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A little post-maelstrom angst, a drabble and a half for the 'Friends' prompt at [livejournal.com profile] blackpearlsails...



~ After the Storm ~

She enters without knocking. Cornered, he swears as she closes the door. “What now, Mrs. Turner?”

She hesitates.

Almost he’d escaped this. It’s nearly time, the sea is calm, the sun is shining outside. The longboat’s being readied. Her bridegroom is waiting.

“I… I had hoped—“

“For what? My blessing, perhaps?”

“Something of the sort,” she admits. “And that we could part friends.”

“Friends? We were never friends.”

Oh, lord. Sang-froid trumped by a 'Mrs.'

On cue, her lips curve, wistful, pitying. She raises a hand, lets it fall, and says one word: “Always.”

He snatches up his hat. Heads for the door, saying, “The cabin’s yours, my liege. No doubt you’ll like to clean up before your assignation.”

As he blows past, there’s a moment’s satisfaction at the flush mounting her cheeks, but once he shuts her in, he pauses in the shadows, teeth set, heart thudding.

Always.


~.~





Date: 2012-04-01 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sevanatwonights.livejournal.com
Been a lurker for quite some time but this is an interesting drabble. So I had to comment. A sad but hopeful glimpse of hopefully better tomorrows for these two. I find this to be a realistic glimpse into Sparrowbeth. And the line: Always colors the mystery of this particular relationship perfectly. Their relationship was always defined and yet undefined. And the ending, I would say it's a hell of a time for Jack to realize his feelings for her but it's better then than him remaining ignorant unto his grave.
Edited Date: 2012-04-01 10:24 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-04-01 11:29 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Between by notglassdoll)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you for de-lurking to comment here.

A sad but hopeful glimpse of hopefully better tomorrows for these two.

I've written a lot of fic about the happier moments, but what's interesting about post-sequel Jack/Elizabeth is that underlying angst, that realistic glimpse you're talking about.

I would say it's a hell of a time for Jack to realize his feelings for her

I think he's always known they could never be just friends.

Thank you again for reading and for your thoughtful comments-- most appreciated!
Edited Date: 2012-04-01 11:29 pm (UTC)

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