dwgm: Kimi Birds (PotC -Teague by wapiti_baris)
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The Muse woke up with a drabble yesterday, inspired by the new 'Vote' prompt at [livejournal.com profile] blackpearlsails. With thanks to [livejournal.com profile] hereswith for looking it over, here's 175 words of post-AWE babysitting...



~ Lady's Night Out ~


“I know! Let’s put it to a vote!” cried Jamie, dancing away, Elizabeth’s son having grown recalcitrant regarding bedtime (among other things) since he’d turned five and was (in his opinion, at least) his own man.

“Oh no, we won’t,” said Jack, patience at an end. “You’ll obey orders and that’s that. This ain’t a democracy, you miscreant brat.” And he grabbed Jamie before he could bolt entirely and tossed the boy over his shoulder, none too gently.

Jamie kicked and squealed. “Let me go! I’ll tell my mother!”

“You bloody do that,” Jack growled, and glared at Gibbs and Teague, both of them laughing as he hauled the boy off.

Somewhat later, on Jack’s return, Teague was still chuckling. Jack remarked, acidly, “Oh, it’s that funny, is it?”

“Watching you get your own again?” Teague grinned. “It’s priceless, Jackie. Priceless!”

And seeing the past in Teague’s eyes—Jack’s precocious young self as happy prince of his buccaneer family, before his mother had died—Jack had to smile, too.

~.~
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Date: 2011-03-31 01:51 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - WTF?)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Very true. Thank you so much for commenting!

Date: 2011-03-25 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharklady35.livejournal.com
This rings so true. I can easily believe Jack wasn't the most obedient kid- in fact, he must've been a little hell-raiser who'd put Bart Simpson in the shade!

Date: 2011-04-01 02:09 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I bet you're right. Some very!youngJack fic might be fun.

Thank you so much for commenting, I really appreciate it.

Date: 2011-03-25 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] just-a-dram.livejournal.com
Oh, I love this. It made me smile.

Date: 2011-04-01 02:10 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm so glad. Thank you for letting me know.

Date: 2011-03-25 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artaxastra.livejournal.com
Oh fun! I like this!

Date: 2011-04-01 02:12 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
It's a fun universe, even after all these years. Thank you for commenting!

Date: 2011-03-25 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gingersnapps.livejournal.com
Aawww...very sweet! I enjoy seeing this softer side of Teague. And I'm sure Jack was the Dennis The Menace of his age! ;^)

Date: 2011-04-01 02:12 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
I'm sure you're right about Jack. Thank you so much for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2011-03-25 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anonymous-plume.livejournal.com
Oh, god this was precious. I totally love this. Family!Pirates. :D

Date: 2011-04-01 02:15 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
It even says it in the song...

We're beggars and blighters, ne'er-do-well cads,
Drink up, me 'earties, yo ho.
Aye, but we're loved by our mommies and dads,
Drink up, me 'earties, yo ho.

Thank you so much for commenting!

Date: 2011-04-01 03:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anonymous-plume.livejournal.com
ahhh!! hahaha that's darling!!

Date: 2011-03-25 07:48 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-04-01 02:15 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-03-25 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorat.livejournal.com
Awww! Babysitter Jack! Isn't karma grand! This snippit of pirate domestic life is great fun.

Date: 2011-04-01 02:16 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Forgive the lateness of my reply. I'm so happy you liked it!

Date: 2011-03-25 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] florencia7.livejournal.com
lol I loved this! ^^ Wonderful drabble! :)

Date: 2011-03-25 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
perfect logo miz flo!

Date: 2011-03-26 03:46 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-04-01 02:16 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-03-25 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlseed.livejournal.com
Lord love a duck, miz gma2, you done broke my heart of happiness! What a funny little bit of life--from Jack's growling collection of the wild and rambling boy, the boy's gonna tell my mama and Teague's total enjoyment of the lovely cycle of life! I'm thinkin' there were probably some caterwauling haul-tos in Jack's case, and Jamie's mama not likely to tell her darlin' one no too frequently. How delightful! Making my early Friday weekend rat nice. Thanks!

Date: 2011-04-01 02:18 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Forgive the lateness of my reply. I'm so happy you enjoyed this little snippet of pirate family life. Thank you very much for commenting!

Date: 2011-03-26 12:11 am (UTC)
ext_18053: (teagueseawolf)
From: [identity profile] djarum99.livejournal.com
Lovely :-)

Date: 2011-04-01 02:18 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-03-26 02:16 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-04-01 02:19 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Hee!


Thank you for commenting!

Date: 2011-03-26 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackpoetcat.livejournal.com
Uncle Jack, hu? *giggles*

Such nice thought! And especially with the boy's name, ´cause James would laugh about Jack's "fate", too, of that I'm certain.

Date: 2011-04-01 02:21 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
James would certainly be amused, and gratified, too, that he has a namesake. Thank you so much for commenting!

Date: 2011-03-26 03:10 pm (UTC)
ext_189285: (beastie)
From: [identity profile] luvvycat.livejournal.com
LOL! Oh, Jack! Teague is right. The chickens have well and truly come home to roost, haven't they? "Uncle Jack" may only be a surrogate father to Jamie, but he's still learning what it is to walk in his own father's shoes when it comes to having to deal with a "miscreant brat"! ;-D

Love this one to bits! Utterly precious (as well as, to quote Teague "Priceless!"). :-)

-- Cat


Date: 2011-04-01 02:20 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, ma'am, I'm glad you were amused by this snippet of pirate family life.

Date: 2011-03-28 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] were-lemur.livejournal.com
Both sweet and silly. :)

Date: 2011-04-01 02:19 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
As it should be. ;) Thank you so much for commenting!

Date: 2011-07-05 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crownglass39.livejournal.com
Oh this is cute! I can just picture young Jack being a little...well...brat!

Date: 2011-07-18 12:41 am (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Jack - FTW! by Sepira)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Please forgive the lateness of my reply, I am so happy you enjoyed that drabble! I, too, can picture young Jack, all too well!

Thank you very much for commenting.

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