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A double drabble for the 'Flag' theme...



~ Different Colors ~


In all these months there'd only been the one rumor: Jack had lost the Pearl to Barbossa. Again.

It'd put Teague in a vile temper for a day or two, but after that he'd been able to shrug it off. He'd lived too long, seen too much to worry, and Jackie was nigh on forty years old, for pity's sake.

But all that vexation returned with a rush one bright morning, some eight months after the Battle.

Elizabeth joined him on the balcony. "What is it?" she asked, concern in her voice. No doubt she'd noted his scowl.

"The Pearl's coming through the Devil's Throat." Teague ground his teeth. If that was Barbossa…

"Let me see!" Elizabeth grabbed the glass from his hand.

Teague bridled and turned to snap at her, but the expression on her face as she set it to her eye stopped him. She was wound tight as he was himself. But then she gave a little gasp, and a grin broke out, wide and beautiful, as she turned to him.

"It's Jack!"

Teague gaped for half a second, then demanded, "How d'ye know?"

She laughed, delighted, and handed him the glass. "The flag. It's his own."



~.~

Date: 2008-06-02 07:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bombazzinedoll.livejournal.com
Haha, oh, yay.


It'd put Teague in a vile temper for a day or two, but after that he'd been able to shrug it off. He'd lived too long, seen too much to worry, and Jackie was nigh on forty years old, for pity's sake.


Big ol' softie. He can't fool me.

Second edit, durnit, but it's great to see someone actually using his flag in a fic. I'm surprised it doesn't pop up more often, really.
Edited Date: 2008-06-02 07:29 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-06-02 07:33 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Oooh, I love your version of the flag there on your icon! Yes, it is strange it's not used more. Glad you enjoyed this -- thanks so much for the quick feedback!

Date: 2008-06-02 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kseenaa.livejournal.com
I must ask who made that icon there, and if it is at all sharable? It is wonderful, really!

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Date: 2008-06-02 10:17 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] mamazano.livejournal.com
Ah, Jack's flag. Gotta love him, don't think it's going to strike terror into too many souls!

Perhaps he only flies it at friendly Ports of Call...

Date: 2008-06-02 01:54 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
don't think it's going to strike terror into too many souls!

Good point! I hadn't really thought of that, lol!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2008-06-02 10:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ditte3.livejournal.com
Love it.Love it.Love it.:D

Date: 2008-06-02 01:55 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm so glad! Thank you for letting me know. :)

Date: 2008-06-02 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hippie-lover.livejournal.com
Beautiful drabble! I love the interaction between Teague and Elizabeth! :)

Date: 2008-06-02 01:57 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you. Gotta love Teague. He's awfully fun to write. I'm so happy you liked this!

Date: 2008-06-02 11:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-weirdness.livejournal.com
Just how did he get the Pearl back, I wonder. ;)

Great drabble, and Teagues thoughts about Jack were perfect. he just can't help being a dad! :)

Date: 2008-06-02 01:59 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Just how did he get the Pearl back, I wonder. ;)

I had an idea about that, too, last night, but it would be more than drabble length, for sure.

he just can't help being a dad!

Generally, your kids are your kids, no matter how old they are. *g*

Thank you for reading and commenting -- I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2008-06-02 11:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorat.livejournal.com
Of course Jack would get her back. He may be distractable, but he's persistent. :D And am I the only one who thinks that flag is a bit ADD? "Give me all your valuables . . . Oooh look! A bird!"

Date: 2008-06-02 11:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keechakatt.livejournal.com
lol. Jack's flag, I always pictured it more fearsome and huge-ish. ;)

someone needs to design a flag for dear Will. :D

I really enjoyed this drabble very much. XD

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Date: 2008-06-02 12:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary684.livejournal.com
Oh,this is too gorgeous. I can just hear the old goat grumbling and dang, almost wish it were Barbs - that'd be a good fight to see, eh? Haha, he's so pissed, he's about to tear into Lizzie. Yippee! Jack's flag flying high and he's on his way home!

I loved it. *saves to mems*

Date: 2008-06-02 02:08 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
almost wish it were Barbs - that'd be a good fight to see, eh?

He's thinking he might just have to go shoot him. *g*

I'm so glad you liked this, and enough to save, too! Thank you for letting me know. :))
Edited Date: 2008-06-02 02:08 pm (UTC)
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Date: 2008-06-02 02:11 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I do love writing Teague. That one scene in AWE gave us such interesting information about them.

Thank you for reading and commenting -- I'm so happy you enjoyed this!

