Elizabeth is a pirate... and a good woman. I love her character here - confident and kind. I also enjoyed the image of her being so happy at the helm of her ship. She always did seem unconcerned with the idea of sailing, and quick off the mark when action needed to be taken. It seems right that she would feel free on the water. Swann by name, swan by nature... ;) I think you did a great job with the events after they had docked. Sister Marguerite is a very convincing character.
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Date: 2008-05-16 12:50 pm (UTC)Enjoying this immensely. :)