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The drabble challenge prompt at [livejournal.com profile] blackpearlsails this week is First, and this subject came immediately to mind, lol! Many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] hereswith for the quick beta, and to [livejournal.com profile] linaelyn for allowing me to borrow some details from her fabulous Letters of J. Gibbs, Able Seaman (Rated PG).

This post-AWE conversation fits rather nicely in my Second Chances universe...




~ First Times ~


"So that really was your first time? Your One Day with Elizabeth?"

Will scowled. "Only you would dare voice such a question, Jack."

Gibbs chuckled. "Aye, but we're all thinkin' it, lad." He passed Will the bottle of fine aged rum they'd all been sharing.

Will accepted it, drank, then passed it to Cotton, whose twisted smile was apparently contagious. Will's scowl eased to a softer expression. He said, "Yes, of course it was. For both of us. You know that."

"How the blazes would we?" Jack said, and immediately regretted his mean-spirited tone, which smacked strongly of jealousy. Predictably, Will fixed him with a penetrating eye and a raised brow, and Jack shifted in his chair and reached for the bottle, muttering, "Aye, well. The blind leading the blind, then. The mind boggles."

"I can see yours does, at least," Will said, sounding amused. "Though how either of us could be considered blind after the company we've kept the last few years is difficult to fathom. And that little talk you had with Elizabeth in your cabin before she came to me was… useful. To say the least. We owe you thanks."

The others stared, first at Will, then at Jack, open-mouthed. Jack cleared his throat, but his voice was still annoyingly high-pitched as he countered with an innocent, "What?"

"Talk?" said Gibbs.

"Speaking of mind-boggling," Norrington said at his driest, taking the bottle.

Jack looked down his nose. "I do have vast experience in these matters, y'know, mate."

"In the debauching of virgins?" Norrington sniffed his disbelief.

"Strange as it seems, former admiral, they trust ol' Jack. Vast experience, I assure you."

"Oh, my God." Norrington took a deep swig.

"That's what they say, all right," Jack agreed, "though they're generally more enthused, if you get me drift."

There was a pause, and then William Turner, Captain of the Flying Dutchman, began to snort with laughter.

Jack grinned.

Norrington shook his head. "Insufferable. You can't always have been so skilled."

"I've a natural aptitude for it. Had some excellent tutors as well."

"And your first time?" Will queried, still amused.

"She was one of the best,” Jack reminisced. “I was little more than a lad, gave Teague the slip an' stowed away on a ship bound for Port Royal, which was far less infested with commodores and governors at that time. The captain found me and, as he'd a grudge against Teague, he took me to see Amelie Dubois soon as we'd landed, gave her a gold guinea to take me under her wing. As it were."

"Ah!" Gibbs nodded. "Owner of the Maison Rouge back then. Finest bawdy house in the eastern Caribbean."

"So it was," Jack agreed. "I was there a whole week before Teague caught up with me, damn the old bastard for spoiling me sport. And that of Madame Dubois. I was a fast learner."

Norrington drank again.

Jack made a grab for the bottle. "Here, give me that, you can't have it all." Norrington gave up the bottle readily enough, and Jack said, "So tell us about your first time, James-me-lad. Housemaid in the pantry? Dockside doxy luring the unwary mid?"

Norrington frowned, but then, as memory asserted itself, almost smiled. "Neither. She was my age, her family's land marched with that of mine. We thought we were in love. It was the night before she was to leave for London, to be presented at court and enter society. She assured me her heart was mine, but she was married within a few months to a man with great wealth and position. I could hardly blame her. A penniless midshipman could not compare. She looked something like Elizabeth, if I recall with any accuracy."

Jack rolled his eyes. "Trust you to provide a tragic note. How about you, Gibbs? Jenny wasn't your first, was she?"

"She were, though," Gibbs said. "Oh, I'd kissed a few, and maybe more than kissed some of 'em, but it were Jenny I bedded first, and her as sweet and untouched as a new morn. But that ended tragic, too, if you'll recall."

