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More Dark of the Moon, in which Bootstrap and Captain Tobias are of very little help.

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Bill!

Bootstrap turned and grinned. “Jack! That was fast! Didn’t I tell you to slow down and take your time with the ladies? I’m tellin’ you, mate, it makes for a better experience all around…”

“Oh, shut up!” snapped Jack, testily. He lowered his voice.  “I’ve barely laid a hand on ‘er and she’s weepin’ fit to be tied! Y’don’t think I could bunk in with you and let ‘er have my cabin ‘til we’re rid of ‘er – I’d still be close that way…”

“Martin’s in with me and there’s barely room to breathe,” said Bill. “The cabins are full up – you know that! You could swing a hammock with the lads, but then who’d keep an eye on her, eh? No, Jack. You’ve won her, now you get to look after her.”

Jack groaned.

Bill chuckled. “Not as convenient as you’d imagined, I’ll lay. That was a good fight, though. How’s the shoulder?”

“Still bleedin’ all over me shirt. Will you help me with it?”

“Let’s see it.”

Jack undid the ties on his shirt and pulled it aside, baring the cut which was high up on his left arm.

Bootstrap took him and pulled him around to the lamplight, the better to see it. “Doesn’t look too bad, but like you said, it’s still bleedin’. Best have the surgeon look at it.”

“The surgeon. He’s little better than a butcher, as you’re aware. Be a good lad and bind it up for me, eh? It’ll be all right.”

Bootstrap, considering Jack’s assessment of the surgeon’s skills a just one, acquiesced.

They met the captain as they crossed the deck. “Jack! Through with ‘er already, are ye?”

Jack smiled grimly. “I’m fetchin’ ‘er tea. And Bootstrap’ll take care of this for me.” Jack turned his shoulder, showing off his wound.

“Let me see that,” frowned Tobias, and took Jack’s arm. He ignored the roll of Jack’s eyes, as well as the flinch and hiss of indrawn breath Jack couldn’t quite hold back as he carried out the examination. “Hmm,” Tobias said, finally. “All right, then. Bill can take care of it. Clean it with rum, Bill, and don’t give ‘im more than a nip to drink – wouldn’t want to impair his abilities with the lady, waitin’ for ‘er tea an’ all.“  He winked at Jack, and then chuckled at Jack’s grimace of disgust.

“Thanks ever so much,” Jack said sarcastically.

“Don’t mention it, lad. That was a good fight. Yer a devil with a sword when yer heart’s in it. Knacker’ll likely live, by the way, in case you were interested.”

“Wasn’t aimin’ to kill ‘im, just to keep ‘im off the wench.”

Tobias nodded. “Which is why I permitted, as you know full well. That Knacker!” The Captain shook his head. “May have to see if we can’t get shut of ‘im when we get to Cartagena. He can find another ship there, easy enough. Bloody fool, bringin’ a wench aboard. An’ if ‘e’d done for you I’d’ve slit his throat meself.”

Jack did smile a bit at that. “Thanks, John.”

Tobias winked at him. “Aye, well, just you take it easy with the lady, now. There’ll be no slackin’ just because you’re entertaining a guest. You’d best pace yourself, savvy?” His dark eye twinkled at Jack’s expression and he took himself off, chuckling.

Jack turned to Bootstrap, who was making a heroic effort to keep a straight face. Jack ground his teeth. “Bill…”

Bill cut him off, in a voice shaking with laughter. “Come on, lad, let’s do that arm so’s you can fetch her that tea.”




TBC

Date: 2006-02-06 01:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorat.livejournal.com
Yay! More story. The change in POV in this story is highly amusing. The lady's suspicions and now Jack's exasperation. I love how everyone keeps giving him advice on how to enjoy his prize while he just keeps trying to get rid of her. And it's great to see Bootstrap show up.

I like all the references to Jack as a good fighter when he wants to be.

if ‘e’d done for you I’d’ve slit his throat meself

This comment from the captain really highlights his relationship with Jack. I do like all the camaraderie here.

Now it remains to be seen if tea is all our "heroine" gets of young Jack.

More please *bats eyes*!

Date: 2006-02-06 01:16 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (B&W Sparrow by Doobicon)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed the banter and teasing. Should've had you and [livejournal.com profile] hereswith look it over -- the pov slips around a bit between these three. Maybe I'll fix that.

Tea coming up, ma'am. And thanks so much for commenting. :)

Date: 2006-02-06 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] berne.livejournal.com
I love Tobias and his relationship with Jack; that Jack presumably picked up "savvy" from him is great. Huzzah for Bootstrap too!

