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I was tempted to write something slightly slashy for [livejournal.com profile] cjk1701, but thought it might shock the children too much. Her request:



~ Apprehension ~


There were lowered voices, and the sounds of preparations being made; the faint sea motion felt through the table… the sole… the hull of the Black Pearl; and above all that, the cacophony of the pain in his leg, which he expected would presently rise to deafen him, would likely undo him. He hoped he would not shame himself. He hoped he would live.

He very much wished himself elsewhere.

“Here. Sit up, a bit, and drink this, Commodore.”

James just had time to open his eyes at Jack’s command before he was being helped to raise himself and a vial was set to his lips and its contents tilted ruthlessly down his throat. The bitterness of it was only partially masked with some kind of sweetening, and he made a horrid face, and gulped thankfully at the rum and water he was given by way of a chaser.

“What was that?” he gasped, when he could.

“Laudanum. Would’ve thought you’d had it before, considering a couple of those scars you’ve kept hidden under that uniform.”

“The navy’s doctors are wary of drugging their patients,” James said, carefully. Pointedly.

Jack was undisturbed. Of course. “Hmmph!” he said, “Fortunate you’re with us an’ not them, then, ain’t it?”

The light words and cocked brow almost masked the concern in the dark eyes. James, already feeling tendrils of relief beginning to curl through him, replied, “It would seem so.” He closed his eyes again, but then smiled at the brief touch of a warm hand on his own.



~.~
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Date: 2005-03-28 02:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cjk1701.livejournal.com
It's *lovely*! Thank you. ...it could be pre-slash if I squinted just right.

I wonder what it is about dear James that we like to torture him just so. But then, Jack usually gets to cuddle him all better, so it all works out in the end.

...hope he doesn't lose the leg this time...

Date: 2005-03-28 02:29 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Well, he would definitely not "lose the leg" in my fic! But as for torturing him, maybe it's that stoic Naval bearing of his that makes it so irresistable.

Boy, you are speedy! I didn't even get a chance to tell you I'd posted it! Glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-03-28 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cjk1701.livejournal.com
I was reading through the f'list before bedtime, and this is a wonderful going to bed present. :)

Wanna pick something you'd like to see in the current Sparrington WiP? ;)

Stepping closer, he reached out hesitantly, cursing the room, bloody Norrington and his bloody nightmares, and the odd, half-guilty, protective motion that was guiding his hand to stroke over Norrington's sweaty hair lightly, almost tenderly.

Date: 2005-03-28 02:43 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Norrie by unen2gemismasin)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I do love h/c. But when are you going to post this? *whines*

Date: 2005-03-28 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elessil.livejournal.com
Poor James. Always getting hurt, just because he's so lovely stoic in bearing it.

This was a pretty little ficlet. Liked it a lot.

Date: 2005-03-28 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cjk1701.livejournal.com
*twitches* I'm going to finish one of my WiPs at one point; I swear! [livejournal.com profile] elessil promised to nag me until I did. I am writing, I'm just writing everything at once...

Going to post the first two bits of this thing I quoted above on [livejournal.com profile] rough_magic soonish (tomorrow or Wednesday), though, because I need feedback on the Jack voice. Bloody Sparrow and his bloody non-linear thinking.

Also, I'm going to do my best to work a backrub into that thing. One of my pervy kinks, James getting backrubs. ;)

Date: 2005-03-28 03:16 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Default)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'll look forward to seeing it on [livejournal.com profile] rough_magic then.

Date: 2005-03-28 03:20 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Commodore James)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thanks! With a prompt like "tense", what're you gonna do? I immediately thought: either sex or h/c. Of course, it didn't have to be Sparrington...I could've done some N/E or N/A again. Hmmm.

Date: 2005-03-28 03:22 pm (UTC)
ext_7904: (POTC-james-hmm?)
From: [identity profile] porridgebird.livejournal.com
Aww! I love it :))

Date: 2005-03-28 03:29 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Default)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
[Let's try this one more time...]

Poor Norrie. We do love to abuse him.

