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The main story...
The first part of the Epilogue was here, the second part here, and the last of the story is under the cut.
Epilogue 3
~ An Execrable Business, concluded...
“Nell! They’re here, darling!”
“So soon? I shall be down directly.”
Nell rose from the chaise where she had been resting and almost immediately her maid entered the room.
"You'll not go down there without a shawl, ma’am," Jane said, firmly, and went to fetch her warmest wrap.
Nell rolled her eyes. Between her maid and her husband one would have thought she was an invalid. "Jane, I have never felt better in my life!" she protested.
But it was useless.
"There's an east wind blowing, and you know very well how the draft comes into that drawing room. Remember, you need to be wise for two now," Jane said, quite severely.
The truth of this was undeniable, and Nell submitted to being draped in the shawl, and even had the grace to say meekly, "Thank you, Jane," before leaving the room and walking with stately tread down the hall.
There was a mirror on the wall opposite the staircase and Nell caught a glimpse of her pregnant self reflected at full length and thought, Oh, my goodness! What would Jack think of me now?
It was very odd. Jack Sparrow was often in her thoughts lately, more than he had been for many months past.
It was now two years since Jack had delivered her home to her grandmother and sadly drove away, leaving her bereft. She had missed him dreadfully at first, though in company she had carried on with dogged stoicism. Unthinkable, and abominably ill-bred, to inflict one’s melancholy on all and sundry! In private, however, it had been another matter, and Nell had shed many tears over the loss of her dear friend and lover. There would never be another like him. Never.
Yet over the next year it was gradually born in upon her that someone different would not necessarily be undesirable. With much stealthy encouragement from her grandmother, and against her own better judgment, she had fallen in love once more, and this time with a man she'd known most of her life: Laurence Grayson.
Laurie had been there that night and had seen Jack, and had even (she found out later) suspected she and Jack had been lovers. Yet almost from the moment of her return he'd set his sights on her and began to make up to her quite shamelessly. This was, of course, against her wishes, for she could never marry, she was most resolved on that point. She was no longer an innocent maid, and moreover it seemed as though her heart had been lost to Jack along with her maidenhead. Laurie's attentions had upset her extremely, particularly when she sensed that she had begun to return his regard.
It would not do. So she told him everything.
Well, not everything.
But most of it. And instead of washing his hands of her the absurd creature had begged her to marry him!
She had of course refused.
They had continued friends, or so she thought. But several months later, when he surprised her by asking again, she realized that her liking had altered to a much warmer sentiment, and she would be churlish to continue to refuse his suit on the grounds that she was no fit wife for him when he knew very well what she was and yet persisted in his fond adoration.
Accordingly, they were married and, after a honeymoon during which she discovered that her new spouse was also most happily conversant with Books of India, he brought her home to Linden Park, his estate that bordered on her grandmother's, and to a life of wedded bliss.
Now they awaited the birth of their first child, and Nell had never been happier. But certain things had recently brought Jack Sparrow much to mind. Perhaps it was her longing for sunshine and warmer weather. It was March, and winter was proving very tedious. Or perhaps it was the fact that Laurie's good friend, Weatherby Swann, had been appointed Governor of Jamaica and would be taking ship for that exotic isle in less than a week, along with his young daughter, Elizabeth. Nell had been wholly envious since she had heard of Swann's appointment.
Swann's daughter, however, was less happy and it was for this reason that she and her father were paying a visit today.
Swann had dined with them a few months ago and his prospective appointment had been a topic of discussion. The conversation had then drifted to the delights and trials of the entire West Indies. Nell had entered into this with some enthusiasm, for over the course of time the difficulties she had encountered during her sojourn had begun to fade into the background of memory, leaving the remainder bathed in a golden glow of sun, sea, and Jack's smile. She did not, of course, mention the latter except in remarking favorably on the agreeable nature of individuals she had encountered and the population in general, but she had been able to give more detailed praise of the region's natural history.
When Swann’s appointment was confirmed, and little Elizabeth expressed her dissatisfaction, the indulgent father remembered Nell's account and asked her to speak to the child. Nell felt she could not refuse, and it had been arranged that the pair should come to dinner.
