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350 words of breakfast with the captain, theme: "Advance". Many thanks to my dear [livejournal.com profile] hereswith for beta reading, editing, and excellent suggestions.

Previous bits...

1. Tortuga
2. Happiness
3. Festive
4. Last Minute
5. Calm
6. Truth
7. Bargain
8. Spook
9. Down
10. Wounds
11. Moon
12. Monsters
13. Beauty
14. Name
15. History
16. Service
17. Advice
18. Captain
19. Awe
20. Cross
21. "You've made a big mistake"
22. Heroism
23. Gold
24. Echo
25. Greed




And here's today's...

26. Advance



~ An Execrable Business, continued...


After Barbossa left, Joe said, quietly, but with conviction and a worried look, “That is a dangerous man!”

Jack shrugged. “He’s all right, mostly. I’ve known him a long time, he was second to Tobias when I came aboard the Pearl. It don’t sit well with him that I rose from bilgewater stowaway to the captaincy. But he’s a good sailor and a handy swordsman to have at one’s back. We’ve saved each others’ hides a time or two.”

“You trust him?” Joe sounded incredulous.

“Wouldn’t go that far,” Jack said, then called, “Come!” for there’d been another knock on the cabin door.

It was Bootstrap who came in and closed it behind him. “You've a silver tongue in that head of yours, Jack. Barbossa looks almost pleased! How the devil do you do it?”

“That’s why I’m captain, ain’t it?" Jack poured out more rum, a tot for each of them. "Here, Bill, have some breakfast.”

Bootstrap rolled his eyes some, but he accepted the glass. “Got those fellows stashed in the brig. They’re a bit worse for wear, but they’ll live.”

“Good. We’ll toss ‘em overboard when we set sail. They’ll probably make it to shore from here, if they can swim. In the meantime, I’m pleased you’ve begun passing the word for the lads. Time and tide, and all that. I want to start provisioning soon as it’s light. Fortunately we’ve plenty of scratch to fund this charitable venture. Good thing I like you, Bill. I wouldn’t do it for just anyone.”

“No. And you wouldn’t do it for me, either.”

Jack pouted. “I might do it for you. I was thinking about it.”

Bill shook his head. “I’m looking forward to meeting your new ‘cabin boy’. She must be something special.”

Jack’s brain conjured a vision of Nell as she had appeared on her return from the springs, and he could not maintain the pout, not for the life of him. “You might say so,” he said slowly, as though even-handedly considering the assessment. But when Joe started laughing, Jack couldn’t help grinning like a fool.


TBC...

Date: 2009-02-04 03:02 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] luvvycat.livejournal.com
Hee hee! I like how Bootstrap well and truly has Jack's number in this chapter! He knows Jack SO well! :-)

Also good to see how Joe has Barbossa's number, too. I can see where Anamaria gets her "sharp-cookiedness" from! ;-)

Another fantastic installment! Looking forward to when Nell at last comes aboard, and makes her acquaintance with the Pearl and her crew (and vice-versa!) ...


Date: 2009-02-04 03:26 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Bootstrap has known Jack just as long as Barbossa, but liked him from the start (see [livejournal.com profile] tessabeth's In the First Year of their Acquaintance).

Won't be long at all now before the Pearl sets sail! Thank you for commenting, and so quickly, too!

Date: 2009-02-04 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mindyracal.livejournal.com
I can't wait for the adventures at sea! Woot!

Date: 2009-02-05 03:31 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-04 04:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aravah.livejournal.com
Great instalment. :) Looking forward to more.

Date: 2009-02-05 03:32 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! More in the morning. :))

Date: 2009-02-04 04:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] djarum99.livejournal.com
Jack has it baaaad :-)

I really like Joe, and of course he's right about Barbossa. And Bootstrap is right about Jack and loves him anyway :-)

Thanks for posting these every day! I look forward to each one ♥

Date: 2009-02-05 03:35 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate Plot Bunny)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Glad you're enjoying the snippet-a-day, it's been fun to write that way, too. More in the morning! Thank you for commenting!

Date: 2009-02-05 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] florencia7.livejournal.com
"Good thing I like you, Bill. I wouldn’t do it for just anyone.” / “No. And you wouldn’t do it for me, either.” / Jack pouted. “I might do it for you. I was thinking about it.”" - That was just PRECIOUS! ^^ I loved it! Awesome dialogue.

This is a such a great tale! I can't wait - as always - for the next installment :)

Date: 2009-02-05 03:47 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!

Date: 2009-02-05 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
Oh, my, Jack Sparrow, do you suppose there's a heredity thang to himself--all tricksters before and most after somehow related, 3rd cousins or some such--I swear I can just see his sparkling eyes, then his sweet pout--and hear himself clear as I hear my gatitos cussing for supper. I know he can be a hard scary man, steel himself to whatever is at hand (that look on his face when he kills Barbossa, man!). Yet even knowing that, I'd trust him and thank you for more story.

Date: 2009-02-05 06:10 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Hee! But you're right, he's trustworthy, when it really matters. So happy you enjoyed! More in the morning. And thank you for the comments! :))

Date: 2009-02-06 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kseenaa.livejournal.com
Oh, wonderful. :-) Joe is perfectly right, as Jack will soon know I guess. And Bill is just wonderful here. :-)

Date: 2009-02-07 09:44 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Jack is wary, but not wary enough, as we know. So happy you liked this!

Date: 2009-03-06 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] compassrose7577.livejournal.com
Bill knows Jack all too well! But then, these guys have spent enough time together, what with the hours and hours, days and days, weeks and weeks, and months and months of time on their hands, how could they not?

Don't answer that! They're men. 'Nuf said.

Hopefully, Jack is planning on untying these guys before he pitches them over the rail... or maybe not. If they were meant to live, they'd find a way, wouldn't they?

".... grinning like a fool..." Ahhhh, that paints a picture!

Date: 2009-03-06 04:39 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack: That Lovely Rogue by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Ahhhh, that paints a picture!

It's an awfully cute grin. ;) So glad you're enjoying the story!

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