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Lighthearted post-AWE Jack/Elizabeth fic seems to be the order of the day. My dear [livejournal.com profile] hereswith wrote the eminently squee-worthy Fortuitous Fate per my request, and kindly edited this for me, my reply to the current drabble challenge at Black Pearl Sails...



~ Settling Up ~


At a month’s remove, she can barely remember what the wager was about. They’d all been a bit fuddled with drink that night… well, not herself, so much, what with the nausea that had even then begun to plague her; and not Jack either, she suspects: Jack was seldom as well-to-live as he encouraged one to assume. But in the fortnight after the Battle, raucous evenings had been the rule, rather than the exception, and there’d been a reckless abandon about it all.

Crab races, perhaps. Yes, she’s nearly sure of it.

In any case, she remembers thinking it hugely funny – the first time she’d laughed like that in ages – years maybe – and then Jack was there with his eyes, soft and sly, and his wager.

“Bet you a kiss.”

Ah, that rough velvet voice of his, and for her alone, in spite of the vociferous crowd. Thankful that the warmth of the tavern might account for reddened cheeks, she’d managed to turn to him, smiling, but a beat passed before she said, with commendable ease, “What happened to Once is quite enough?”

An ambivalent expression had passed over his countenance – gratification? regret? – but he’d murmured, “Changed me mind: captain’s prerogative. You game or not?”

She’d straightened, feeling most ambivalent herself. But she had only said, “A kiss. Against… ?”

“What do you want?”

“A month’s sail on the Pearl, anywhere I like!”

“Done!” he’d exclaimed, happily, but deflated her pretensions by adding, “Won’t matter anyway.”

And he’d been right. Her crab had finished unplaced.

*

She’d allowed him to escort her back to her rooms shortly thereafter, for the tot of rum she’d downed to bolster courage (not that he was to know that) had instead made her rather ill. A quick paying of the… the trifling debt, then she could lie down and rest.

But when they arrived at her shadowed doorway, he’d none of it. “No, no! It’s not in me nature to take advantage of lasses who’re green about the gills, whether they be treacherous pirates or virtually virginal – or both, as the case may be.”

“I am hardly virtually virginal,” she’d objected.

He'd raised a skeptical brow. “One day? And Will all too virginal himself, belike. Didn’t hurt you much, did he?” His eyes had wandered suggestively south, then north again, enjoying her outrage.

“I… he… Oh!” She’d clenched her teeth for a moment, then managed to snap, “It’s no wonder women want to hit you!”

He’d smirked, shameless. “I daresay. But you’d better go to bed, darlin’. Plenty of time to settle up when you’re feeling more the thing.”

She’d stiffly bade him good night, hiding both her relief and her disappointment.

*

For a while, it seemed Jack had forgotten. He said nothing during the following days, at any rate, even when their paths did cross, which wasn’t often and never away from company. She had found a mentor in Teague and studied with him for much of each day – the Code, the history of piracy, philosophy, diplomacy, Shipwreck Cove itself – and Jack tended to avoid his father, whenever possible.

But when they did meet, Jack’s gaze upon her was not only warm, but pointed. She thought perhaps it was her imagination, but then she caught him at it once… twice… and she knew by his expression that she had not been mistaken.

She felt like a vixen beset by the wiliest of foxes.

*

Now, after a month of it, she’s more than ready to make an end. How on earth is the prospect of one kiss sufficient to set her so off balance? The past, weighty as it is, is past. The disconcerting present demands her attentions in so many ways. But with the final act of this seemingly insignificant comedy still to be played, she’s finding it increasingly difficult to think clearly.

No doubt he’s planned it this way, and as he once again escorts her back to her rooms, noise and prying eyes left behind, she grows more and more nervous, though she gives herself an inward scold, too: It’s just a kiss! Only a kiss!

But her heart sees the matter in a different light.

Their banter fades as they traverse the lower levels, as they climb up and up in increasing isolation and silence. But when they are finally approaching her door, he says, “Here we are, my liege, and alone, too. Shall we settle up?”

“T-the kiss?” She turns to face him, cursing her unsteady voice, though perhaps he didn’t notice.

“Aye. Just the one.”

