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A triple drabble, 300 words, in my old post-CotBP J/E universe, for the new prompt at [livejournal.com profile] potc100...



~ A Lexicological Inquiry ~

"Jack, what's meant by the expression Little Death?"

Jack's brows rose precipitously. He set their tankards down and slid onto the settle beside Elizabeth. "Why d'you ask, love?"

"That woman leaving, and the two men following her."

Elizabeth nodded toward the door of the tavern where a couple of coves were dogging Scarlett's swaying egress into the sultry Tortuga night. Jack smirked, feeling a sympathy for the poor buggers.

Elizabeth continued. "The men were sitting there just now, at the next table, watching her, and the one remarked, That un'll be the death of 'e, and the other replied, I could use a Little Death of 'er, think on!"

Jack turned to Elizabeth with a grin. "Interesting elocution, there, Miss Governor’s Daughter. Didn't know you was so apt at apin' the lower orders. A talent that could come in useful."

"Thank you, Captain Sparrow," she said, cheeks pinking up, pleased as punch. "Father would be appalled, but as you say, it’s a skill that could be of use to us. I've been trying to pay attention. But what did that man mean by Little Death? Something dreadful? "

"Dreadful! No! La petite mort, as the Frenchies say.” Elizabeth, prettiest pirate lad ever breeched, cocked her head, all questioning innocence. Jack cleared his throat and shifted on the unyielding wood. “It's when a man... and a maid... er... a woman... It's a bit difficult to explain. In words. I think p'rhaps more of a hands-on demonstration.” He glanced around, and toward the stairs leading to the rooms above, and winced. “Not here, though. We’ll go back to the Pearl.”

“Go back? But we’ve just arrived!”

“Aye. But lexicological investigation’s a bit like time ‘n’ tide, savvy? So drink up, there’s a love. Night's gettin' older by the minute."

~.~

Date: 2008-09-24 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary684.livejournal.com
Bwahahaha! Night's getting older by the minute. Oh, Jack! Opportune moments and all that! This is adorable. Elizabeth talking like a pirate *g* and love the description prettiest pirate lad ever breeched and Jack shifting on the unyielding wood! Loved this! Terrific use of the prompt!

Date: 2008-09-24 02:31 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
What does it say about me that la petite mort was the first thing I thought of when I saw the prompt? Hmmmm...

Very very glad you enjoyed it, though! *g*

Date: 2008-09-24 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary684.livejournal.com
What does it say about me that la petite mort was the first thing I thought of when I saw the prompt? Hmmmm...

Totally understandable given the person you were thinking of. *g*

Date: 2008-09-24 02:42 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Jack is more about life than death, even post-sequels. ;)

Date: 2008-09-24 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] equilibrium44.livejournal.com
Cute interlude. : D

Jack does use everything in his 'arsenal' doesn't he? But lexicologically speaking I fear that it is more the English version of that phrase he wants to demonstrate to her, and not the French.

Yet, as with Jack's "time 'n' tide", Liz may just put two and two together. The last time he used that phrase he was 'spinning' also. :-)

Date: 2008-09-24 05:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
How droll, and Jack (Everready?)--suddenly shy? I can just hear herself squawking, "But we've..." By that time, Jack would already have her elbow and imperative movement on his side. Always an education with that pirate! and striking while the iron is hot, definitely his style.
"It's a bit difficult to explain. In words." Now that is one of the funniest things I think you've ever writ. Thanks, dear one, this is highly purrable.

Date: 2008-09-24 05:59 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed the story. Jack can spin 'em with the best.

Date: 2008-09-24 06:01 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Elizabeth - Pirate by Sleeping_Bud)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm glad this made you smile! Thank you for letting me know.

Date: 2008-09-24 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyofthesilent.livejournal.com
LOL
That was wonderful!

Elizabeth, prettiest pirate lad ever breeched

Love the description :-)

Poor Jack, it was hilarious to see him struggle with the explanation. He's better at demonstrating, though, I suppose ...

Date: 2008-09-24 10:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p0wdermonkey.livejournal.com
I've got a great big grin now. The way you write both of them here is just hilarious - spot on too.

Date: 2008-09-24 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] js-1245.livejournal.com
This was great! Very refreshing, made me smile! I loved it!

Always a lesson with Jack. lol And of course it would be with this, snatching the opportune moment, able to get something out of her naivety... or hopefully, unless she figures it out before he can get to "teaching her" about what it means...

Great job! I absolutely loved this!

Night's gettin' older by the minute. - Favorite line! Jack's so impatient. lol

Write more!!! :)

Date: 2008-09-24 01:05 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
The great big grin is what I was hoping for. I'm so glad you liked it!

Date: 2008-09-24 01:06 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Elizabeth - Pirate by Sleeping_Bud)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so happy it put a smile on your face. :D

Date: 2008-09-24 01:10 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Elizabeth - Pirate by Sleeping_Bud)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Very glad you liked the description of Elizabeth -- I was trying to do it as briefly as I could there and that seemed to sum up the picture. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story!

Date: 2008-09-24 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] florencia7.livejournal.com
"Elizabeth, prettiest pirate lad ever breeched, cocked her head, all questioning innocence. - haha I loved this line! ^^

Fantastic drabble! Brilliant characters' voices. Great work! I just wish it didn't end so soon... I wanted to find out what that phrase meant too.... LOL

Date: 2008-09-25 12:17 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Elizabeth - Pirate by Sleeping_Bud)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. You can Google the phrase, lol -- it comes right up, on Wikipedia!

Date: 2008-09-25 01:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hendercats.livejournal.com
Marvelous fun ! Was going to point at some favorite bits, but that would be nearly every word. :)

Date: 2008-09-25 01:38 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack Sleeping by inevendim)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you, my dear. I do appreciate your kind words. It's been a day.

Date: 2008-09-25 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hendercats.livejournal.com
*hugs* Very sorry about bad day.

Date: 2008-09-25 01:53 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Mai Tai)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
What a beautiful icon!

Not such a terrible day, just a lot of little things. But you did cheer me up, as I said. I hope all is well back there, and that things are calming down at work!

*hugs back*

Date: 2008-09-26 01:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hendercats.livejournal.com
(icon pic snagged from Webshots weekly email - lovely source of goodies)

Work finally slowing down a bit - had two very productive hours yesterday afternoon (the phones didn't ring! people weren't wandering into the office every ten seconds!!) and worked through nearly three inches of the gigantic to-do pile. Hope your week is getting better.

Date: 2008-09-26 01:51 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Queen Anne's Lace)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Today was better, for sure, working through my 'to-do' piles, too, but no internet again, which is problematic when one relies on it for so many things, including boss's calendar on Yahoo. :(( Third day in a row. Maybe they'll have it fixed tomorrow. And did I tell you we have a new phone system? It's an example of what happens when you are forced to go with the lowest bidder. :-/

Your icon makes me feel warm and cozy. :)

Date: 2008-09-26 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] berne.livejournal.com
Hee, Jack! I really enjoy reading your little Pirates snippets.

Date: 2008-09-26 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kseenaa.livejournal.com
He he he... :-D That was cute! La petite mort is quite a cool way to put it, though, I think. :-D

Date: 2008-09-27 08:49 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
So glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for letting me know. :)

Date: 2008-09-27 08:50 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
The French were very cool like that. Famous for it, actually. *g*

So glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2009-06-16 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] were-lemur.livejournal.com
I guess they had to do something to make up for inflicting Parley on the pirates! ;)

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