Date: 2008-06-02 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reneeks.livejournal.com
This is wonderful! I love how Teague wasgoing to snap at her for snatching his glass away, 'til he saw her face. I can just picture Teague and Elizabeth bickering...hehe. Just how did he get the Pearl back, I wonder. ;)

Yeah....I haven't seen many fics dealing with that, as a main plot...
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Date: 2008-06-02 02:16 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I can just picture Teague and Elizabeth bickering.

I expect there have been some interesting scenes between them in the previous months. ;)

Getting the Pearl back -- there should be a contest for that, too (like the one I suggested above, about designing a flag for Will). It's a subject most of us are interested in!

So happy you enjoyed this! Thank you for reading and commenting.

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Date: 2008-06-02 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artaxastra.livejournal.com
YAY! And of course Elizabeth wants to see! I am full of love for your Teague, as always!

Date: 2008-06-02 02:19 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Teague is, as you well know, very fun to write. I'm so glad you enjoyed this! (And I'll see you on Thursday?!! *squees, bouncing*)

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Date: 2008-06-02 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p0wdermonkey.livejournal.com
Teague needs to have more faith in Jack! Enjoyed this too much - I'm supposed to be working.

Date: 2008-06-03 04:48 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Monkey!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Pirates are way more fun than working. ;)

So happy you liked it!!

Date: 2008-06-02 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madam-pudifoot.livejournal.com
Loved it! Your Teague is great - sullen old goat - but I can't help but love him. I wonder just how often those two fight, they both have strong personalities, and something tells me neither is willing to back down. Poor Jack, no one trusts him to get his pretty boat back.

Date: 2008-06-03 04:50 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Poor Jack, no one trusts him to get his pretty boat back.

Well, it took him ten years, last time. *g*

So happy you enjoyed Teague and Lizzie in this. :)

Date: 2008-06-02 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparrows-lass.livejournal.com
*heh* me loooooooves!! ;P

Date: 2008-06-03 04:43 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!!

Date: 2008-06-02 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sixpences.livejournal.com
Aw, Teague *g* love his interaction with Elizabeth here too.

Date: 2008-06-03 04:42 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2008-06-02 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kseenaa.livejournal.com
*grin* Yeah, what would a pirate be without his own version of the Jolly Roger? ;-D

Date: 2008-06-03 04:42 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
So true!

Date: 2008-06-02 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] florencia7.livejournal.com
Fantastic interaction, great drabble. I loved it!

Date: 2008-06-03 04:41 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it!
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Date: 2008-06-03 04:41 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!!

Date: 2008-06-03 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com
The thing is - how would she know it's his? She didn't see it at the end of AWE. Or is she just guessing by the little bird? *G*

Date: 2008-06-03 04:40 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
The little bird. Who else would have a little bird. Certainly not Barbossa! (He might have a monkey, of course. *g*

I liked [livejournal.com profile] honorat's comment -- And am I the only one who thinks that flag is a bit ADD? "Give me all your valuables . . . Oooh look! A bird!"

LOL!!

Date: 2008-06-03 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darnaguen.livejournal.com
Awww. :)
However, as cool as Jack's flag is, I still a bit miffed that they gave Calico Jack Rackham's flag to Barbs and not him. It would have been so fitting.

Date: 2008-06-03 02:12 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC: Sparrow Flag)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I agree. I always thought of the Skull and Crossed Swords as Jack's, but I suppose it might have become too closely associated with Barbossa and the cursed pirates during that ten years.

I hadn't run across any fic featuring the new flag (though I may have just missed whatever was out there), and I felt it was worthy of a drabble, at least. So glad you enjoyed it. :)

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Date: 2008-06-03 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hereswith.livejournal.com
He'd lived too long, seen too much to worry, and Jackie was nigh on forty years old, for pity's sake. LOL! That bit is great, I so like your Teague, you know that. Loved their interaction here, too, Elizabeth impatient enough to grab the glass from him, his reaction and then the delight at the end. Wonderful double drabble!

Date: 2008-06-04 03:44 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
It's funny how one can just see these little scenes, don't you think? Then it's just a matter of finding the right words to show everyone else, lol!

I do love Teague. He's so much fun to write.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

Date: 2008-06-04 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-di75.livejournal.com
I do love me some good Teague fic :) This is no exception! Love your drabbles, darlin' -- they never fail to hit the spot!

Date: 2008-06-04 03:46 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed this one!

Date: 2008-06-04 06:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tiamary.livejournal.com
It's great to see a character who is angry at Barbossa for taking the Pearl again. :) :)

Actually, a TEAGUE / BARBOSSA X-TREEM SMACKDOWN would be fun to see...

Date: 2008-07-30 05:40 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Default)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
a TEAGUE / BARBOSSA X-TREEM SMACKDOWN would be fun to see...

Wouldn't it be fab if we got that in the next film?

So happy you enjoyed this one!

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