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A drabble (or more like a ficlet, at 300+ words), in honor of Father's Day, and for the current Drabble Challenge at Black Pearl Sails...



~ After Dinner Drinks ~



“Da, can I have some o’ that?”

Jack, who’d been in the midst of the first delightful sip, choked and coughed, eyes watering. When he’d recovered, he said, irritably, “Bloody hell, Imp! No! Yer barely seven: wouldn’t appreciate it, anyway!”

Tom scowled. “Maybe I would. You do, an’ everybody says I’m…”

“…a chip off the ol’ block. I know.” Jack frowned down at his little son, and had to acknowledge the truth of this. Too clever by half. And as for looks…

“Please, Da?” Tom made play with wide eyes and a familiar pout.

Jack’s own eyes narrowed. He said, finally, “Your mother’d have me hide, Tom. Kill-devil’s not for young lads, no matter whence they’ve sprung. But what say you to this?” He lowered his voice, and Tom leaned close, eagerly. “I’ll make you a half-cup of grog—well-watered, mind!—but from now on, while we’re here, you’ll stay out of our room in the mornings—no more breakin’ in without leave.”

“But…but Da!” Tom said, dismayed. “You’d both stay abed ‘til noon if it wasn’t for me!”

O, blissful thought!

Jack drawled, “Aye, well, your mother needs her… rest. As do I. So that’s the bargain. What say you, young Sparrow? Do we have an accord?” He held out his hand.

After a moments’ hesitation, the little hand closed on Jack’s. “Aye. We do,” said Tom, as they shook on it. Then, he wheedled, “But could you not make it a full cup? I’d sleep later, myself, like as not.”

Jack laughed, and his eyes gleamed as he ruffled his son’s dark hair. “Like as not, you young scallywag! All right, a full cup.” More water and lime won’t hurt him. “But remember: this is just between us two. Savvy?”

An answering gleam and a flashing grin. “Aye, Da, I savvy!”


~.~

Date: 2005-06-19 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenthegypsy.livejournal.com
Oh, so sweet!
“Please, Da?” Tom made play with wide eyes and a familiar pout.
I need to find young Tom and huggle him, quick!

Date: 2005-06-19 06:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I always thought it would be fun to have a little boy. At least I have one to write about, now. ;)

So happy you enjoyed!

Date: 2005-06-19 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sinister-beauty.livejournal.com
SQUEE!!!

That is just...the fricken most cute thing of my ENTIRE life. Lin, you just made my day!

And my oh my, who indeed is Mummy Sparrow?

Date: 2005-06-19 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sinister-beauty.livejournal.com
Why in the name of all god did I call you Lin? So sorry. Brain fart of incredible doom. -offers candy and rum in repentance?-

Date: 2005-06-19 08:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Actually, it's Sharon. And Candy (especially chocolate) and rum are always accepted. ;)

Date: 2005-06-19 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sinister-beauty.livejournal.com
Hurray! Chocolate and rum all around!

Date: 2005-06-19 08:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
So happy to have made you SQUEE!!

Tom is always fun to write. He's from Harry & the Pirate IV, and Mummy Sparrow is Harry (Henrietta, Governor Swann's sister).

Date: 2005-06-19 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yoiebear.livejournal.com
Ahhh, a little add to the Harry stories! *squee*

Date: 2005-06-19 08:36 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Yes--couldn't resist, for Father's Day. Glad you enjoyed it. ;)

Date: 2005-06-20 03:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yoiebear.livejournal.com
Always. Thanks for yet another insight into Jack's unique fathering ways.

Date: 2005-06-19 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com
That is just so bloody adorable!

Date: 2005-06-19 08:39 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Hee! Glad you enjoyed it. ;)

Date: 2005-06-19 07:11 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com
Eeeeeee, so cute!

Date: 2005-06-19 08:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;)

Date: 2005-06-19 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erinya.livejournal.com
Hehe...very cute...and Jack and Harry will finally get some alone time!

I can just imagine the exchange between the two adults when Harry wonders why young Tom is suddenly being so good...

Date: 2005-06-19 08:44 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I can just imagine the exchange between the two adults when Harry wonders why young Tom is suddenly being so good...

