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Happy Easter to all! We're off to brunch in a few minutes, but first a little more Dark of the Moon. Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] hereswith for editing.




[21]

Somewhat to Letty’s surprise, Jack Sparrow returned to the cabin within half an hour. He entered with caution and another bucket, eyeing her askance where she sat, huddled on his cot, clutching a well-used handkerchief.

“Brought you more water,” he said. “Bill thought you might need it, and he’s fetching the…er…other things.”

Bill? You told him?” Fresh tears of consternation sprang forth, and she said, angrily, “Do you have to tell him everything?

“Had to tell him this!” he protested. “He’s married.”

Letty rolled her eyes, much as her captor was wont to do when exasperated, and blew her nose once more. “I need another handkerchief,” she snapped, and glared at Jack.

“Uh… right.” He quickly set the bucket in the corner and went to his sea chest. Finding the required objects, he tossed her two, then damped a third in the clean water and handed it to her.

“Thank you,” she said, in a tight little voice, replete with chagrin. She had never in her life been so embarrassed. Even her wedding night paled in comparison.

It was apparent that Jack felt a similar degree of discomfiture. Having been stripped to his breeches for sleep, he now proceeded to don the rest of his odd garb as quickly as possible, clearly intending to escape his infested cabin with all due haste.

Letty watched him, anger and misery warring in her breast. “I can’t help it, you know,” she said at last, as he took up his hat.

He looked at her, such a muddle of conflicting emotions on his own face that she didn’t know if she felt more like weeping or laughing.

“A week?” he asked. She frowned, nonplussed, so he clarified. “Bill said it’d last a week. Is it true?”

“Oh. No. I… four days, usually. But… only the first is… difficult.” She colored, her cheeks burning.

“Ah!” He nodded, but did not appear to be much comforted. Then there was a rap on the cabin door and his relief was comically obvious. “That’s Bill. He’ll take care of you. Good man, Bill. I’ll just take meself off.”

He was abandoning her. Letty’s lip quivered, and her eyes filled with tears again.

“Now don’t look like that!” he pleaded. “I’ll be back…” The rap was repeated. “…later.”

He put on his hat, opened the door, and said, “Thanks, mate!” to Bootstrap Bill, then shoved past and strode away, the sound of his boots fading down the passage with remarkable speed.

Mr. Turner seemed amused, then sympathetic as he caught sight of her. “There now, lass, don’t fret. I’ve brought the necessities, and if there’s anything lacking I’ll hunt it up for you.”

The “necessities” were presently revealed to include an early breakfast: the ubiquitous ship’s biscuit (“Weeviled by yours truly; you’ll be glad of a change when we get to Cartagena.”), dried fruit, and rum in a battered flask. “For medicinal purposes. My own wife takes a nip now and again, at that time of month.”

“Jack told me you are married,” Letty said, curious about the tippling Mrs. Turner and hoping he would elaborate.

“Aye. I’ve a little son, as well. Back in England.”

“A son!”

“He’ll be five years old next month. I’m hoping to get back to see him, and Mary, by the end of summer.”

Mary. “Does she… do she and your little boy… know?” It was a prying question, and Letty steeled herself, in case he should take offense.

But he didn’t. He looked rather rueful, but replied, evenly, “That I’m a pirate, d’you mean? Well… not precisely. I think Mary suspected it, last time I was home. I’d been able to send her more money, and then I brought her a few nice trinkets. But she didn’t ask, and I didn’t tell. She still sends me letters, and my shirts.”

Letty smiled. Bill’s shirts were unusual, in color, cut, and trim. They were a target of hilarity for Jack, who was inordinately proud of his own sartorial cunning. But, now that she knew their source, Letty thought that Jack was missing the point of Bill’s preferences. “They are very beautiful shirts,” she said.

Bill laughed. “I think so, too. She likes to experiment with her dyes, and different trims. They’re a little bit of home for me, y’see.”

Letty nodded. “Thank you for bringing all those things for me, Mr. Turner. I… I’m afraid Jack…”

“Jack’s up to the mark in most things, but this little development was more than he’d bargained for. But don’t worry, lass. He’ll come around.”

Jack didn’t come around, though, until the long, uncomfortable day had passed.

Bill checked on her a couple of times, dragging the reluctant Reed with him once. Together, the two men cleaned and straightened the cabin, and Reed hauled off a sack of soiled linens, muttering darkly.

Letty had further recourse to the rum after that. The sips she took from the little flask burned all the way down and then settled, radiating a pleasant glow that did much to assuage both pain and anxiety. Mrs. Turner was in the right of it, it seemed.