He’s held her before, held her life in his hands more than once, but as his arms slip about her now it feels as though it’s for the first time, something new and raw, for all its ease. A faint scent of French soap overlays his more familiar rum and musty salt, and – she can’t deny it -- he’s still the handsomest man she’s ever seen, even taking her dearest Will into account. But it’s Jack’s leer, lascivious yet somehow adorable, and the very real warmth in his eyes that make her heart swell.

She gently holds him off. “Wait!”

“Wait? I’ve been waiting nigh a month.”

She stiffens and can’t keep the resentment from her voice. “That was your own doing!”

He chuckles. “What then? Are you reneging?”

“No.”

“But?”

She looks at him, straight. “The men in my life… that I’ve kissed – or kissed me…”

“Dead?” Jack says, bluntly.

She can’t speak with remembering.

So he continues, slowly drawing her close, closer. “Was wondering if you’d made a connection there. Been there and done that, meself, of course, but you brought me back, which has to count for something. And what’s life without a bit of risk, eh?”

And his moustache brushes her upper lip just before his mouth is on hers, somehow gentle and insistent at once, and she cannot help but yield, the mix of fear and trembling happiness making her weak-kneed, oh surely it will be all right, just this once…

When he ends it, with a tiny nip and a trail of small kisses from her lower lip to her cheek, she finds that her own arms are tight around him, and her breath is coming short, but, gratifyingly, so is his, and he doesn’t let her go.

A show of strength is called for, but she breathes, rather than hisses, “Oh, you are an evil man.”

“Haven’t I been telling you?”

She tries to gather more composure, and opens her eyes to his. “You’re leaving?”

“On the tide.”

“Where?”

“Tortuga, then the Fountain of Youth. It’s on the map. Might be real. Could come in useful.”

She nods, and then quite fails to keep the more important question behind her teeth. “How long?”

“Don’t know. But I’ll try to be back in time for the princeling’s debut.”

She gives a choke of surprise, at that and at his hand brushing over her lower abdomen, where she’s barely showing, before he releases her. She finds her voice. “You knew!”

“Of course, darlin’. I’m—“

“Captain Jack Sparrow, yes,” she says, and shakes her head. A thought occurs. “Jack… if you see Will—“

“I’ll give him a kiss for you, shall I?”

She laughs, her heart suddenly light. “Yes. Oh, yes! But… perhaps you’d better not tell Gibbs about our wager.”

His eyes widen. “Lord, no! I can hear him now, prophesying doom. But he’ll come around. I’ll take you for that month’s sail on the Pearl after your lying-in, shall I? Call it a Christening gift.”


~.~

Date: 2008-08-17 09:34 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-08-17 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hendercats.livejournal.com
*squees and bounces* J/E from both you and [livejournal.com profile] hereswith, all in one day! *feels like small kid in candy shop*

his eyes, soft and sly, and his wager.
“Bet you a kiss.”
Ah, that rough velvet voice of his, and for her alone

*small shiver* I love it when you make me hear his voice like that.

Wonderful! I adore that Jack knew her condition, and the conversation about the rather terrible danger of kissing Elizabeth is fabulous. *twirls you*

Date: 2008-08-17 10:31 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - At World's End)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it!

he conversation about the rather terrible danger of kissing Elizabeth

I can't help but think that would have occurred to her -- and others -- but I haven't seen it addressed in fic before. It would certainly put a damper on things.

Date: 2008-08-17 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fried-flamingo.livejournal.com
Oh I love this! It's so good to read some good old-fashioned J/E UST. And I love that Jack was gentleman enough not to take advantage of Elizabeth (and that Elizabeth was woman enough to be disappointed ;))

Date: 2008-08-17 11:18 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I love that Jack was gentleman enough not to take advantage

Jack has a lot of empathy, which isn't the most piratical of attributes and gets him into trouble on occasion. Barbossa may not love him for it, but we do.

UST is awfully fun sometimes. ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed this instance!

Date: 2008-08-17 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary684.livejournal.com
Oh god, he's so sly and sexy in this! Wow! I love your writing *steals your vocabulary and squirrels it away for future use*, you've got such a nice rhythm and cadence, your work always flows so beautifully. And the two of them, I especially love that the things they say is surpassed only by the things they don't.

Date: 2008-08-17 11:12 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! What wonderful compliments!