Now father and daughter were standing in the foyer as Nell descended the stairs, Swann elegantly dressed in puce velvet and gold lace, and Elizabeth prettily gowned and standing very straight as she looked up at Nell’s husband, who was greeting her with his usual charm and the deference due a lady, which must gratify the child.
“But here is my wife coming to join us!” Laurie exclaimed, and hurried over to give Nell his arm down the remainder of the steps. “Nell, here is our friend, Governor Swann—“
“Indeed. How do you do, sir?” Nell smiled.
“Very well, I thank you,” Swann said, bowing over her hand. “And you look charming this evening, my dear.”
“You are too kind,” Nell said, meaning it, for though there was another month before her lying in she was feeling somewhat unwieldy already. There would be no mounting to the Pearl’s fighting top in this state!
This facetious thought sent a warmth to her cheeks, even as her eyes met the wide ones of Elizabeth Swann. The doting father introduced them, and the girl sank in a creditable curtsey.
“I am so happy to finally meet you!” Nell told her. “Would you care to step upstairs to my rooms. We have an hour before dinner is served. I shall have tea brought up and we can be comfortable. My husband is most anxious to show your father our new greenhouse and his achievements in the cultivation of epiphytes and bromeliads, but I daresay you might prefer sitting warm by the fire, and meeting my beautiful French cat.”
“Oh, yes, if you please!” said Elizabeth, glancing at her father and Nell’s husband with a wondering, almost horrified expression.
A few minutes later, Elizabeth was seated in the blue wing chair petting Giselle, who had deigned to be held.
“She likes you,” Nell said.
“I like her, too! Did you get her in Paris?”
“No. In the West Indies.”
Elizabeth’s face grew solemn. She said, after a moment, “We are going to live in Jamaica.”
“I know,” said Nell, gently. “You are so fortunate! It’s a most beautiful place!”
“You’ve been there?”
“Yes, and to several other islands. I liked it immensely.”
“Then why did you not stay?” Elizabeth asked, cocking her head like some curious bird.
A most intelligent bird.
Nell said, “I accompanied my mother to the islands, but she died, and I felt that it was my duty to return to England, to my grandmother. If circumstances had permitted… but alas, they did not.”
“You would have stayed?”
“I might have done. I loved the islands, and the people. Some of them.”
Elizabeth fell silent for a minute, continuing to stroke the cat. Presently she said, “Giselle is French?”
“Yes. Her previous owner was from France. But she was given to me by a pirate!”
“A pirate!” Elizabeth’s eyes grew round. “You met a pirate?”
“I met a great many of them, as it happens,” said Nell, smiling.
“Do you think I will meet any? What are they like?”
“It is possible you may meet a pirate. They are thick on the ground in some areas of the West Indies.”
“Oh, tell me about them! Are they very wicked? But no: you said Giselle was a gift from one!”
“She was.” Nell grew misty, remembering. She said to Elizabeth, “There are pirates and pirates. They are all different, every one of them, just as are other men. They come in all shapes and sizes, some wicked, others less so, though none are paragons of virtue. But there are a few that, though they would have you think otherwise, are kind and brave and true. Good men. Very good men, indeed.”
Finis!
herewith whose input and eagle eye added so much to this story. The main story...
| 1. Tortuga 2. Happiness 3. Festive 4. Last Minute 5. Calm 6. Truth 7. Bargain 8. Spook 9. Down 10. Wounds 11. Moon 12. Monsters 13. Beauty 14. Name 15. History | 16. Service 17. Advice 18. Captain 19. Awe 20. Cross 21. Mistake 22. Heroism 23. Gold 24. Echo 25. Greed 26. Advance 27. Challenge 28. Adventure 29. Sentence 30. Treasure | 31. North 32. Coat 33. Good and Evil 34. Sickness & Health 35. Lost 36. Court 37. What if? 38. Island 39. That can't be 40. Prophesy 41. Ten Years Later 42. French 43. Deed 44. Tea 45. Scarlett & Giselle | 46. Link 47. Comedy 48. Mothers 49. Fathers 50. Rib 51. Music 52. Magic 53. Pirate King 54. Freedom 55. Sea Shanties 56. Isla de Muerta 57. Tragedy 58. Sickness 59. Port 60. Rebirth |
The first part of the Epilogue was here, the second part here, and the last of the story is under the cut.