The wind had picked up during the morning, making their passage rougher. Bill had said that this was why Jack was unable to visit her himself: the ship and crew needed the constant attention of the First Mate. Letty only half believed that this would keep Jack away all day.

But as night came on, the seas calmed, and the wind shifted and steadied. Letty, having dozed off after a plateful of stew and another few sips from the medicinal flask, roused sleepily as someone entered and closed the door. Jack, she thought, the sound of his movements familiar to her now, but she did not open her eyes and was almost asleep again when she felt the tickle and brush of his lips on her cheek.

She did open her eyes at that, to find him crouched close beside her. His face was shadowed in the dim lamplight, but his lips curved, and his dark eyes were warm.

And he had been drinking.

Well, so had she. She turned her head on the pillow, and said, muzzily, “I thought you said you weren’t going to kiss me any more.”

“Did I?” he said, his beautiful voice smooth and soft as velvet. “Must’ve shot the cat. What would I say that for, eh?”

Letty gave a little chuff of amusement, even as her eyelids drifted south.

“You feeling better?” he said, his breath on her cheek.

“Mmmm… yes.”

“Good,” he replied, and Letty smiled at the touch of his fingers, smoothing back her hair.

*

TBC

Date: 2006-04-18 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorat.livejournal.com
*puff, puff, puff* Here I am, catching up and out of breath as usual.

I love the picture of Jack sneaking into his cabin as though he is afraid something might bite him. *snerk*

Do you have to tell him everything?
Great echo of her previous betrayal. Not only do pirates kiss and tell, they discover highly embarrassing personal secrets and tell. LOL!

At least Jack and Letty have the eye rolls in common. Letty ought to meet Anamaria!

Even her wedding night paled in comparison
Oh dear! She really is a flame of shame, isn’t she. And it doesn’t sound like her wedding night was anything to write home about. Hmmm. *wonders if she’ll have some new spectacular memories to replace the old or some new embarrassing ones (he is pretty young)*

I love Jack’s muddle of conflicting emotions and Letty’s little burst of defiance. They’re so cute here.

his relief was comically obvious
Saved by the knock. Have no fear. Bill is here.

He was abandoning her.
Any port in a storm, eh? Jack is master of the better part of valour and is fleeing the field—speedily. LOL. Poor girl.

Weeviled by yours truly
*Snerk* Ship food. Bleeach!

Bill’s revelations about his family are sooooo sweet. Awww. That set of relationships always breaks my heart. And you’ve written it as though his wife knows. I like the idea that it remains unspoken between them. Very much that torn and fraught relationship I imagine for them.

I did enjoy the comparison of Bill’s and Jack’s sartorial splendour. Very different men.

Jack’s up to the mark in most things, but this little development was more than he’d bargained for. But don’t worry, lass. He’ll come around.
Love Bill’s assessment of Jack. So paternal and mature. But he has faith that Jack will eventually be equal to any occasion.

Jack, she thought, the sound of his movements familiar to her now, but she did not open her eyes and was almost asleep again when she felt the tickle and brush of his lips on her cheek
Awwww! How tender and intimate—her recognizing his sounds, him kissing her on the cheek. Awwww! Did I once mention she’s a goner? I repeat! Two tipsy young people and their hormones. Run fast. Run very fast. And do not look back.

“Did I?” he said, his beautiful voice smooth and soft as velvet. “Must’ve shot the cat. What would I say that for, eh?”
My favourite line. Oh that voice! And I love “shot the cat”! How much rum can a pirate’s priniciples survive? (Elizabeth will wonder that many years later)

Yay for Letty’s little chuff of amusement! She’s developing her sense of humour—a survival skill around Jack, I’m sure.

And that last brush of her hair--*melts*

Such a wonderful treat. I’m all agog for more!

Date: 2006-04-18 04:24 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
How I love your detailed comments! It must be all those English papers you have to grade! You're an expert at picking out the things you like and saying exactly why, whereas I'm all, "Wow! That was so cool. Ummmm... write more, OK?"

LOL!

How much rum can a pirate’s priniciples survive? (Elizabeth will wonder that many years later)

Probably a lot more when Elizabeth meets him than in this case.

More anon. I finished editing a short section last night, so I'll probably post it tonight as the part after that involves Shore Leave in Cartagena and is likely to be longer. ;)

Thanks again! What with the RBH and the comments, my day is made!

Sorry I had to post this twice...I hate it when I mess up the markup.

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