But, boy, that's sure nothin' to what [livejournal.com profile] tessabeth and [livejournal.com profile] viva_gloria are doing to poor Sparrow. SQUID!!!!

Glad you liked this one. :)

Date: 2005-03-28 03:31 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
[Jeesh, took me three times to post that right, and then I forget the right icon. I need a nap. Fortunately, I can take one, as I'm on SPRING BREAK!!]

Date: 2005-03-28 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cjk1701.livejournal.com
Actually, re-reading that very same prompt, "Norrington solo" and "tense" could well be masturbation. *ponders*

*runs away from the rabid plotbunnies* Aiiii!

Date: 2005-03-28 03:48 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Commodore James)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Well, yes, but that's sex.

It could also have been a "tense" situation during a Naval engagement -- an enemy trying to blow the Dauntless away, or something.

But that wouldn't be as much fun, of course. *g*

Date: 2005-03-28 04:11 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Commodore James)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
"Sigh-worthy" is a lovely compliment. Many thanks!

SQUIDDDD!!!

Date: 2005-03-28 04:42 pm (UTC)
ext_7904: (POTC-jack-dance)
From: [identity profile] porridgebird.livejournal.com
It's ok! I love your kitty icon!

And "poor Sparrow" you say... at least he's got all his fingers :)) And -- MAYBE -- FINALLY -- a namesake who appreciates him as he deserves. And will (I trust) demonstrate this accordingly. Y'know, eventually ;)

Re: SQUIDDDD!!!

Date: 2005-03-28 04:49 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack (blank by  unen2gemismasin))
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
And will (I trust) demonstrate this accordingly. Y'know, eventually ;)

Hopefully with Shaftoe TLC and Enoch's supply of pharmaceuticals he'll be feeling better in short order. ;)

Date: 2005-03-28 04:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doolabug.livejournal.com
mmmmm.... h/c!!!

Date: 2005-03-28 05:18 pm (UTC)

Date: 2005-03-28 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cacopheny.livejournal.com
:: blinks :: I feel stupid. What's h/c mean? XD

Date: 2005-03-28 05:26 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Default)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
hurt/comfort

How ya doin'? Have a happy Easter?

Re: SQUIDDDD!!!

Date: 2005-03-28 05:28 pm (UTC)
ext_7904: (poppy)
From: [identity profile] porridgebird.livejournal.com
Oh MAN... I want so sooo much to see them both get all fucked up on laudenum & get all schmoopy with each other. OK, I'm not holding my breath! But... *sigh*

Poppy icon for the occasion. Yeah I know, it's hard to tell.

Re: SQUIDDDD!!!

Date: 2005-03-28 05:51 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Default)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Poppy icon for the occasion. Yeah I know, it's hard to tell.

No, no! I can so tell! Great icon.

Date: 2005-03-28 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenthegypsy.livejournal.com
'Daftjen' strikes again! You know, the part of me that's always adding addendums to comments that I have already posted.....

This be an addendum to the comment I made over at BPS (which I cannot, for some reason, access right now....((bloody technology)))


"but then smiled at the brief touch of a warm hand on his own."

I really like the unspoken and mostly unacknowledged friendship (*just* friendship!)that you create between Jack and Norrington throughout your writings. As I've said before, I have always seen these two as more alike than not....though one stands on one side of the law, and the other, well, he just sort of saunters all over it!

Loved it. Could do with more sometime....!

Date: 2005-03-28 06:03 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Commodore James)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm so happy you liked this well enough to comment on it again.

Yes, I (along with many others) do think they have a great deal in common. I'm wondering what the next movie will show us of their relationship.
From: [identity profile] kahva.livejournal.com
Okay, between the two of you, I now have a bunny nibbling on my ankle here at work, and I can't convince him that I've got waaaaaaaaaaaaay too many fics that need working on first! Help!

I'm also curious as to what scars Norrington has, and how he got them. (Tosses Norrington bunny to you). Makes us square now, you gave me a bunny, I toss you one. :) Have fun! :)

PS: Don't suppose I could talk you into a Will-let, could I? Theme, "heroes".
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