Drabble: 'A Bigger One! A Better One!' (Jack/Anamaria)

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One hundred words for potc100 challenge of the week...


~ A Bigger One! A Better One! ~

“That one.”

“That one?” Jack growled. But, there being nothing for it, he confirmed it. “Aye, that one! What say you?”

Anamaria shouted Aye! with the others, then snatched her hat back, giving Sparrow a glare as she shoved it on again.

She wasn’t satisfied, not in the least. Taken in by a pretty face. Played for a fool, like some green chit. As though she hadn’t known exactly what he was!

Someone, somewhere had to be capable of stealing away Sparrow’s heart and mind as deviously as hers had been stolen. She just hoped she lived to see it.

~.~

Comments

[p0wdermonkey.livejournal.com]

I think you've really caught Ana here. Her fiercenes, but also the way she over-attacks Jack, as if to cancel out something. Can't seem to put it clearly but I'm sure you know what I mean because you've written it here.

[jenthegypsy.livejournal.com]

*squeee!*

[veronica-rich.livejournal.com]

Someone, somewhere had to be capable of stealing away Sparrow’s heart and mind as deviously as hers had been stolen.

And to think, she was looking at him standing right behind Jack's right shoulder the entire time. :-)

I love Anamaria, there isn't nearly enough about her! I love her reason for being pissed off.

[cymbeline.livejournal.com]

Love this! So awesome to see Anamaria somewhere other than in my head. :-)

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

"Neener Neener Neener"

Yep.

So glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the (much edited!) comments. :))

(That's a great icon, too, btw)

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

I used to read a LOT of J/A, and they are fun to write, too. It is a great pity she wasn't in the sequels.

Glad you enjoyed!!

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

the way she over-attacks Jack, as if to cancel out something.

Yes, he stole her boat, but there always seems more to it than that. And that scene at the end of CotBP, where she puts his coat on, makes me think there's some pretty interesting history between them. ;)

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for letting me know!

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

I love her reason for being pissed off.

Seemed like it was more than just the boat, didn't it?

And to think, she was looking at him standing right behind Jack's right shoulder the entire time. :-)

One could certainly interpret the scene in that way. *g*

So glad you liked it!

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

Thank you! You know I love J/A, too. I'm glad you liked this.

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

Hee!

*bounces*

[sharklady35.livejournal.com]

Nicely done moment.

I did miss Ana in the sequels, though I think I know why they dropped her- it would've changed the dynamic when Elizabeth came aboard the Pearl.

Within the PotC world, I hope the explanation is that she made Jack make good on his promise to get her a better boat.

[mary684.livejournal.com]

Nicely done. She is over the top in her exasperation with Jack and it was certainly never a doubt in my mind that they've an intricate relationship and history. I, too, wish they'd kept her for the sequels.

I'm sure she's sitting somewhere warm, a smug smile on her face with "hah! Take that, Jack Sparrow!" running through her brain.

[kyra-neko-rei.livejournal.com]

YAY! Anamaria!!!

Finally!

Awesome drabble!

[justawench.livejournal.com]

Love her taking out her anger at herself for being susceptible to his charms on him!

[captaintish]

"A Better One"!!! Even though I totally fail at fic-reading lately, I had to read this, because everyone in my family goes around quoting that scene all the time. :)

Someone, somewhere had to be capable of stealing away Sparrow’s heart and mind as deviously as hers had been stolen. She just hoped she lived to see it.

LOL.

I don't see enough Jack/Ana fic lately. Ahhhh, Jack/Ana -- the ship that doesn't piss anyone off. :) At least I don't think it pisses anyone off....

[kseenaa.livejournal.com]

Such a great little drabble! Put a smile on my face, it did. :-) Ana was so cool, to bad she wasn't in the other movies. :-) Oh well! One can always read her in wonderful little fics like this. You really caught her there. :-D

[hereswith.livejournal.com]

Loved it! I, too, wish she had been in the sequels, who knows, maybe we could even have seen her interact with James (you know me). *g* But you write Ana and Jack/Ana so well, and this is a great glimpse of her thoughts in that scene. I especially liked the two last lines!

[veronica-rich.livejournal.com]

it would've changed the dynamic when Elizabeth came aboard the Pearl

Heh heh heh heh ...

Possibly they didn't drop her at all. Zoe Saldana has a fairly good career and may have been doing other things at the time - and they weren't willing to pay what they needed to, to get her back (or she didn't want to do it).

[yoiebear.livejournal.com]

I actually read an interview with Zoe Saldana about the time DMC came out and she said she was never asked about reprising Anamaria and was a bit upset they didn't bring her back.

[yoiebear.livejournal.com]

You always have such as way with Ana and Jack!

[djarum99.livejournal.com]

Of course he stole her heart along with that boat, and she's furious with herself for letting him *g* Great drabble ♥

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

That makes me sad. We were upset, too.

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

I'm sure she's sitting somewhere warm, a smug smile on her face with "hah! Take that, Jack Sparrow!" running through her brain.

I figured she got her ship. There's no reason she couldn't pay a visit to Shipwreck Cove, of course (and did, in the wonderful fic of the_dala's).

So glad you liked this! Thank you for commenting. :)

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I do enjoy writing them. *g*

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

Thank you!!

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. Yes, she was much missed in the sequels. They could bring her back for #4 and I wouldn't mind a bit. :)

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. :))

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

What a great J/A icon!

Ahhhh, Jack/Ana -- the ship that doesn't piss anyone off. :)

Very true! And they are very interesting to write together. There used to be lots of J/A fic being produced, remember that?

Thank you for reading and commenting here -- I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

taking out her anger at herself ... on him!

Yes, people tend to do that, don't they? And people back them were no different, I expect.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[captaintish]

There used to be lots of J/A fic being produced, remember that?

Ah, the good old days, before Ana disappeared off the face of the piratical earth. :)

Seriously, if I ever get a chance to talk to her at a Star Trek convention, I'm going to ask her why she wasn't in the sequels.

[lilfluffykitten.livejournal.com]

Ha! That'll learn him :)
Nicely done.

There should be more Jack/Ana - they're a nice pair, and the backstory needs more exploration.

[this-weirdness.livejournal.com]

There's nothing like a bit of J/A to brighten the day! Great drabble. :)

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it.

Their backstory has been explored by various writers, but not for a while. We could do with more J/A.

[geekmama.livejournal.com]

Thank you!