Drabble and a Half: 'Snow'
Mar. 23rd, 2007 03:04 pmThis is a little more W/E -- on the way to World's End -- for prompt 67 on the
fanfic100 table ("Snow") and also for the current challenge at Black Pearl Sails ("Trunk").
67. Snow
Ice began to slide by them in the frigid water. When the first flakes of snow began to fall, Will said to Elizabeth, "Come below. There's no use freezing when you're not on watch."
"No. Not now. I need to stay." She stood silent at the rail, looking out at the vast ocean, hugging herself against the cold.
Barbossa beckoned Will. "There's a trunk in the aft hold," he said quietly. "Fetch 'er something."
It was of oriental design, rosewood bound with brass and, on opening it, Will discovered it full of fur rugs and capes. He took the finest of them for her.
With a brief nod to Barbossa, Will placed the cape, warm and soft, around Elizabeth's slender shoulders.
"Oh! Thank you!" She turned to him.
Her smile, the first they’d exchanged in days, dazzled him, and his heart ached for love-- and for what might have been.
~.~
67. Snow
Ice began to slide by them in the frigid water. When the first flakes of snow began to fall, Will said to Elizabeth, "Come below. There's no use freezing when you're not on watch."
"No. Not now. I need to stay." She stood silent at the rail, looking out at the vast ocean, hugging herself against the cold.
Barbossa beckoned Will. "There's a trunk in the aft hold," he said quietly. "Fetch 'er something."
It was of oriental design, rosewood bound with brass and, on opening it, Will discovered it full of fur rugs and capes. He took the finest of them for her.
With a brief nod to Barbossa, Will placed the cape, warm and soft, around Elizabeth's slender shoulders.
"Oh! Thank you!" She turned to him.
Her smile, the first they’d exchanged in days, dazzled him, and his heart ached for love-- and for what might have been.
~.~
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Date: 2007-03-25 04:02 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-03-25 04:07 am (UTC)I'm now having trouble with the ending of it. Really, Weatherby and Estrella.
That, and I'm burned out on writing from work.
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Date: 2007-03-25 04:25 am (UTC)(BTW, are you so burned out you wouldn't be interested in submitting a couple of clips and a resume to my editor? He mentioned something about wanting writers in the eastern part of the state, and I brought you up again.)
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Date: 2007-03-25 04:37 am (UTC)Does he only want agriculture stories? I haven't written one of those in a couple of years. *bites nails*
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Date: 2007-03-25 04:40 am (UTC)Don't worry - when I started 5 years ago, I'd never written ag before and had to teach myself. And now I work at the damn place! LOL
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Date: 2007-03-25 04:42 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-03-25 04:53 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-03-25 05:01 am (UTC)And, yes, I understand it's freelance. I'm looking for work elsewhere, but anything extra will be very welcome.
Thanks!
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Date: 2007-03-25 05:30 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-03-25 05:31 pm (UTC)