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Must zoom out to doing shopping and a movie and dinner somewhere, but first wanted to post one more piratey drabble for 2004...



Out of the Shadows




Deep in shadow he sat, staring out at the forest of masts. Breathing steady, eyes dry. Just cold, now, with anger, mostly. And with loss piled on loss.

Matthew Deveral, Master Cartographer. Jack cursed, and set his teeth. He'd finished taking abuse from a master now less skilled than himself! That was part of the problem, of course, though knowing it made no difference.

But Captain Murphy knew, too. That might make a difference.

Jack rose and stepped into the thin Bristol sunshine. Time to see if the Captain was a man of his word, and leave the shadows behind.


~.~

Date: 2004-12-31 06:47 pm (UTC)
ext_15536: Fuschias by Geek Mama (Sparrow Sleeping by inevendim)
From: [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. I enjoy trying to get them down to 100 words. I cut a bunch from this one--it started at 137!

I truly appreciate the feedback.

I need to go read your new one now.

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