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Have had great difficulty writing anything at all for the last month or more for various reasons, although I managed to turn in my [livejournal.com profile] merrypirates story after two deadline extensions, and then this piece of post-AWE fluff, set between Home for the Holidays and Hero, popped into my head on seeing the drabble prompt of the week at [livejournal.com profile] blackpearsails...



~ The Middle Child ~

It was Jack who finally found her, in the ornate great cabin of that old galley she'd so admired, deep in the Cove.

"Quite a nest you've made here, love," he remarked evenly, peering into the darkness of her little cave, piles of dusty velvet and brocade draped over a carved table.

The great eyes glittered with tears.

He sat down outside, cross-legged, and held out his hands. "Come here."

She obeyed, emerging with a sob, and curled in his lap, clinging. He let her weep, murmuring nonsense against her dark, tangled hair. Eventually the storm slackened, and he pulled out his fine new handkerchief and helped her 'swab the decks'.

"What were you thinking, running off?" he scolded gently. "Your mother needs you!"

Her lip quivered. "Joe Harvey says I'm in the middle now, and she won't have time for me."

"Joe Harvey's a bloody little liar and should be well thrashed – and you, too, for believing him." He gave her a pinch on the backside and narrowed his eyes. "Don't you know she'd be here herself, if she could get out of bed? "

"Is she all right?"

"She's fine, or will be, once she knows you're safe. She was askin' for you, and was a mite upset when we couldn't find you. Had half the Cove in an uproar lookin' for you."

"Oh!" She flushed. "Can we go back?"

*
Ignoring her older brother's annoyed exclamation, and Captain Teague's relieved one, Isabelle let go of her Papa's hand and ran to where Mama lay with arms outstretched, pale but smiling, in the big bed.

"My darling!" were the delightful words Isabelle heard as she was drawn close, and she choked, "I'm sorry, Mama," crying again.

"You should be!" she heard Jamie exclaim behind her. "We've been—"

"Jamie!" Captain Turner said sharply from where he sat beside Mama, on the opposite side of the bed.

"Oh, all right. But Father—"

"All's well as ends well, lad," Papa cut in. "Belay the backtalk and enjoy the moment, eh?"

Mother loosened her hug. "Do you want to see your new sister and brother?"

Isabelle sat up, stunned, and scrubbed the tears from one cheek. "Both? Two?"

"Twins, come and see!" said Suzanna, the midwife, who was standing by the cradle in the corner of the room.

Mama chuckled and gave Isabelle a little push. She slid off the bed and slowly approached the cradle. Two small blanket-wrapped bundles lay there, side-by-side, pink faces so much alike in contented sleep.

Suzanna's hand curved close to one. "This is your sister – she was born first."

Isabelle knelt beside the cradle.

"She is pretty, no?" Suzanna said.

Isabelle nodded. "But the best thing is--" She turned to Papa and grinned. "—forever and always, she and I are both in the middle!"



~.~

Date: 2008-12-01 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary684.livejournal.com
*huggles post-AWE fluff*

This is just what I needed. Thank you! I loves to see Jack all fiercely Papa-like, makes my heart go all a-flutter!

Date: 2008-12-01 01:16 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it. I have a terrible weakness for family dynamics, and most people can relate to the same issues, I think (even if some would rather forget them *g*).

Thank you for the quick feedback, I really appreciate it.

Date: 2008-12-01 01:14 am (UTC)
ext_18053: (jwemanip)
From: [identity profile] djarum99.livejournal.com
Oh, that's wonderful! I love, love, love the idea of the three of them together, and happy.

Twins! A brilliant use of the prompt, and I adore Jack comforting Isabelle, Will managing Jamie, and Elizabeth loving them all.

Sweet and vivid and tender - vintage Geekmama! Thank you so much for posting this.

I hope everything is coming together at home ♥

Date: 2008-12-01 01:25 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
The tile work was finished yesterday, the baseboards installed today and will be painted tomorrow, while the drapes are reinstalled, the new couch delivered, the electrical work inspected, etc. In the meantime I'm continuing getting things washed and put away, an enormous job. But it's getting there, and I hope to have the Christmas decorations up by this time next week.