"Right," said Jack. To Will's enquiring look he said, "They were to marry and then Josh was pressed. It was more than a year later he found out she'd died in childbed."

"That's terrible!" Will exclaimed, clearly horrified. Clearly thinking of Elizabeth in the same context.

"Aye," said Gibbs, his voice rough with emotion. "But I can never be sad thinking of me Jenny-bird. Those were golden days we had. Golden days."

"And Golden Nights, too, eh?" Jack smiled.

Gibbs nodded dreamily.

Will took up the bottle and sipped, then his eyes rose to the avian-adorned man opposite him at the table. "So, Cotton. You're the last of us. Can you tell us about your first time?"

"Hoist the colors!" Parrot exclaimed and cocked his head to the side. Cotton smiled and nodded.

Gibbs said, "Cotton was a slave in a sultan's palace as a lad. The ladies of the harem took a liking to him and 'twas almost more pleasure than a body could endure."

"A surfeit of riches, in fact?" Norrington looked bemused.

"Cotton had the luck—" Gibbs began.

"Splice the mainbrace!" Parrot confirmed.

"—'til it ran out and they took his tongue!"

"Using it for something other than talking perchance, Mr. Cotton?" Jack asked, looking sly.

Cotton inclined his head, and made some motions suggestive of feminine royalty.

"By the saints! Ye don't mean the sultan's daughter?" Gibbs exclaimed.

Cotton gave a fatalistic and somewhat rueful shrug.

Parrot squawked, ruffled his feathers, and growled, "Shiver me timbers!"

Norrington was rendered speechless.

And, taking the bottle from Will's slackened grasp, Jack said emphatically, "I'd say this calls for another drink."


~.~

Date: 2010-03-14 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hlmiwait.livejournal.com
L. O. L.

Date: 2010-03-14 02:34 am (UTC)

Praise from Willofthewisp

Date: 2010-03-14 02:45 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
All the guys sitting around and discussing sex...this is hilarious! And yet, so easy to imagine! "The blind leading the blind." I about spit out my water at that line! That's is exactly what Jack would think about two virgins getting together for the first time. I love your dialogue, so very natural and realistic. This is a discussion I can hear and envision expressions and volumes and inflections, so great job there. The stories were so in-character. This could be a much-longer R-rated series! And I have to hand it to you for getting the idea that COTTON would have the best story of all. The parrot's interjections were beautiful. Although, anything beats Will's first time (willabeth is not my cup of tea). Good one-shot!

Re: Praise from Willofthewisp

Date: 2010-03-14 04:10 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Cotton & Parrot)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I wondered if I was barking up the wrong tree when I started this, but I had to try writing it, it seemed the very thing for that prompt. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading, and for your thoughtful comments -- I appreciate them so much.

Date: 2010-03-14 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaekayelle.livejournal.com
Of them all it was Cotton who had the grandest first time -- except for the part about losing his tongue. ;-)

I love the idea of these particular men having this conversation.






Date: 2010-03-14 04:14 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Cotton & Parrot)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I love the idea of these particular men having this conversation.

Me, too, had to try to write it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for letting me know!

Date: 2010-03-14 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
"So that really was your first time? Your One Day with Elizabeth?"

Will scowled. "Only you would dare voice such a question, Jack."

Gibbs chuckled. "Aye, but we're all thinkin' it, lad." Now this is just a heckavu way to start a story--realized pretty quick it was a boys' getdown, variation on sleepover party. And that they had Jack to thank for her very happy face at the end...well, big sigh and wouldn't you have loved to been a fly in the dunes?

"Neither. She was my age, her family's land marched with that of mine. We thought we were in love." Norrington...so very dear our James, so much in that man which was denied us. I like this version of his life best, that he was able to sit and chat and enjoy love and life.

"Aye," said Gibbs, his voice rough with emotion. "But I can never be sad thinking of me Jenny-bird. Those were golden days we had." And big old "AWWWWWWW" I just love adore care for Gibbs. He's my babydoll.

