Longish Drabble: 'The Middle Child'
Nov. 30th, 2008 03:54 pmHave had great difficulty writing anything at all for the last month or more for various reasons, although I managed to turn in my
merrypirates story after two deadline extensions, and then this piece of post-AWE fluff, set between Home for the Holidays and Hero, popped into my head on seeing the drabble prompt of the week at
blackpearsails...
~ The Middle Child ~
It was Jack who finally found her, in the ornate great cabin of that old galley she'd so admired, deep in the Cove.
"Quite a nest you've made here, love," he remarked evenly, peering into the darkness of her little cave, piles of dusty velvet and brocade draped over a carved table.
The great eyes glittered with tears.
He sat down outside, cross-legged, and held out his hands. "Come here."
She obeyed, emerging with a sob, and curled in his lap, clinging. He let her weep, murmuring nonsense against her dark, tangled hair. Eventually the storm slackened, and he pulled out his fine new handkerchief and helped her 'swab the decks'.
"What were you thinking, running off?" he scolded gently. "Your mother needs you!"
Her lip quivered. "Joe Harvey says I'm in the middle now, and she won't have time for me."
"Joe Harvey's a bloody little liar and should be well thrashed – and you, too, for believing him." He gave her a pinch on the backside and narrowed his eyes. "Don't you know she'd be here herself, if she could get out of bed? "
"Is she all right?"
"She's fine, or will be, once she knows you're safe. She was askin' for you, and was a mite upset when we couldn't find you. Had half the Cove in an uproar lookin' for you."
"Oh!" She flushed. "Can we go back?"
*
Ignoring her older brother's annoyed exclamation, and Captain Teague's relieved one, Isabelle let go of her Papa's hand and ran to where Mama lay with arms outstretched, pale but smiling, in the big bed.
"My darling!" were the delightful words Isabelle heard as she was drawn close, and she choked, "I'm sorry, Mama," crying again.
"You should be!" she heard Jamie exclaim behind her. "We've been—"
"Jamie!" Captain Turner said sharply from where he sat beside Mama, on the opposite side of the bed.
"Oh, all right. But Father—"
"All's well as ends well, lad," Papa cut in. "Belay the backtalk and enjoy the moment, eh?"
Mother loosened her hug. "Do you want to see your new sister and brother?"
Isabelle sat up, stunned, and scrubbed the tears from one cheek. "Both? Two?"
"Twins, come and see!" said Suzanna, the midwife, who was standing by the cradle in the corner of the room.
Mama chuckled and gave Isabelle a little push. She slid off the bed and slowly approached the cradle. Two small blanket-wrapped bundles lay there, side-by-side, pink faces so much alike in contented sleep.
Suzanna's hand curved close to one. "This is your sister – she was born first."
Isabelle knelt beside the cradle.
"She is pretty, no?" Suzanna said.
Isabelle nodded. "But the best thing is--" She turned to Papa and grinned. "—forever and always, she and I are both in the middle!"
~.~
~ The Middle Child ~
It was Jack who finally found her, in the ornate great cabin of that old galley she'd so admired, deep in the Cove.
"Quite a nest you've made here, love," he remarked evenly, peering into the darkness of her little cave, piles of dusty velvet and brocade draped over a carved table.
The great eyes glittered with tears.
He sat down outside, cross-legged, and held out his hands. "Come here."
She obeyed, emerging with a sob, and curled in his lap, clinging. He let her weep, murmuring nonsense against her dark, tangled hair. Eventually the storm slackened, and he pulled out his fine new handkerchief and helped her 'swab the decks'.
"What were you thinking, running off?" he scolded gently. "Your mother needs you!"
Her lip quivered. "Joe Harvey says I'm in the middle now, and she won't have time for me."
"Joe Harvey's a bloody little liar and should be well thrashed – and you, too, for believing him." He gave her a pinch on the backside and narrowed his eyes. "Don't you know she'd be here herself, if she could get out of bed? "
"Is she all right?"
"She's fine, or will be, once she knows you're safe. She was askin' for you, and was a mite upset when we couldn't find you. Had half the Cove in an uproar lookin' for you."
"Oh!" She flushed. "Can we go back?"
*
Ignoring her older brother's annoyed exclamation, and Captain Teague's relieved one, Isabelle let go of her Papa's hand and ran to where Mama lay with arms outstretched, pale but smiling, in the big bed.
"My darling!" were the delightful words Isabelle heard as she was drawn close, and she choked, "I'm sorry, Mama," crying again.
"You should be!" she heard Jamie exclaim behind her. "We've been—"
"Jamie!" Captain Turner said sharply from where he sat beside Mama, on the opposite side of the bed.
"Oh, all right. But Father—"
"All's well as ends well, lad," Papa cut in. "Belay the backtalk and enjoy the moment, eh?"
