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Wow, I should maybe warn for extreme fluff here, but hey: mothers are like this. I know from experience.

100 words, Post-AWE, and written for the current drabble challenge at [livejournal.com profile] blackpearlsails.



~ Nonpareil ~


Elizabeth, taking her ease with young Jamie, who was plump and drowsy with milk, barely looked up when Jack walked in.

"You're awfully proud of that mite," Jack smiled.

"Isn't he beautiful? The best thing I've ever done."

"Let me have him, here." Jack scooped him up with a practiced air, and the baby blinked and gave a sleepy, happy gurgle. "There you are, my fine lad," said Jack. "Your Mum and Da may've given you beauty, but it's me as'll show you how to be a pirate."

"And a good man," Elizabeth added, her proud gaze on Jack now.


~.~

Date: 2009-09-23 05:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whensheflies.livejournal.com
Oh oh oh I loved this. Such a tender moment.

Date: 2009-09-23 05:47 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Those tender moments make up for a lot of the hard times.
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Date: 2009-09-23 01:34 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2009-09-23 11:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cbtreks.livejournal.com
That was very sweet - I loved it!

Date: 2009-09-23 01:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm very happy you enjoyed it. :)

Date: 2009-09-23 11:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinityday.livejournal.com
Oh, I might just die of the fluff here. In the kindest possible way.

Date: 2009-09-23 01:33 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
LOL! But fluff reflects reality, too, you know. *g*

Date: 2009-09-23 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinityday.livejournal.com
I know, but I still don't think it's healthy for my heart to melt like it did from reading this.

Date: 2009-09-23 01:37 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Awwwww! Thank you!

*hugs*

Date: 2009-09-23 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinityday.livejournal.com
Seriously, my neighbours might start to get concerned about the strength and frequency of the "aww"s coming from my apartment.

Okay, I'll stop. But I just had to let you know that I really did adore this.

Date: 2009-09-23 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharklady35.livejournal.com
Jack is so cute when he's being paternal!

Date: 2009-09-23 02:25 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Babies make everything new again -- even Jack, I think. (Witness how many stories you hear about middle-aged men being happy as clams to be new fathers -- including JD, of course.)

Date: 2009-09-23 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artaxastra.livejournal.com
Awwww! *is ded of cute*

Date: 2009-09-24 12:22 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you!

Date: 2009-09-23 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] felaine.livejournal.com
That's so sweet, and still IC for Jack.
*makes kissy noises at the laptop sreen*
Felaine

Date: 2009-09-24 12:23 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I think Jack is up to most challenges. *g* Thank you for commenting -- I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2009-09-23 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Why does it seem absolutely right that Jack would know how to pick up and hold a baby? I adore the way he talks to the kid, too. Bravissima.

Date: 2009-09-24 12:27 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I expect Jack's run across a baby or two in his checkered past. ;)

Date: 2009-09-23 09:26 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] luvvycat.livejournal.com
Aaaaaw! Love your "warm-fuzzy" Jack, in proud and preening Uncle mode!

I can easily see Elizabeth falling in love with Jack all over again, simply for the way he dotes on her son.

Definitely a "wibbles" moment! :-)

Great drabble! So very sweet!

-- Cat

Date: 2009-09-24 12:28 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. (Apparently a lot of us needed some fluff.)

Date: 2009-09-23 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] florencia7.livejournal.com
Aww Such a sweet scene! Beautiful drabble :]

Date: 2009-09-24 12:29 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

Date: 2009-09-23 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
Just pure-d lovely darlin' Miz Geekmama, love their voices with a sleepy full baby between. Love it that she mothers both, switching from her baby boy to the bigger one with such ease and it always tickles me when Jack is familiar with babies and their peculiar care. Yep, lots to be proud of in this one.

Date: 2009-09-24 12:30 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
it always tickles me when Jack is familiar with babies and their peculiar care.

Me, too. Nothing makes the world new again like a baby. Thank you for commenting, I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

Praise for this Fluffiness

Date: 2009-09-24 12:35 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This is so cute! Just what I needed too, with all the stress of RL, this made everything seem all right for a few moments. Thanks for putting a big smile on my face.
Ravin *raising a bottle of Rum to Captain Geek Mama*

Re: Praise for this Fluffiness

Date: 2009-09-24 12:59 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Apparently it's the sort of thing we all needed, me included! I'm so happy to know you enjoyed it! And thank you for the toast, too!!

Date: 2009-09-24 07:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puddytat1972.livejournal.com
It's a very sweet moment between these two. We don't see Jack in this light often enough. Thank you for this glimpse into his softer side.

Date: 2009-09-24 01:57 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E Fire by Erinya)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
He would certainly deny he has a softer side, but I think he'd have an awful lot of fun with baby Turner. *g* So glad you enjoyed this -- thank you for commenting!

Date: 2009-09-28 03:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiki148.livejournal.com
Lovely!! :)
Lizzie proud of them two.^^
I love your Turner's and Uncle Jack. It's so sweet relationship!

Date: 2009-09-28 03:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

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