Epilogue 3
~ An Execrable Business, concluded...
“Nell! They’re here, darling!”
“So soon? I shall be down directly.”
Nell rose from the chaise where she had been resting and almost immediately her maid entered the room.
"You'll not go down there without a shawl, ma’am," Jane said, firmly, and went to fetch her warmest wrap.
Nell rolled her eyes. Between her maid and her husband one would have thought she was an invalid. "Jane, I have never felt better in my life!" she protested.
But it was useless.
"There's an east wind blowing, and you know very well how the draft comes into that drawing room. Remember, you need to be wise for two now," Jane said, quite severely.
The truth of this was undeniable, and Nell submitted to being draped in the shawl, and even had the grace to say meekly, "Thank you, Jane," before leaving the room and walking with stately tread down the hall.
There was a mirror on the wall opposite the staircase and Nell caught a glimpse of her pregnant self reflected at full length and thought, Oh, my goodness! What would Jack think of me now?
It was very odd. Jack Sparrow was often in her thoughts lately, more than he had been for many months past.
It was now two years since Jack had delivered her home to her grandmother and sadly drove away, leaving her bereft. She had missed him dreadfully at first, though in company she had carried on with dogged stoicism. Unthinkable, and abominably ill-bred, to inflict one’s melancholy on all and sundry! In private, however, it had been another matter, and Nell had shed many tears over the loss of her dear friend and lover. There would never be another like him. Never.
Yet over the next year it was gradually born in upon her that someone different would not necessarily be undesirable. With much stealthy encouragement from her grandmother, and against her own better judgment, she had fallen in love once more, and this time with a man she'd known most of her life: Laurence Grayson.
Laurie had been there that night and had seen Jack, and had even (she found out later) suspected she and Jack had been lovers. Yet almost from the moment of her return he'd set his sights on her and began to make up to her quite shamelessly. This was, of course, against her wishes, for she could never marry, she was most resolved on that point. She was no longer an innocent maid, and moreover it seemed as though her heart had been lost to Jack along with her maidenhead. Laurie's attentions had upset her extremely, particularly when she sensed that she had begun to return his regard.
It would not do. So she told him everything.
Well, not everything.
But most of it. And instead of washing his hands of her the absurd creature had begged her to marry him!
She had of course refused.
They had continued friends, or so she thought. But several months later, when he surprised her by asking again, she realized that her liking had altered to a much warmer sentiment, and she would be churlish to continue to refuse his suit on the grounds that she was no fit wife for him when he knew very well what she was and yet persisted in his fond adoration.
Accordingly, they were married and, after a honeymoon during which she discovered that her new spouse was also most happily conversant with Books of India, he brought her home to Linden Park, his estate that bordered on her grandmother's, and to a life of wedded bliss.
Now they awaited the birth of their first child, and Nell had never been happier. But certain things had recently brought Jack Sparrow much to mind. Perhaps it was her longing for sunshine and warmer weather. It was March, and winter was proving very tedious. Or perhaps it was the fact that Laurie's good friend, Weatherby Swann, had been appointed Governor of Jamaica and would be taking ship for that exotic isle in less than a week, along with his young daughter, Elizabeth. Nell had been wholly envious since she had heard of Swann's appointment.
Swann's daughter, however, was less happy and it was for this reason that she and her father were paying a visit today.
Swann had dined with them a few months ago and his prospective appointment had been a topic of discussion. The conversation had then drifted to the delights and trials of the entire West Indies. Nell had entered into this with some enthusiasm, for over the course of time the difficulties she had encountered during her sojourn had begun to fade into the background of memory, leaving the remainder bathed in a golden glow of sun, sea, and Jack's smile. She did not, of course, mention the latter except in remarking favorably on the agreeable nature of individuals she had encountered and the population in general, but she had been able to give more detailed praise of the region's natural history.
