read.

I have a J/A piece in the works, too, though I don't know when it'll be finished.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2007-09-29 11:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weather-eyes.livejournal.com
That was beautiful.

Thank you for killing off Will. ;) I mean that in a nice way. I love Will which is why I prefer to have him completely out of the picture (i.e. dead) in J/E fics. I can't bear the idea of Lizzie cheating on him in any way. Their love story is one of the greatest of the 18th Century. *g*

This was very poignant... sad, but hopeful at the same time.

"Jack had promised: my word as a scallywag. Laughter and tears, both, as they’d set sail."

Loved that line. Very Jack.

I think I am going to enjoy your PotC universe. :)

Date: 2007-09-30 06:16 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Save Me by savvylicious)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I love Will which is why I prefer to have him completely out of the picture (i.e. dead) in J/E fics. I can't bear the idea of Lizzie cheating on him in any way. Their love story is one of the greatest of the 18th Century.

My thoughts precisely, which is why it took me a year to start writing J/E -- I wrote Jack/OC (the Harry & the Pirate stories, and the Molly Hatter stories) and Jack/Anamaria. But [livejournal.com profile] hereswith and [livejournal.com profile] torn_eledhwen showed me the way with their beautiful fics, which are quite different from mine, but use that same device. Poor Will. But even the first time I saw CotBP I thought Elizabeth was being stupidly blind and belonged with Jack.

I hope you do enjoy my J/E universe, if you end up reading more. It's so much less angsty than the post-DMC/AWE one (though I do like writing in that one, too). Thank you for your thoughtful comments. They are much appreciated.

Date: 2007-09-30 01:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weather-eyes.livejournal.com
But hereswith and torn_eledhwen showed me the way with their beautiful fics

I'll have to check them out too. So many great authors... so little time!

It's so much less angsty than the post-DMC/AWE one (though I do like writing in that one, too).

I like a bit of angst, but there does seem to be an awful lot about as you say. When I think back to before DMC, the fandom was just not this angsty. CotBP is not angsty... it's funny. Although I love DMC and AWE, a tiny little piece of me wishes that they'd left it at CotBP. There seemed to be a lot more scope for humour and adventure.

"But even the first time I saw CotBP I thought Elizabeth was being stupidly blind and belonged with Jack."

I know what you mean. The first time I saw CotBP, I was so disappointed that Jack and Lizzie didn't have a snog on that god-forsaken spit of land! ;)

The angst issue is partly why I am writing my story "The Inopportune Moment". It's primarily humour and action/adventure with a little bit of romance and some supernatural shinnanigans thrown in for good measure, but with minimum angst. It's also a bit of a tongue-in-cheek poke at the whole 'Time travelling OC' genre of fanfiction.

Anyway, thanks for recommending hereswith and torn_eledhwen. I'll certainly check them out. I'll have to try a little more Sparrabeth myself as well - I'll have to figure out a way to kill off Will first though! ;)

Cheers. :)

Date: 2007-09-30 03:42 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Default)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
They're easiest to find on Black Pearl Tales -- [livejournal.com profile] torn_eledhwen's is here and [livejournal.com profile] hereswith's series starts here. They both have lots more fic, if you enjoy their writing -- there are links on the Authors page of Black Pearl Tales ([livejournal.com profile] torn_eledhwen is just 'Eledhwen' there). I know [livejournal.com profile] hereswith has posted all her work on her LJ, but [livejournal.com profile] torn_eledhwen's most complete archive is on her website, Dreamy Aspirations: Tortuga.

I will definitely check out your 'Inopportune Moment' -- I'm up to my ears trying to finish 'Hero' by next Friday (four down, two to go), but after that I'll be free as a bird (more or less). Yay for lighthearted fic!

Date: 2007-10-19 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reneeks.livejournal.com
I liked this SO much. I love that Gov. Swann sent for Jack.....

Date: 2007-10-19 06:09 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Save Me by savvylicious)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
My beloved A/U -- only slightly angsty and MUCH less conflicted than canon after the sequels. Not that I don't write stuff more aligned with canon, but I'm very happy to know you liked this and thought it plausible from what we saw in CotBP. Thank you for letting me know. :)

Date: 2007-12-20 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharklady35.livejournal.com
Oh, that is so terribly sad. :=(

But I'm sure Will would want Liz to go on (to quote the Titanic ballad), and who's better equipped to assist her than Jack Sparrow?

Date: 2007-12-20 06:16 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Save Me by savvylicious)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm sure Will would want Liz to go on ... and who's better equipped to assist her than Jack Sparrow?

That's what Will thought when he asked Jack to keep an eye on her. ;)

Very sad, yes, but not inconceivable in that day and age.

Date: 2008-08-31 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenthegypsy.livejournal.com
Oh, I remember this story with great fondness - the implied scene of Lizzie "forcing" herself on Jack still takes my breath away...only a little! I'm so happy to revisit it again. ♥

Date: 2008-08-31 08:50 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it a second time. I'm still having fun writing in this universe. :)

Date: 2010-12-26 08:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
Have you accepted your place--our beloved pirate making you a sister to my heart? Yes, I am a piratista--you say when and I'll grab my stashed sea bag, renew my shots and we'll be away within 24 hours. I'd not forgotten this, not possible to forget what you love, but I set it aside becos it hurt me that Will had passed.

Date: 2010-12-26 08:43 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Will - Pirate by ashleygaea)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Rereading this, it is a bit A/U for the Christmas series. But that's OK.

I read quite a lot of J/E even before writing this, but the stories that tarnish the love between Elizabeth and Will just didn't make sense. [livejournal.com profile] hereswith and [livejournal.com profile] torn_eledhwen wrote the most wonderful stories, with Elizabeth's loss of her beloved opening her heart for Jack, so I followed their lead with this. Also, I like the idea of Will/Elizabeth/Jack, or at least a very close friendship between the three.

Thank you for reading again and commenting. I appreciate it so much!

*Hugs*

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