And then you wily naughty stumpet! Then, what do we have but Cotton admitting to things carnel that well, enough said! And gestured. Aided and abetted by Parrot!
"Hoist the colors!" Parrot exclaimed and cocked his head to the side. Cotton smiled and nodded.

"Cotton gave a fatalistic and somewhat rueful shrug" Well, shrug indeed--such a beautiful little story to warm my piratista heart and soul. Ta, dearie!

Date: 2010-03-14 04:20 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Cotton & Parrot)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
This just begged to be written with a prompt like that. I'm so glad you enjoyed their stories! They are a wonderful bunch, our pirates, are they not?

Date: 2010-03-14 05:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gingersnapps.livejournal.com
"Oh, my God." Norrington took a deep swig.

"That's what they say, all right," Jack agreed, "though they're generally more enthused, if you get me drift."


LOVE IT!!

What a lovely, easy depiction of a pirate "locker room chat". You do so well writing dialogue fitting of each character. :-)

Date: 2010-03-14 07:23 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Gibbs by Honorat Selonnet)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this and thought it worked, particularly seeing as how you were trying so hard to let me write in peace and quiet today. *Big Hugs*

Date: 2010-03-14 07:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gingersnapps.livejournal.com
**EVEN BIGGER HUGS** back atcha!

Date: 2010-03-14 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cut-thestring.livejournal.com
LOL!! Especially at Cotton's story - what with the parrot explaining and all. Something just occurred to me- how would the parrot know? ;-)

Excellent story.

Date: 2010-03-14 07:25 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Cotton & Parrot)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
The Parrot Knows All. It's a fact.

So glad you enjoyed this! Thank you very much for reading and commenting.

Date: 2010-03-14 07:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danglingdingle.livejournal.com
Norrington drank again.

Hilarious :D

Good read through and through, made me feel very Sunday :)

Date: 2010-03-14 07:26 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Gibbs by Honorat Selonnet)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Sunday is a good feeling to have, for sure. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!

Date: 2010-03-14 10:07 am (UTC)
ext_189285: (eye)
From: [identity profile] luvvycat.livejournal.com
Great ficlet! Love the sllghtly naughty "boys being boys" aspect of this, discussing their earliest sexual conquests! (Makes one wonder what type of conversations Elizabeth might have been privy to, on the Edinburgh Trader, the first time among males with tongues and sensibilities unfettered. Must have been quite a revelation and a shock to her, to hear how men talk amongst themselves, with no women about!)

What interesting tales you've given each of them, too! Jack's week-long romp in the bawdy house (I always figured Jack to be a fast learner, and one to take the concept of "practice makes perfect" to heart when it came to matters of the bedroom.) And the hint that perhaps Norrington took a shine to Elizabeth because she reminded him of his first love. Love Gibbs' sweet, melancholy nostalgia about his lost love. *sniff* And Cotton! Woohoo! Who knew? (You know what they say -- it's always the quiet ones...) ;-)

And the idea of Jack giving Elizabeth the pre-consummation "sex talk", and counseling her in what to do with Will on their honeymoon -- quite mind-boggling (and not a little titillating)! One would have liked to be a fly on the wall during that little coaching session, eh? ;-)

And Jack -- typically poking fun at Will, making fun of his inexperience in going to his wedding bed a virgin. (Perhaps Jack should have also given Will a bit of coaching as well?) ;-)

Delightful, and a great take on the prompt! (Admittedly, lost virginity is where my wicked mind went too, when I saw this week's prompt, though I never would have conceived of the brilliant set of interwoven tales you've given us here).

Simply wonderful! A delightful (and somewhat sinful) treat! :-)

-- Cat

Date: 2010-03-14 04:32 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Will Swimming by ambayuun)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I think 'First' is an awfully good prompt, so much that can be done with it in any context, lots of First Times to be had. I hope you will favor us with one! I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and thought it worked. Slightly naughty, indeed, and much fun to write, I have to say. Thank you for reading and commenting at such length -- you are so kind to take the time to do that.