Yes, I was thinking I might have to write that scene...

Glad you liked it! ;)

Date: 2005-06-19 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jedipirate.livejournal.com
hehehehe So cute! XD Daddy Jack. I want to squeeze him.

Date: 2005-06-19 08:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
ICON!! <3<3<3<3<3<3

Thanks! Glad you liked Daddy Jack and his mischievous laddie. ;)


Date: 2005-06-19 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jedipirate.livejournal.com
heheheh, thanks. XD

Now methinks I need to go read the other stuff in this universe. I'd been avoiding it, since I for a fact that when I like a story, it positively sucks me in and takes over my life until I manage to finish every last bit of it.

I think I'll wait 'til my class is over in a couple of weeks. =P

Date: 2005-06-19 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jedipirate.livejournal.com
That *should* be... "since I know for a fact." Would be nice if I could type properly.

Date: 2005-06-19 11:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
ICON!!!

I think I'll wait 'til my class is over in a couple of weeks. =P

I know what you mean. I have two weeks to go before vacation, and I am really counting the days!

Date: 2005-06-19 11:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tiggothy.livejournal.com
*sque-bounce*

So adorabley wonderful and cute and lovely *grin* *bounce*

One of these days I will get around to reading Harry & the Pirate, but... there's just so much of it... *faints at the thought*

Date: 2005-06-20 06:30 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
One of these days I will get around to reading Harry & the Pirate, but... there's just so much of it...

I know. I'm working on the 65th chapter (not counting the little 'deleted scenes', and that three chapter story that is background material for the fourth one). Still, I think it would translate to between 250 or 300 pages, if it were printed. The chapters in the first story are quite short; the ones I've been writing lately run to 4 or 5 thousand words. It still amazes me that I actually managed to write and finish several multi-chapter stories, and that other people actually seem to like my work.

When I finish Harry IV, I'm going to be devoting some time to reading others' work, for a while, including yours! It's nice that you put up [livejournal.com profile] tiggs_fics, so they're easy to find!

Glad you enjoyed this little scene. Tom is a lot of fun to write. Thanks for commenting.

Date: 2005-06-20 07:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tiggothy.livejournal.com
One word of warning about my stuff - it improves noticably over time, but I've not got round to taking down the older stuff ;-)

Date: 2005-06-20 08:00 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
It's the same with mine--the second H&theP story is better than the first, I think, although I did go back and do a lot of editing on the first one, with the patient help of [livejournal.com profile] tessabeth, who is one of the best writers I've ever read anywhere. The old version of H&theP is still up on Skyhawk.com, but the newer one is at [livejournal.com profile] harry_and_jack, and on ff.net.
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Date: 2005-06-20 06:43 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Tom is fun to write!

I think sleeping in is every parent's dream! And introducing your offspring to alcoholic beverages is a right of passage many people can relate to.

Glad you enjoyed this. ;)

Date: 2005-06-20 08:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leeloo3.livejournal.com
Oh, that's so cute! Great idea, so imaginable, love it :)

Date: 2005-06-20 08:48 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm very glad you liked it. :)

Date: 2005-06-20 11:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hereswith.livejournal.com
Sweet, funny and absolutely delightful! And it's always so nice with more Harry snippets :-)

Date: 2005-06-21 11:29 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed this. :)

Date: 2005-06-21 11:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hendercats.livejournal.com
Awwwwww.... Always love seeing Tom be impish. And Jack being Dad-ish. Great fun!

Date: 2005-06-21 11:31 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thanks! So happy you liked it. ;)

Date: 2005-06-21 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] torn-eledhwen.livejournal.com
So sweet. I loved it!

Date: 2005-06-21 02:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
So happy you enjoyed it! :)

Date: 2005-06-29 01:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tseek-unique.livejournal.com
Jack's interaction with Tom is so delightful! Your dialogue and characterizations truly give life to this sweet, sweet piece. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 2005-06-30 07:27 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I couldn't resist doing a "Jack as Daddy" ficlet for Father's Day. He and Tom are great fun to write together! So happy you enjoyed it. :)

And I really LOVE that icon!!

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