When Swann’s appointment was confirmed, and little Elizabeth expressed her dissatisfaction, the indulgent father remembered Nell's account and asked her to speak to the child. Nell felt she could not refuse, and it had been arranged that the pair should come to dinner.
Now father and daughter were standing in the foyer as Nell descended the stairs, Swann elegantly dressed in puce velvet and gold lace, and Elizabeth prettily gowned and standing very straight as she looked up at Nell’s husband, who was greeting her with his usual charm and the deference due a lady, which must gratify the child.
“But here is my wife coming to join us!” Laurie exclaimed, and hurried over to give Nell his arm down the remainder of the steps. “Nell, here is our friend, Governor Swann—“
“Indeed. How do you do, sir?” Nell smiled.
“Very well, I thank you,” Swann said, bowing over her hand. “And you look charming this evening, my dear.”
“You are too kind,” Nell said, meaning it, for though there was another month before her lying in she was feeling somewhat unwieldy already. There would be no mounting to the Pearl’s fighting top in this state!
This facetious thought sent a warmth to her cheeks, even as her eyes met the wide ones of Elizabeth Swann. The doting father introduced them, and the girl sank in a creditable curtsey.
“I am so happy to finally meet you!” Nell told her. “Would you care to step upstairs to my rooms. We have an hour before dinner is served. I shall have tea brought up and we can be comfortable. My husband is most anxious to show your father our new greenhouse and his achievements in the cultivation of epiphytes and bromeliads, but I daresay you might prefer sitting warm by the fire, and meeting my beautiful French cat.”
“Oh, yes, if you please!” said Elizabeth, glancing at her father and Nell’s husband with a wondering, almost horrified expression.
A few minutes later, Elizabeth was seated in the blue wing chair petting Giselle, who had deigned to be held.
“She likes you,” Nell said.
“I like her, too! Did you get her in Paris?”
“No. In the West Indies.”
Elizabeth’s face grew solemn. She said, after a moment, “We are going to live in Jamaica.”
“I know,” said Nell, gently. “You are so fortunate! It’s a most beautiful place!”
“You’ve been there?”
“Yes, and to several other islands. I liked it immensely.”
“Then why did you not stay?” Elizabeth asked, cocking her head like some curious bird.
A most intelligent bird.
Nell said, “I accompanied my mother to the islands, but she died, and I felt that it was my duty to return to England, to my grandmother. If circumstances had permitted… but alas, they did not.”
“You would have stayed?”
“I might have done. I loved the islands, and the people. Some of them.”
Elizabeth fell silent for a minute, continuing to stroke the cat. Presently she said, “Giselle is French?”
“Yes. Her previous owner was from France. But she was given to me by a pirate!”
“A pirate!” Elizabeth’s eyes grew round. “You met a pirate?”
“I met a great many of them, as it happens,” said Nell, smiling.
“Do you think I will meet any? What are they like?”
“It is possible you may meet a pirate. They are thick on the ground in some areas of the West Indies.”
“Oh, tell me about them! Are they very wicked? But no: you said Giselle was a gift from one!”
“She was.” Nell grew misty, remembering. She said to Elizabeth, “There are pirates and pirates. They are all different, every one of them, just as are other men. They come in all shapes and sizes, some wicked, others less so, though none are paragons of virtue. But there are a few that, though they would have you think otherwise, are kind and brave and true. Good men. Very good men, indeed.”
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Date: 2009-03-13 02:13 pm (UTC)So sorry to see this tale come to an end. The segments have been the high point of my day for the past two months, and I will sorely miss them. But thank you so much for the thrilling ride, and the wonderful characters.
Brilliant work! *applauds*
-- Cat
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Date: 2009-03-14 01:28 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-14 11:03 am (UTC)Oooh! Thank you for remembering! I eagerly look forward to said scene (when you can shoehorn it in amongst your myriad other writing projects! Wow! You're quite right -- not enough hours in the day, and all that!).