Date: 2010-03-14 10:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p0wdermonkey.livejournal.com
Such fun! I love them all sitting round chatting. And Cotton gets the last word! Now there's something you don't often see. :)

Date: 2010-03-14 04:37 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Cotton & Parrot)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I felt Cotton deserved to have the punchline to this, he's an interesting character, very steady but full of secrets and, perhaps, surprises. Glad you enjoyed! Thank you so much for letting me know -- and give those baby kitties a kiss and hug for me. So cute!!

Date: 2010-03-14 12:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amenirdis.livejournal.com
Oh Jack! You are more trouble than a whole barrel of .... I don't even know what!

As always, I love your deft touch!

Date: 2010-03-14 04:41 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! They are awfully easy to "hear" sometimes, as you know. *g*

Date: 2010-03-14 02:10 pm (UTC)
ext_299956: (Default)
From: [identity profile] orpsgod.livejournal.com
Thoroughly enjoyable! So glad you gave us the glimpse into the 'boys' little chat. And each 'first' fitting the bearer perfectly. Thank you for posting. :)

Date: 2010-03-14 04:44 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Gibbs by Honorat Selonnet)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! Thank you very much for reading and commenting. :)

Date: 2010-03-14 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hendercats.livejournal.com
Bravo! Great fun, listening in as they compare notes. Delightful sweetness in spots (Norrington's sweetheart, Gibbs' Jenny...), and a marvelous finish with Cotton's story!

Date: 2010-03-14 04:46 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Gibbs by Honorat Selonnet)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! Cotton deserves some excitement, he's a steady yet intriguing foil for the others, as a rule. I'm so glad you liked this, and I'm very happy it worked as well as it did, I was really wondering when I started writing it. *g*
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Date: 2010-03-14 04:53 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Gibbs by Honorat Selonnet)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I love Gibbs, too, and I love to use my Gibbs icon (art by [livejournal.com profile] honorat, so this worked out nicely. Yes, him and his Jenny-bird -- [livejournal.com profile] linaelyn's story is too right for them. Thank you for reading and commenting -- most appreciated!

Date: 2010-03-14 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elissali.livejournal.com
oh! That was hysterical! Very entertaining. :)

Date: 2010-03-14 05:05 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Gibbs by Honorat Selonnet)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!

Date: 2010-03-14 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] felaine.livejournal.com
*FALLS OVER DEAD WITH LAUGHING*
Felaine

Date: 2010-03-14 05:23 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Gibbs by Honorat Selonnet)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
:D

Thank you!!

Date: 2010-03-14 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puddytat1972.livejournal.com
I loved this! It had me chuckling and laughing all he way through.
Good ol' Mr. Cotton!

Date: 2010-03-14 07:44 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Cotton & Parrot)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
So happy to have brightened your day! Thank you very much for commenting. :)

Date: 2010-03-14 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] viva-lla-gloria.livejournal.com
LOL, I love this! I could perfectly picture this scene and everyone is so in character. I especially liked the glimpse into Gibbs' past since it's not something we hear about all that often.

Date: 2010-03-14 07:46 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Gibbs by Honorat Selonnet)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I must say it was pretty easy to "hear" them all when I was writing this. *g* I love [livejournal.com profile] linaelyn's take on Gibbs' past, it's established fanon, as far as I'm concerned. Thank you so much for commenting!

Date: 2010-08-06 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-happy.livejournal.com
*dies of laughing*

That's brilliant. Cotton's parrot, Jack talking to Elizabeth, Norrington being Norrington.

Oh Jack. LOL.

You get their voices perfectly. I am in awe :-D

Date: 2010-08-08 04:00 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (PotC - Gibbs by Honorat Selonnet)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you! That was a fun story to write. Sometimes they are just really easy to "hear".

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