Date: 2006-02-07 12:24 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Captain Tobias is something of a role model for young Jack. He's a great character -- I swiped him (with permission) from [livejournal.com profile] tessabeth

Can't wait to read your ten tales, btw. :D

Date: 2006-02-07 02:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] berne.livejournal.com
I can't believe I've finally finished. And it's you who got me started on them by requesting a swordfighting fic months and months and months back. It's grown and has no swordfighting whatsoever in it now, alas. But it has just about everything else. :D

Date: 2006-02-07 02:39 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
LOL! No sword fighting at all? Oh well, I bet you've made up for it in the best possible way. Congratulations on finishing it!

Date: 2006-02-06 11:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hereswith.livejournal.com
I've always loved how you write the interaction between Jack and Bootstrap, and this is no exception :-) Great dialogue here, very funny, with Jack so disgruntled and the other two so amused. And oh, tea is coming up, looking forward to it!

Date: 2006-02-07 12:44 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Sparrow Sleeping by inevendim)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Perhaps some tea would do Jack some good, too. He seems stressed. ;)

Glad you're enjoying this! Thank you for letting me know.

Date: 2006-02-08 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drk-prncss.livejournal.com
Oh My God!!! This is such a great scene! I love it!!

'Bootstrap took him and pulled him around to the lamplight, the better to see it. “Doesn’t look too bad, but like you said, it’s still bleedin’. Best have the surgeon look at it.”

“The surgeon. He’s little better than a butcher, as you’re aware. Be a good lad and bind it up for me, eh? It’ll be all right.”

Bootstrap, considering Jack’s assessment of the surgeon’s skills a just one, acquiesced'

Sooooo so good!! I love it!!! See you soon Sharon!

Date: 2006-02-08 03:40 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm so happy you liked it! More soon, from OFC's pov.

It will be very very nice to see you!

Date: 2006-02-08 06:10 am (UTC)

Date: 2006-02-08 06:27 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Interesting in Jack's definition of the word?

Date: 2006-02-08 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/elizabethswan_/
What is Jack's definition anyways? lol

I like any fiction with Bill Turner (The underdog of fic'verse). Though your Harry and the Pirate series is my favourite. ;)

Date: 2006-02-08 01:42 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Jack's definition

I was thinking of his comment when Barbossa's man grabs him by the throat with the skeletal hand. "So there is a curse. That's interesting."

I like Bill Turner a lot, too. Have you read [livejournal.com profile] virgo79's Bill & Young Jack stories? They are wonderful. But the stories at [livejournal.com profile] impofperversity have quite a lot of Bill Turner in them, and that's where Captain Tobias came from, too (with permission).

So happy to hear 'Harry & the Pirate' is a favorite! Thank you for telling me. And I'm glad you're enjoying this story, too.

Date: 2006-02-11 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] torn-eledhwen.livejournal.com
Heheh. I liked the banter between Bootstrap and Jack, and the inclusion of Tobias.

Date: 2006-02-11 06:55 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thanks! Almost have another section done, too -- just finishing up.

Date: 2006-02-20 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] linaelyn.livejournal.com
Jack & Bill banter!! EEEEEE!!!

And this: “Thanks ever so much,” Jack said sarcastically. *GLEEFUL SNICKERING*

I'm LOVING Captain Tobias. Nice addition to the mix, here. You really have a gift for the Original Characters.

Date: 2006-02-20 07:25 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Bill and Jack are huge fun to write together. But this young!Jack universe is [livejournal.com profile] tessabeth's, from her Jack Sparrow/Jack Shaftoe fic, Picaresque, and Captain Tobias is her glorious creation. More of him anon! Glad you enjoyed the banter!

Date: 2006-03-25 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hendercats.livejournal.com
"Oh, shut up!" snapped Jack, testily.
Hee! Heehee *dissolves into helpless puddle of laughter*

Adore Bill. Adore Tobias ... but then, I've always loved him and you've captured him perfectly: "Which is why I permitted, as you know full well. ... An' if 'e'd done for you I'd've slit his throat meself."

"Thanks ever so much," Jack said sarcastically. So perfectly Jack. Have you hidden him in your closet or something? (*turns green*) You've got his voice captured so thoroughly.

Love the advice they're all giving him, and poor Jack's just wanting to be done with the nuisance factor.

Date: 2006-03-27 12:49 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
If Lizzie won't write more Captain Tobias for us, we just have to do it ourselves. Fanfiction based on fanfiction!

I'm so happy you thought him accurately drawn, and Bill, too. And Jack! No, not residing in my closet, last time I checked (Darn!).

Thanks for the feedback -- as I said, you are one of the few who know Captain Tobias and young!Bootstrap, and I am thrilled you like my knockoffs. *G*

Date: 2006-04-02 06:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erinya.livejournal.com
I'm finally catching up with this (you write faster than I can keep up--wish I could write that fast!) and it's making me smile at Jack's reactions and at the crew teasing him. And Bootstrap/Jack friendship is always an added joy--as is another believable non-Sue OFC from you.

Date: 2006-04-02 07:59 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Pirate!)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Hello! So happy you dropped by to read and comment! Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying it, including the new OFC. It's been interesting fleshing her out over the weeks.

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