Mother loosened her hug. "Do you want to see your new sister and brother?"
Isabelle sat up, stunned, and scrubbed the tears from one cheek. "Both? Two?"
"Twins, come and see!" said Suzanna, the midwife, who was standing by the cradle in the corner of the room.
Mama chuckled and gave Isabelle a little push. She slid off the bed and slowly approached the cradle. Two small blanket-wrapped bundles lay there, side-by-side, pink faces so much alike in contented sleep.
Suzanna's hand curved close to one. "This is your sister – she was born first."
Isabelle knelt beside the cradle.
"She is pretty, no?" Suzanna said.
Isabelle nodded. "But the best thing is--" She turned to Papa and grinned. "—forever and always, she and I are both in the middle!"
~.~
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Date: 2008-12-01 01:10 am (UTC)This is just what I needed. Thank you! I loves to see Jack all fiercely Papa-like, makes my heart go all a-flutter!
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Date: 2008-12-01 01:16 am (UTC)Thank you for the quick feedback, I really appreciate it.
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Date: 2008-12-01 01:14 am (UTC)Twins! A brilliant use of the prompt, and I adore Jack comforting Isabelle, Will managing Jamie, and Elizabeth loving them all.
Sweet and vivid and tender - vintage Geekmama! Thank you so much for posting this.
I hope everything is coming together at home ♥
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Date: 2008-12-01 01:25 am (UTC)So busy.
But one must grab those plot bunnies as they go by, right? And I just needed something happy.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, too!
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Date: 2008-12-01 01:34 am (UTC)I've been in dire need of something happy, too - thanks again for this wonderful story ♥
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Date: 2008-12-01 02:43 am (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2008-12-01 02:53 am (UTC)My Thanksgiving was lovely -- went to my daughter and son-in-law's in Santa Barbara and she cooked (mostly). We even went in the spa, which was nice!
Yay for no fights and family togetherness! Yes, that's a successful holiday. *g*
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Date: 2008-12-01 03:16 pm (UTC)Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it. :D
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Date: 2008-12-01 04:53 pm (UTC)I'm glad to know the end worked for you, I wasn't sure it was quite enough. There's a rhythm to these things, you know?
Thanks again for looking it over, and commenting here. I really appreciate it!
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Date: 2008-12-01 06:13 pm (UTC)Thank you for letting me know you liked it!
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Date: 2008-12-01 09:01 pm (UTC)Oooh, I love your icon -- did you make it?
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Date: 2008-12-01 10:33 pm (UTC)It will be nice if we get to see Jack interact with kids in PotC4- I've always suspected he'd be good at that.
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Date: 2008-12-01 10:41 pm (UTC)As for this, I needed some fluff, as an antidote to RL, and I'm so glad you and quite a few others felt the same. Thank you for commenting!
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Date: 2008-12-02 02:57 am (UTC)LOL. Even in the middle of festivities, somebody's gotta be the heavy, and it's usually Mom. Nice to see it's Dad for a change. Cute!
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Date: 2008-12-02 04:18 am (UTC)Looks like the muses will prevail, regardless of the trials and tribulations of life. Funny how they just pop up, isn't it? Somewhere in there is a testimonial to our obsession.
Being the oldest (by a long shot!) it's difficult to imagine what the middle would be like, but I've certainly heard tell. Take heart, Isabelle. It's not all bad!
Good stuff!
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Date: 2008-12-02 12:49 pm (UTC)You know, now I'm seeing Jack with head lice....
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Date: 2008-12-02 03:20 pm (UTC)I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for commenting!
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Date: 2008-12-02 03:32 pm (UTC)I love the little twinsies. I'm such a sap! Baby!fic always makes me smile. And we're stuck on the name Isabelle, aren't we? *G*
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Date: 2008-12-02 03:56 pm (UTC)Kerosene works, too. (Never mind how I know.)
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Date: 2008-12-03 02:18 pm (UTC)There you go! But yes, the thought of treating all that hair... :((
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Date: 2008-12-03 02:16 pm (UTC)Well, he is a sailor -- he had to be doing something during those ten years without the Pearl. ;)
As for Isabelle, I keep thinking about that chapter of Outlaws and Inlaws in which Will picks up Jack's mother -- I always want to hear more about that, and figured if Elizabeth had a girl child by Jack, they'd name her Isabelle, too.
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Date: 2008-12-03 12:48 pm (UTC)This is so great - we need a lot more of that!
Just the picture! I mean, they're all there: Will, Jack, Liz, Jamie, Isabelle and the new borns - just soooooo harmonic! *sighs*
I LOVE that Will is there, too, and I love that you let Jamie be his. Cannon and still Sparrabeth!!
*hugs* Thank you for making my day!!
<3
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