Anticipating a wealth of wonderful GeekMama goodies to come ... :-)
-- Cat
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Date: 2009-03-13 02:13 pm (UTC)P.S. I miss Harry and the Pirate. I may have to spend the day re-reading it.
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Date: 2009-03-14 01:36 am (UTC)It'll be a few years, but yes, I think she did, too. Thank you for your kind words, and for your diligence in reading and commenting on this veeeery long story -- long as in number of posts, at least, lol! As for what I'll do next, I have two WIP's to finish, both J/E, and there are the last three challenges at
And you miss Harry and the Pirate! I'm so happy to hear it! Actually I have a Plot for another H&theP story worked out and waiting to be written, too. LOL! There need to be more hours in the day.
Thank you again!
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Date: 2009-03-13 02:57 pm (UTC)You've done such a wonderful job with making everything tie into the movies, while also allowing your OC to have a life outside of the pirate world. I think it was wonderful for her to have fall in love again, and now become pregnant with Laurie's child. He seems like a great match, so it was truly a wonderful ending for her, even if she does miss Jack here and there (I can't imagine who wouldn't).
The conversation with young Elizabeth was very natural and flowing. Now we know how she acquired her fascination with pirates!
Beautiful ending love. You've done such an amazing job! :)
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Date: 2009-03-14 01:40 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-03-14 01:42 am (UTC)You know how I like happy endings. ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed following along. Thank you for letting me know! I really appreciated the feedback.
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Date: 2009-03-13 08:17 pm (UTC)I must have art of THIS. (It would be even better if Elizabeth were only about five and much smaller, but that's canon for you. LOL)
Quite cute!
ETA: And way back when Giselle was scratching and clawing - I'm surely not the only one thinking "My name is Giselle. I am ze French BEETCH!"
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Date: 2009-03-14 01:46 am (UTC)Wouldn't that be great??!? Alas, I can write, but I can't draw for beans.
Giselle ze French Beetch, yes, all cats have a touch of that, and some more than others, lol! They are such interesting animals.
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for letting me know!
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Date: 2009-03-13 08:35 pm (UTC)This entire piece was so well done, from start to finish! I think it is one of my favorite stories that I have read in recent times.
Thank you so much for a beautiful story.
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Date: 2009-03-14 01:55 am (UTC)*hugs you*
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Date: 2009-03-14 12:00 am (UTC)I LOVE how you made the connection between your storyline and the CotBP, how all the elements fit so perfectly together. I love all the characters that you created, I love how you portrayed Jack in this story, how you gave lots of wonderful storytime to Will's parents, to AnaMaria... how you showed so many beautiful moments from the past of all the characters. And I'm so happy that Nell got such a wonderful, happy ending! Also the appearance of Weathery and young Elizabeth was an absolutely brilliant idea!
I can't believe that this wonderful story has just ended - I will miss it so very, very much! I wish it didn't have to end at all :] Thank you so much for all the BEAUTIFUL installments. I had the most fantastic time reading this story!
Beautiful work! :]
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Date: 2009-03-14 02:00 am (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2009-03-14 07:37 pm (UTC)There's a bittersweet hint here of Nell's connection to her pirate, with her thoughts turning so often to him two years after their parting. He's lost the Pearl at this point, the sharp edge of his youth and his pride.
A wonderful tale, written with your usual grace and love for the pirates - I'm so sorry to see it end ♥
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Date: 2009-03-14 10:36 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-16 05:55 pm (UTC)I love the way it all links in to the beginning of the movies--beautifully done! Bringing in baby Elizabeth was a lovely idea.
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Date: 2009-03-17 04:26 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-03-18 07:38 pm (UTC)Thank you for reading and commenting throughout the story -- I appreciated that so much!!
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Date: 2009-03-18 07:40 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-23 12:52 pm (UTC)I'm also quite positive every time he wanders into Tortuga and meets up with a shapely blond strumpet, he thinks of Nell.
World's a small place, no question.
Well done. Enjoyed every bit of it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Date: 2009-03-23 02:14 pm (UTC)Or her cat, at least. *g*
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on all these final pieces of the story. I really appreciate it.
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