The things unspoken, yes, there'd be a lot of that between them, I think. Playing it close to the vest, both of them, as Gibbs would say.

Sly and sexy... that's Jack! I wonder if I'll ever get tired of that?

Date: 2008-08-18 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doc-3.livejournal.com
Love it! It was so incredibly true to Jack's nature :)

Date: 2008-08-18 12:12 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I thought so, too. ;)

Date: 2008-08-18 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymouse2.livejournal.com
Oh, I do love this.
Crab races...of course...
>Jack was seldom as well-to-live as he encouraged one to assume.<
>whether they be treacherous pirates or virtually virginal – or both, as the case may be.”<
(you hark back nicely to his seemingly loopy but pointed doublespeak: Damsel in distress or distressing damsel)
>felt like a vixen beset by the wiliest of foxes.<

I like Jack spotting her pregnancy without being told and her hesitation over her seemingly "cursed kiss" and especially his way of reassuring her:
>“Was wondering if you’d made a connection there. Been there and done that, meself, of course, but you brought me back, which has to count for something. And what’s life without a bit of risk, eh?”<

The fast back and forth between them like the click of beads on an abacus after they end such a sweetly heated, tender kiss. One of the tastiest non-face-hugger kisses I've read in fact, exactly right for the moment.

Then the finish with humor:
>“Jack… if you see Will—“

“I’ll give him a kiss for you, shall I?”

She laughs, her heart suddenly light. “Yes. Oh, yes! But… perhaps you’d better not tell Gibbs about our wager.”<

And his granting her wager after all.

Mmm!

Date: 2008-08-18 12:44 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, Ladymouse! I'm very happy you enjoyed the teasing and what's beneath it. They are very much fun to write, I must say.

Date: 2008-08-18 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puddytat1972.livejournal.com
This one was very nice and very well written. I could see Jack and Liz through the whole thing and imagine all of it, as if I was watching it. I can't say that about a lot of fic.

Most of what I enjoyed has already been addressed, like the warning about the kiss, and the fact that Jack is actually a gentleman in disguise, so I won't beat it into the ground, but I want you to know it was all appreciated.

Date: 2008-08-18 01:12 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I could see Jack and Liz through the whole thing and imagine all of it, as if I was watching it.

The very best of compliments! I appreciate you telling me. So glad you enjoyed it!
Edited Date: 2008-08-18 01:51 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-08-18 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] awickedwench.livejournal.com
“Changed me mind: captain’s prerogative.”

I love the notion of him changing his mind! I really enjoyed this; very well done.

Date: 2008-08-18 01:51 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
ooooh! Icon!

Thank you -- I'm so glad that worked for you!

Date: 2008-08-18 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-di75.livejournal.com
Oh! Oh I do love this... so wonderfully, sweetly, perfect (and I mean that in the very best of ways)
And his moustache brushes her upper lip just before his mouth is on hers, somehow gentle and insistent at once, and she cannot help but yield, the mix of fear and trembling happiness making her weak-kneed, oh surely it will be all right, just this once…

When he ends it, with a tiny nip and a trail of small kisses from her lower lip to her cheek, she finds that her own arms are tight around him, and her breath is coming short, but, gratifyingly, so is his, and he doesn’t let her go.

A show of strength is called for, but she breathes, rather than hisses, “Oh, you are an evil man.”

“Haven’t I been telling you?”


*siiiigghhhh...* Lovely. Just lovely.

Date: 2008-08-18 02:07 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. They are just so much fun to write!

Date: 2008-08-18 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenthegypsy.livejournal.com
Were those Chesapeake crabs, by any chance? ;)

I swear, if your Jack voice were to get any better, you'd have to inhabit is greatcoat with him! Interesting prospect... And the overall tone of the fic echoes his voice perfectly. A feast for hearts longing for sweet J/E!

Date: 2008-08-18 02:24 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Just a Kiss - by the Nixonator)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Chesapeake crabs, by any chance?

Could be, lol!

I'm so happy you liked it! Hard to resist writing sweet J/E, they're such an interesting pair.

Date: 2008-08-18 03:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tanith75.livejournal.com
“The men in my life… that I’ve kissed – or kissed me…”

“Dead?” Jack says, bluntly.