So busy.

But one must grab those plot bunnies as they go by, right? And I just needed something happy.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, too!

Date: 2008-12-01 01:34 am (UTC)
ext_18053: (jacksmile)
From: [identity profile] djarum99.livejournal.com
It sounds like you're almost there, and I'm sure it will be lovely! How wonderful to have it done in time for Christmas.

I've been in dire need of something happy, too - thanks again for this wonderful story ♥

Date: 2008-12-01 01:38 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
You're very very welcome! I hope the holidays, just past and coming up, will be joyous times for you and yours.

Date: 2008-12-01 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cbtreks.livejournal.com
I have to admit, I haven't read this series yet (I'm catching up on fic but still waaaaay behind) - maybe a bit here and there, I'm not sure. I did enjoy this story!

Date: 2008-12-01 02:18 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm very glad to know it was evident enough what was going on without reading the other stories!

Date: 2008-12-01 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hendercats.livejournal.com
Awwwww... *sniffle* Fluffy, yes, but beautiful. Love that Jack's the one who finds her, and his new hanky is a lovely detail.

Date: 2008-12-01 02:43 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you, ma'am. I'm so glad you liked it. I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving back there!

*hugs*

Date: 2008-12-01 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hendercats.livejournal.com
Very nice Thanksgiving, thank you! Kids both home, no huge fights - that's a winner in my book. ;) And yours? From your other responses it looks like the work's nearing an end at your place? (yay!)

Date: 2008-12-01 02:53 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
The inside work is getting there, at least for the professionals. There's a lot of sorting out and getting rid of to do, which will take time on my part. I hope to have things tidied up for Christmas, though. The outside work (patio cover, cement work, painting) will begin pretty soon, but hopefully will be done by the end of January. The house is 46 years old, after all, and my Dad did the redecorating himself, when he retired in the mid-70's. It was time to do a little updating. But I think I'd go out of my mind if it was more extensive.

My Thanksgiving was lovely -- went to my daughter and son-in-law's in Santa Barbara and she cooked (mostly). We even went in the spa, which was nice!

Yay for no fights and family togetherness! Yes, that's a successful holiday. *g*
Edited Date: 2008-12-01 02:55 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-12-01 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
Babies are the best--they smell so doggone sweet! Jack's a darling when you're stressed--a safe harbor for the littlest pirates. Thanks sweetie for the sweetness, so much finer than pecan pie.

Date: 2008-12-01 04:56 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Mmmm... pecan pie is pretty darn good. A grand compliment! I'm glad to have given you a smile. :)

Date: 2008-12-01 09:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p0wdermonkey.livejournal.com
That's lovely! Is it very evil of me to wonder if human twins, like kittens, can have different fathers?

Date: 2008-12-01 03:16 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Monkey!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I was thinking the same thing...

Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it. :D

Date: 2008-12-01 01:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penknife.livejournal.com
Aww! This is cute.

Date: 2008-12-01 03:16 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2008-12-01 02:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aravah.livejournal.com
This brought a tear to my eye. Lovely. :)

Date: 2008-12-01 03:18 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2008-12-01 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hereswith.livejournal.com
Sometimes you need something fluffy, and this is very nice fluff! It's great to see them all happy, and not at odds with each other. Eventually the storm slackened, and he pulled out his fine new handkerchief and helped her 'swab the decks'. Really liked that, as well as Isabelle's statement there at the end!

Date: 2008-12-01 04:53 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I was certainly needing something fluffy, this last month has left me feeling so scattered, and Christmas just around the corner -- argh!

I'm glad to know the end worked for you, I wasn't sure it was quite enough. There's a rhythm to these things, you know?

Thanks again for looking it over, and commenting here. I really appreciate it!

Date: 2008-12-01 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cymbeline.livejournal.com
Awwwwwww! I really enjoyed this. baby!fluff is always fun to read!

Date: 2008-12-01 06:13 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I think so, too. :)

Thank you for letting me know you liked it!

Date: 2008-12-01 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ditte3.livejournal.com
Sweet.Heartwarming.You always make me happy with your stories.

