Drabble #17
Aug. 22nd, 2009 11:39 amAnother in the ongoing series, inspired by
pearlseed's wonderful drabble, here's a companion to #16, this time from Harry's pov...
~ Immolation ~
Harry's heart, blood, breath, world stopped in that moment, she was so close to Jack's lips she could see only him, feel his warm rum-and-gold breath against her cheek. In her mind's eye, she leaned just a dusky hair's breadth closer, melding warm lips to his and from that point, consummation, swift, thorough, passionate consummation would surely ignite and immolate both fear and desire.
She was singularly stunned on waking to find that though fear had certainly vanished, desire yet burned bright, and then brighter still when she opened her eyes to find Jack (her Pirate!) watching, and then smiling.
~ Immolation ~
Harry's heart, blood, breath, world stopped in that moment, she was so close to Jack's lips she could see only him, feel his warm rum-and-gold breath against her cheek. In her mind's eye, she leaned just a dusky hair's breadth closer, melding warm lips to his and from that point, consummation, swift, thorough, passionate consummation would surely ignite and immolate both fear and desire.
She was singularly stunned on waking to find that though fear had certainly vanished, desire yet burned bright, and then brighter still when she opened her eyes to find Jack (her Pirate!) watching, and then smiling.
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Date: 2009-08-22 07:56 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-08-22 11:01 pm (UTC)She was singularly stunned on waking to find that though fear had certainly vanished, desire yet burned bright, and then brighter still when she opened her eyes to find Jack (her Pirate!) watching, and then smiling.
Aaaah, yes! Who wouldn't be overcome with desire, waking up to a freshly-ravished (and having been freshly ravished by!) Captain Jack Sparrow! *sigh* ;-)
Thank you for revisiting your wonderful Jack/Harry universe! (Of course, now you've made me want to go back and read the entire series again!) ;-)
Fantastic drabble! Just utterly lovely! :-)
-- Cat
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Date: 2009-08-23 03:53 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-08-23 04:09 am (UTC)I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!
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Date: 2009-08-23 06:55 am (UTC)Thank you so for her gracious arrival. It's a very lovely thought that the fear be burned away!
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