LMAO Very nice

Date: 2008-08-18 03:47 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - At World's End)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Hee! So happy you enjoyed!

Date: 2008-08-18 06:30 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-08-18 01:42 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2008-08-18 06:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akarii.livejournal.com
Mmmm. Delicious kiss, but the hug was even better.

Good stuff, good stuff ^__^ !

Date: 2008-08-18 01:43 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Just a Kiss - by the Nixonator)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2008-08-18 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whensheflies.livejournal.com
That was love. :)

Date: 2008-08-18 01:44 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - At World's End)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2008-08-18 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tuesday-suit.livejournal.com
“Bet you a kiss.”

Ah, that rough velvet voice of his, and for her alone, in spite of the vociferous crowd.


*GUH* What woman (or man :-P) could resist that?

He’s held her before, held her life in his hands more than once, but as his arms slip about her now it feels as though it’s for the first time, something new and raw, for all its ease.

Wonderful. I love the contradiction - the discovering of something that, in a way, has been discovered before.

“Dead?” Jack says, bluntly.

She can’t speak with remembering.


What a sadly sweet call-back. Your word choices throughout are stunning. Fab work. :-)

Date: 2008-08-19 03:09 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I really appreciate the detailed comments. I'm so glad you liked it!

Date: 2008-08-18 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] equilibrium44.livejournal.com
Very beautifully done. Amazing.

Date: 2008-08-19 03:10 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

Date: 2008-08-18 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bellbubble.livejournal.com
*g*

That was beyond amazingly cute!! Me luvs it!! ♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2008-08-19 03:10 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!!

Date: 2008-08-20 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
So good of you to let us look over their shoulders as Jack flirts and Elisabeth fidgets, she does it beautifully well. Her heart's with Will and the babe and yet, there's still that bit of a chit of a girl....who was the COA, belle of the ball for much of her life. And you know, there is Absolutely Nothing better, sexier, compelling than that lean in, draw away dance==it's like Jack has even found a way to control his lusty nature, and I truly believe that Jack loves swiving almost as much as he loves the Pearl. "She felt like a vixen beset by the wiliest of foxes." and she was and he was. Very naughty, very sweet--like if dark chocolate really was congress.

Date: 2008-08-20 01:37 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Heart's Desire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! Having a story compared to dark chocolate is a marvelous compliment! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2008-08-20 06:36 am (UTC)
ext_18053: (wicked)
From: [identity profile] djarum99.livejournal.com
Crab races! And I loved this: the first time she’d laughed like that in ages – years maybe – and then Jack was there with his eyes, soft and sly, and his wager, and that he knew about the "princeling," and made the connection about the men she'd kissed. And of course he'd risk it anyway :-)

Lovely work ♥

Date: 2008-08-20 01:42 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Just a Kiss - by the Nixonator)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you for the lovely feedback. So happy you enjoyed those bits, and the rest of the story. They are so much fun to write together -- as you know.

Date: 2008-08-26 10:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kseenaa.livejournal.com
That was absolutely lovely! :-D

Date: 2008-09-02 03:30 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Just a Kiss - by the Nixonator)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Please forgive my belated reply. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

Date: 2008-09-04 03:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reneeks.livejournal.com
Lovely fun this is!!

Date: 2008-09-07 04:46 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Just a Kiss - by the Nixonator)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!! (Love your icon, too!)

Date: 2008-09-07 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reneeks.livejournal.com
Thank you. The icon is actually a photo manip by ximebetty on deviantArt and she gave me permission to use it as an icon. She has beautiful manips in her gallery! This icon I have up now is another of hers.
Edited Date: 2008-09-07 12:30 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-15 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] just-a-dram.livejournal.com
This is an excellent kiss story. I love how it starts with the lightness and humor of crab races. The UST throughout most of it, where she is both anticipating and fearing the moment. I had an -uh oh- moment when she was nauseated. Course he knew--he's Captain Jack Sparrow! The kiss is lovely, of course, but after, when she asks how long he'll be gone...more undercurrents of unspoken things and angst. It's quite perfect.

Date: 2010-10-15 03:16 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Just a Kiss - by the Nixonator)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I could totally see them doing crab races. *g* I like the angst as a path to something fine, and I think they're capable of that, it makes sense to me.

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