Date: 2008-12-01 06:19 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm so glad! Thank you for letting me know. :)

Date: 2008-12-01 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] florencia7.livejournal.com
That was beautiful! So heartwarming. Wonderful drabble.

Date: 2008-12-01 09:01 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Oooh, I love your icon -- did you make it?

Date: 2008-12-01 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] florencia7.livejournal.com
lol No! I have NO idea how to make animated icons ^^ This icon was made by [livejournal.com profile] avenahar_laguz and posted in this community: [livejournal.com profile] magic_icon :)

Date: 2008-12-01 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharklady35.livejournal.com
'Got to echo what everyone else said: it's a sweet little scene, of the sort we all need once in a while.

It will be nice if we get to see Jack interact with kids in PotC4- I've always suspected he'd be good at that.

Date: 2008-12-01 10:41 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I've thought the same thing, and it would be quite Disneyish, I'd think. Might be cute. And I do hope they at least refer to the previous movies in the new one -- or maybe Orlando and Keira would even be up for doing a cameo appearance (which could be good, depending on the content). Lots to think about.

As for this, I needed some fluff, as an antidote to RL, and I'm so glad you and quite a few others felt the same. Thank you for commenting!
Edited Date: 2008-12-01 10:41 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-12-02 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com
"Jamie!" Captain Turner said sharply from where he sat beside Mama, on the opposite side of the bed.

LOL. Even in the middle of festivities, somebody's gotta be the heavy, and it's usually Mom. Nice to see it's Dad for a change. Cute!

Date: 2008-12-02 03:09 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! It's certainly fun to play in this particular universe, where everything has worked out for all of them. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Date: 2008-12-02 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] compassrose7577.livejournal.com
Twins? Papa Jack is poppin' his buttons now!

Looks like the muses will prevail, regardless of the trials and tribulations of life. Funny how they just pop up, isn't it? Somewhere in there is a testimonial to our obsession.

Being the oldest (by a long shot!) it's difficult to imagine what the middle would be like, but I've certainly heard tell. Take heart, Isabelle. It's not all bad!

Good stuff!

Date: 2008-12-02 04:28 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I was very glad to realize the muse wasn't as dead as I'd thought. Glad you enjoyed this!

Date: 2008-12-02 12:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artaxastra.livejournal.com
AWWW! Lovely! Twinsies! That's what Jack needs, pulling his hair and peeing on him! *g*

You know, now I'm seeing Jack with head lice....

Date: 2008-12-02 03:20 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I've often wondered what he would do in such an event -- tea tree oil? It could happen...

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for commenting!

Date: 2008-12-02 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artaxastra.livejournal.com
The problem is that tea tree oil comes from Australia, so I doubt Jack has any! *g*

I love the little twinsies. I'm such a sap! Baby!fic always makes me smile. And we're stuck on the name Isabelle, aren't we? *G*

Date: 2008-12-02 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharklady35.livejournal.com
> The problem is that tea tree oil comes from Australia, so I doubt Jack has any! <

Kerosene works, too. (Never mind how I know.)

Date: 2008-12-03 02:18 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Kerosene works, too.

There you go! But yes, the thought of treating all that hair... :((

Date: 2008-12-03 02:16 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
tea tree oil comes from Australia, so I doubt Jack has any! *g*

Well, he is a sailor -- he had to be doing something during those ten years without the Pearl. ;)

As for Isabelle, I keep thinking about that chapter of Outlaws and Inlaws in which Will picks up Jack's mother -- I always want to hear more about that, and figured if Elizabeth had a girl child by Jack, they'd name her Isabelle, too.

Date: 2008-12-04 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artaxastra.livejournal.com
Had thought the same thing. That their daughter would have to be Isabelle. I always wonder how Will and Isabelle are getting along on the Dutchman!

Date: 2008-12-03 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparrows-lass.livejournal.com
AWWWWWW!!!
This is so great - we need a lot more of that!
Just the picture! I mean, they're all there: Will, Jack, Liz, Jamie, Isabelle and the new borns - just soooooo harmonic! *sighs*
I LOVE that Will is there, too, and I love that you let Jamie be his. Cannon and still Sparrabeth!!
*hugs* Thank you for making my day!!

<3

Date: 2008-12-03 02:09 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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