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Wrote this in response to the current drabble challenge at [livejournal.com profile] blackpearlsails, theme: 'pillow'. This bit is out of order, I'm still working on part 4 of the story, but the first three parts are here...

1 - 2 - 3

And here's part 5...



~ The Moral Advantage: Pillow Talk ~

As Chevalle’s Fancy sank below the eastern horizon, a squall was rising fast in the west and Jack gave orders to shorten and reef sail.

“Violent, but it’ll be over by this afternoon. You stay in here and have a nap,” Jack told Elizabeth, and gulped the rest of his coffee.

She was obviously tired after a fraught morning, but nevertheless bridled on cue. “Is that an order? I’ve been in plenty of storms, Captain Sparrow.”

“It is an order,” he snapped. “It’s not just your own pretty hide at stake if you take a tumble, is it?”

She flushed. “Well. All right, then.”

“All right,” Jack agreed, trying not to look smug at her swift capitulation. He was apparently unsuccessful. He bent and kissed her pouting lips.

But hours later, when the Pearl was peacefully riding the swells of the aftermath and the rays of sunset peeked from under the clouds to gild the sea, Jack returned to the cabin to find her in his bed, blinking sleepily from amongst the many pillows.

“I’m afraid I could get used to this,” she murmured with a smile.

“So could I,” he agreed, and was rather astonished at how very true it was.


~.~

Date: 2009-10-22 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
Awwww,
“I’m afraid I could get used to this" how cool is this! and I love saying that line--pretty picture of Pearl post storm--just like it, nothing as nice as when the sea is all settled. Made my day to see this darling read! Thank you.

Date: 2009-10-22 04:19 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (J/E - Just a Kiss - by the Nixonator)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
You're welcome! I'm so glad it brightened your day. It certainly did mine, thinking about the pretty pirates again. Thank you so much for reading and commenting -- I really appreciate it!

Date: 2009-10-22 04:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
Sorry, naw, not so, Happy as a clam to say, can't help it don't want to help it--I like what you've writ from the first thing I've read about three years ago. Haven't ever been left hanging==you come home with treasure and it was always worth the voyage!! If you'd just write crummy stories wouldn't be a problem, but you keep turning gold. Do like your stories--makes me yeah, happy as a clam. A

Date: 2009-10-22 04:28 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Default)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
*hugs you*

(And that new icon is gorgeous!)

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